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Great story! Something I would like to do, just don’t have the finances! A few typos, most innocuous, though I can't work out what "white buttons abdominal the beds" is supposed to be! I am assuming some sort of autocorrect! Thanks

Also a late arrival to this story so I missed the "gap year"! Frankly if that counselor mentioned anything to anyone they would be well and truly up to their arse in alligators as well as unemployed. If these girls behaviour is steroetypical, I am bloody glad I went to an all boys school!

If Jackson doesnt explode soon, he is not human! Between his mother, that appalling Allie, angst over his sexuality, Garrisons who treat him as a piece of swiming meat, the man has more pressure than a fire hose! Nothing like settingbthe scene!

Belated comment, but I am not sure that Jackson's parents are that good at parenting. The storyline suggests they have gone from hands off to total control in one step...for an 18 year old! Jackson is a bit of a juvenile, however locking him up is not a way to change behaviour. Great story and paintball does seem to have done some good....

Sometimes having a partner enables you to be yourself... Great read, a few typos, but nothing the affects the story. Having sailed a bit in my life, I hate catamarans!😉 but i know there are many that don’t take my advice!!! Hope it works well for them. Thanks

My lord graingers talent (let alone penchant) for picking up the young and eligible is truly amazing. He seems to excel at finding "cherubs" in a manner that is simply not taught in these more liberated times. Makes one pine for the past despite the lack of analgesia or penicillin. While I do not anticipate Graingers incarceration, i am glad he secured a plan for Winkler et al. That said I cannot imagine Mr arbour will let Grainger and Daventry off scot free in their tangle with the Tsar/Czar. I think we may need to know more about the Tsarevitch, especially if he has friends like our beef caserole (Stroganov). Thank you Mr Arbour for again making my day!

Well that was a start! Nothing like a dramatic opening. Look forward to more....

looks interesting and what's more, well written! I have never been to Sth Africa, though my children's mother was born there (Durban). I'll get there one day!

For some reason I lost this story and have only now just caught up. What an amazing ending! I do hope there is more .... please!

A beautiful story wonderfully told. May we all live such fullfilled lives. Thank you.

Colts grudge against his best friend, Sam, who didnt respond well to his coming out suggests a bigger problem. His "its all about me and what you done to me" doesnt reek stable maturity. That conversation could have gone a lot better, even if it had the same outcome. I dare say small town 'merica like small town everywhere has its was of working, its different, but is not wrong, and in my experience it does adapt to new and different if its allowed to adapt. Hitting it with a stick and expecting them to all wake up twinkly eyed to your way of thinking is juvenile and say more about the "outsider" than it does about the locals. Well, that was an extraordinary rant for this hour of the morning! I suppose it hit a nerve (sign of good writing) whjch in my case had a much better outcome. Thanks for the story.

But a quality that just isnt human...which is why our characters embody it! 😂

This court is a larger nest of more dangerous vipers than even the Court of StJames! Grainger's feelings at the sudden departure of von Beckendorf and how he felt he had compartmentalised them to deal with later, yet not realising until Davenport pointed it out, that they hadnt been put to bed as it were, at all, was really well done. I am not sure our hero realises quite to the extent he has bonded with the german. Hopefully he will realise it so it doesnt trip him up. It does say something about Russia in that era that while a huge number of people seem to want Grainger's Vozok, it doesnt seem to occur to anyone to get another one built....

Both. 🤗

Read this if you like good prose, with excellent characters who live life to the full and beyond in a historical setting, where history is not completely upended. Enjoyable, exciting, informative, with sexy-as-hell moments thrown in!

A great reunion! Seeing this other side of Davenport, the needy self absorbed side when he feels all is lost is quite funny. That banter with Grainger whose arrival had just restored Davenports plans was quite funny. Bickersdorf's jealousy betray just how much he thinks of Grainger. I suspect the feelings on Graingers side are more utilitarian! Great to have our man back. I see intrigue in the next few chapters....

All right, if you insist...the authors stays ! Apologies!

Interesting that they all decide "the intern" goes. All hed need to do is suggest Gabriel stays and he leaves. The powers that be would quickly find a solution....

The development of multiple strands is fascinating! People having sex in the office: somehow its never the young/pretty/handsome ones....😶

He sort of has to be, given the number of positions Mr Arbour manages to get him into! I'd rather like helping dear George in and out of his positions..... 😍😉

"A very unholy sexual extravaganza"! Wonderful phrase! How equally wonderful it is to be back with dear George as he fornicates his way across western Russia! It would seem that the two of them make a great team in so many ways. I do pity our heros having to draft the letter to the Tsar; having drafted many such balancing letters for my political masters, I know just how hard it is to get right. I wish him inspirational luck! Thank you again Mr Arbour for entertaining me yet again with your skills... i greedily look forward to more!

Well done! Neat scene. Revenge; a dish best served cold!

Loving this! You have very mentally healthy characters in my opinion. The whole "conversion" conversation.... Great reading. Thanks

And further down the rabbit hole.....😃 Or Walking along a two sided precipice not knowing who is going to fall wich way.... My breath be 'bated!

Very funny... but where are we going? Rabbit hole, methinks! Fun writing...intriguing! Thanks