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Let's talk about standards
Bill Christiansen commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Let's talk about standards
Great chapter, don't know if you left something out or meant to duplicate from when Donovan walks from the hospital to practice to "whiping the slate clean" .... -
We knew the end, we knew how the election ended in as a tragedy not a comedy. Well at least not in joy. Happy Holidays and Joyous New Year!
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So, I have read some of your other work. Like your storylines....Hope we don't have to wait a month for each chapter (hint) it's been a month and a day actually, but who's counting
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Keep it coming. Nice start. ... what's gonna happen to Ma and Pa... sounds like jail time?
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Reason doesn't always win
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The CJ saga continues to be amazing. The story line, the characters, the events, ... and even some open wounds we all forget are there get picked open again. I know at sometime, the saga will end, but I hope you have much more to share before you complete telling us about CJ and all the others, the good, the bad, the beautiful and the ugly... Thanks. waiting a week is so hard LOL
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Another nice chapter. I hope you get someone to proof read for slight typo and grammatical errors. Just makes reading easier. LOVE THE STORY.
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Wow, sitting waiting with baited breath for the next chapter..... been awhile since we've seen any updates
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This is my first read, and I am really enjoying the building. It took me almost 40 years to get to where Kay is.... and another 5 to say yes to that first date >>>> late bloomer anyone?
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Sorry, I was sure it said they landed at Miegs.... but I just went back and reread the section and totally stand corrected. Just finished the next chapter waiting for the story to continue !!!! thanks for sharing your talent. I've never been a good fiction writer.
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So having been from Chicago and living there for over 65 years, I want to point out that Meigs Field was closed from all operations March 2003. The runway was bulldosed and not planes can land or take off. Just a minor point to the chapter. The story line continues to keep me coming back keep up the great work.
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Julie could meddle my life anytime as long as it's as positive . Another good chapter. Keep them comin.
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Yes, a very high wall is needed indeed....
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Really enjoying the story. Very readable and the emotion is coming through .... I am glad no one was injured and yeah homophobia is a bitch, but it's not just in small towns.... Can I suggest you get someone to just proof read little things like a missing word or the use of They'er, There Their.....
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I always wait impatiently for the next chapter.... lol, I almost went back to rereading the repost on CRVBOY of Summer . I hope we all hear Bret we all need to be ready to stand against bullying. I get emails everyday from It Gets Better and I can say it will get better when our community does what CJ did and stand for equality against the bully. Good job again. Keep writing.
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If Jose Marie allows his cousin to go forward, he's so not the friend we've thought he was. I know we're at the cliff hanger, but I am a little disturbed that he didn't shout NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! at his cousin.
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EB Wilson's Team Building
Bill Christiansen replied to Irritable1's topic in Stories Discussion Forum
Just finished reading ... I always hate when a good read comes to an end...and hope maybe a sequel is hiding in the wings.? -
Enjoying the read, but could I suggest you get someone to proof read and maybe edit for you. Peace for piece, really? and bunch of other minors that would improve your story.
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How can you end the story with a cliffhanger.... It's like Dallas and HOW SHOT JR? but worse.
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So, really enjoying all the twist, turns and such, but dude please please get someone to proof read for you. It' make reading really hard when there are so many just "typo" type errors in the copy. EXCELLENT read for story.
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I've been reading the story from the very start and enjoy it a lot. I have had several horses over the years and I showed some in A hunter/jumper shows, so yeah... like it. This is a cut and paste from the CDC's website on meningitis.... you might want to change some of the discussion in chapter 2 about recovery time.... Treatment There is no specific treatment for viral meningitis. Antibiotics do not help viral infections, so they are not useful in the treatment of viral meningitis. Most patients completely recover on their own within 7 to 10 days. A hospital stay may be necessary in more severe cases or for people with weak immune systems.
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Thanks for a great adventure and for all your research and hard work and love you have put into Circumnavigation. It's been great. I hope there is a follow up coming or at least some other works to keep us reading! Well Done, Bravo!
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Epilogue - Samuel Franklin Austin
Bill Christiansen commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Epilogue - Samuel Franklin Austin
I'm sad to see it end, but it's been a wonderful journey. Could we only hope with the ending of DOMA and the setting aside Prop 8 that world peace (omg I said it) and some of Sammy's vision can come true. Thanks and yes, I'll sit down and help Sammy eat that blood rare steak. LOL -
Confronting the Future - David Reynolds
Bill Christiansen commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Confronting the Future - David Reynolds
I have to admit it.... I'm a person that cries.... and this weeks chapter has brought several moments of watery eyes... Well written and a good storyline.... thanks. -
so I am a wondering if there is a sequel awaiting in the love story of Tevor and Shane?
