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Excellent development...love these characters. And Jenn is v funny! Looking forward to more!
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Great story, really good pace too. Thanks.
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I have the same problem, and apart from my passport and my birth certificate, thrre is no record... or not much of one! Weirdly when I had a son, he got it too (as did my father, his father etc...) sad really!
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Savage writing...from experience? Must be hard to look past the illness, when the illness results in previously unsaid feelings. Carers really are saints. Thanks.
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Well, Mr Rigby Taylor you certainly manage to shock! While I should be used to the spontaneous deaths that occur in your stories, this one did take me by surprise! I loved the way you captured so many mid teen boys desperation to break from the perceived humdrum of their life into the amazing grass-is-greener alternative life they have seen or heard about. The strange thing is how many, in real life, then settle back into the humdrum they had previously left.... your stories show they don't need to (and I'd suspect, in both our cases, didn't!) Welcome back, good to read you again!
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The Roommate Situation - Shane’s POV
Canuk commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in The Roommate Situation - Shane’s POV
Nice sex! The best bit is that they can talk, say what they want of eachother...very sexy indeed Great writing. -
The police will be good in their way, however the twisted individuals who do this sort of thing are not caught by evidence and police work, they are caught by investigators who know things well enough to find the smallest of inconsistencies... I wish drew all the best. He is up against some real nasties.....
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I am generally pro-union but when they get that involved in the detail of running a business.... Then they wonder why self serve machines are introduced.
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CH18 The Big Apple and Beyond
Canuk commented on FSELL's story chapter in CH18 The Big Apple and Beyond
Me too, Australia to Canada.... 19 years ago day after tomorrow.... -
CH18 The Big Apple and Beyond
Canuk commented on FSELL's story chapter in CH18 The Big Apple and Beyond
Sometimes there's just no alternative to being where you man is.... 😍 Great chapter. Thanks -
PS I disagree with your characters contention that Cellini's Perseus is the most perfect male bronze. There are two I would put ahead of it. The Charioteer at Delphi and Poseidon or Zeus at the acropolis museum in Athens. The latter has every muscle you could wish for and a great arse. The former is the image of tranquil strength. My attraction to those two statues is that I have none of those attributes!
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Great to have you back, or probably more accurately, your writing back. Good to see you havent gone all soft and civilised on us in the break! It would be a little mind blowing to produce children that advanced, and poor Esther, after that upbringing, to produce a child like that, its not surprising she was a little off... Good to see civilisation triumph the way it usually does...a way that will result, inevitably, in the end of that civilisation. Great to read your writing again. Thanks
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Well there is the very definition of a disfunctional family....
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Not masturbating after an appendectomy? Find a new doctor! Glad they met new friends and also that said new friends will protect them from zombies! Mothers; can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em!
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I am enjoying this, however, without a defined plot and each letter dependent on the last for continuity, it sometimes makes it difficult to follow. I find myself having to reread prev letters to make sense of the current one. The bloke locking up he ran into...intriguing or a red herring? Do they actually get to meet? Or am I following this until I/you/the characters die? Given I am older than the latter three, i feel that is the most likely! Thanks.
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Great series. It is rather good when you find "the one"...sometimes in the most unexpected places! Thanks.
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great chapter - checking the photos and messages sailed bloody close to the wind...but glad it was resolved amicably. the next stage re Kevin's dad could be stressful...
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Revenge by outing someone, no matter how nasty, by filming them having sexy where consent was obtained by deception...I have a problem with that. I am all for Scott being held to account for his lengthy list of crimes and misdemeanors, but this is not the way to go about it. Really lowering yourself to his base level. Justice feels good, out and out revenge is just trouble.
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The revenge plan, or at least Paln B, seems a little light on planning. I wish them all the best, but can't see this ending well....
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Nothing like a long, winding garden path, with bliss at the end😍
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Ain't it grand that we have such an amazing author who writes characters that you can actually feel that passionate about. It certainly impresses me no end!
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Two steps forward and one step back
Canuk commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Two steps forward and one step back
Shane is a long way from perfect, but Donovan has real issues. Great writing to produce such real, damaged characters that are still likeable. -
Having caught up, I now feel I can comment! Had a great time reading this story over the last three or so days. Interesting characters and well written. Little confused by the name "Chasity"... And I have never been comfortable with the labelling of sexualities. As far as I am concerned there is straight and there is me and all people need to know is I am not straight. But that's my idiosyncracy. Great read. Thanks.
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The letters are in part an internal monologue. Interesting to see his thinking. Thanks
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The layers that build the picture are interesting. I think this will be one of those to rereead after completeion to see the changes happen and characters evolve. At the moment there is a fog around them clarified piece by piece. Thanks.
