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That's an awful lot of religion for you...
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I get this feeling that Kyles Dad may not be the complete arsehole Kyle thinks he would be. At the moment Kyles dad has no expnanation why his youngest got into such strife apart from "fell into wrong crowd". While he may be angry and upset at the truth, he would also gain some understanding and accept that while his youngest is not the complete failure he thought, his eldest son is not the complete angel either.
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@Wesley8890, yes agree wholeheartedly. @Rigby Taylor, you have persuaded me that my way forward is as a pessimist... so Laslo is going to be a russian spy/homocidal maniac, with at least three STIs. He's also the brother in law of a woman who "inherited" a domed art gallery before she was done away with and this b-i-l is trying to find anyone who could be the perpertrator.... close?🤔 The other thing this story proves that in the right hands money is a universal good.... Keep on, this journey is fascinating/riveting!😍
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Families are verymessy, but running through them there is usually something that at various times pulls them together. Wierd and amazing things.... Glad Adam is gay. Me lusting after another straight bloke would be just plain sad! Great story....
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Clarence, Violet & Inesh
Canuk commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Clarence, Violet & Inesh
Well, I did think trouble was brewing, but organ fonation (involuntary) was not on my list of possibilities! Our Frankie certainly has Shiva/luck on his side. I do hope there is some point in the future that Frankie does find someone that does what him for himself, and not his sex/body/body parts... please?😆 Now, the 'plane or more indian adventures?🤔😮 -
Great story! Love the house/home thing.... its not a size thing 🙃 despite the "all things going smoothly" I sense a "But"....
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You really are trying to turn me into a pessimist - the dark/bad side of everything! I will persist, however! The architecture is rather great, however it does become mind numbing. It helps to know the story/characters being depicted (same with medieval stained glass in the cathedrals of UK/Europe) otherwise it is all either seen as "decoration" or simply overwhelming. I really hope Frankie is fine.... please?
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Exactly!! Once having read several of @Rigby Taylor stories, you just know "happiness" and unicorn farts are about as equally in abundance!!
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Scary parallels to my Swiss bloke 40 yaers ago! What a bastard Lucien turned out to be! I really did imagine he was going to see the light and actually "get it"; its the eternal optimist/Mr Micawber in me! Karma certainly caught up with him... Yet again, Frankie's natural ability to make friends, to think quickly and work with people served him well. I just feel sorry that while he has learned at lot, he hasn' t yet found what he's looking for. He gets more and more interesting as the story develops. Thanks.
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Fascinating question; generally Australia has been about a decade behind Canada. Two exceptions - women's right to vote - Australia was about 20 years ahead of Canada, and Flag/anthem issues - Canada "naturalised" its flag in 1965 and the anthem around the same time. Australia left the flag debate too late, and I recall the hideous debate around a series of equally bad songs to become the national anthem... on voting- Canada is so far behind Australia its embarrassing.
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I thought you had given him dysentry, which would not have been good for either of them. Interesting drug, cannabis is now legal here in Canada, and while there is a lot of snake oil talk around its properties, it does seem to work wonders on general aches that come with ageing, and with those prone to seizures. Frankie is such a pragmatist; "get better, because its less chaos than if you die"! 👏good read!
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too good, on so many levels. excellent writing. thanks...
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Self-Fulfilling Prophecy
Canuk commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Self-Fulfilling Prophecy
Wrong choice!😆 But certainly understandable; Ky's self confidence really took a vacation at the worst possible time. God I love Adam.... sigh.... Thanks very enjoyable. Love the dialogue, smart and pacey! -
Great story, well written. Emotional, eithical and moral isues raised and dealt with in a story with beautifully crafted characters in an engaging storyline. Highly recommended.
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Beautiful story that included great sadness ( including the Yankees losing!) How do we "cure" religous bigotry? The benefits if we could are almost unimaginable. Thanks
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Lucien is a very sad character, and probably a representative of a lot of men. While I really hope there is more to him than what we have seen, and that at some point he does wake up to what he is missing, it is more likely (especially given his creator!) that he will remain one of the lost-without-knowing-it, forever looking for his own satisfaction/happiness and never quite understanding that there is a mutual aspect to it. I was given some advice early on; if you love your partner more than you think they love and care for you AND they love you more than they think you love and care for them, you will always be able to communicate and enjoy each other. For me it seems to have worked for the last 19 odd years!
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As Frankie said himself, cynical or realist?
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Well that was dramatic. Not a great beliver in taking revenge (ie justice into your own hands) but when you have someone that is willing to murder their own child with a drug overdose and belt the crap out of his boy friend, even my beliefs get a little shaken. Where did he get the drug he used to murder his son? I am assuming the assassination is because even when his son woke up his memory was insufficient to indict. Glad the bastard confessed, even if it took a gun to his head. Hope David recovers. Its not going to be easy. Great read, thanks
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Frankie would be an intesting person to travel with, he wouldnt let you get away with anything. That said, I think he needs a sympathetic travelling companion. He spends so much time in his head. As for his internal debate about travel, I think this debate has been going on for ever, the difference between a tourist and a traveller. Frankie hasnt yet worked out what blend of tourist/traveller works for him. Hopefully his new travelling companion will be more successful than initial impressions would suggest. Great read, very enjoyable!
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The good thing about being in western Canada is everyone else in the world is having lunch tomorrow before we get breakfast yesterday...so you story was perfectly timed! I need say no more than @JeffreyL said, If they'd just forget yesterday long enough they would be blissfuly happy rogering each other without a care in the world! But then where would be the fun?😆😉 Thanks!
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Great chapter! There is a massive level of comfusion going on here... no ide how it gets resolved, but hopefully Artie will work it out without completely ruining his new found life. As for Adam; he needn't worry, I am here for him😍
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While what Troy has planned will be interesting, I am looking forward to what Kyle is going to say. What on earth do you say to someone you would have killed/severely damaged if they hadnt been stopped; "Sorry" would not quite cut the mustard!
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Frankies attitude to his bag being stolen was interesting and rare! Usually people get so het up by something that is usually a result of their own stupidity. A good massage is great to find. Frankie is at last finding some "me" time and being rewarded for it.
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The first few sentences of para two brought back memories, tho' in my case he was Swiss! 《Sigh》😊 And that feeling of wanting to go "home"... but not yet. I, sadly in hindsight, did return too early. Hope Frankie finds himself/gets whatever out of his sytem, so when he returns its a positive move! Thanks for the memories!
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Love the banter between Adam and Artie. Well done. Unlike others in this post, I find Dizzi interesting, but way too much like hard work. Adam on the other hand...😍😆
