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I have enjoyed several of your stories and am enjoying this one too. I have noticed that a lot of your characters "sway their heads" I can visualize nodding, shaking, turning, ducking & so on, but not swaying of the head. Bart

I have been following your stories for quite a while and I don't think I ever read one with so many errors in grammar, tense or that had to be read several times before it made sense. Even with these flaws, I still enjoy your work.

This is without a doubt one of the best stories I have ever read. Wildly different from anything else, impossible to predict what comes next, hugely humorous. I loved the amusing names given to some characters, but Procura Tahrt is the perfect name for a MADAM. I definitely laughed out loud. I doubt you will be able to top this one, but I'll stay tuned to your efforts. Sincerely, Bart

A great story and I am enjoying it. I'm just wondering why in the dialog there is no he said, she said. Everything is, he let out, she forced out.

Great chapter, full of humor and other titillating activities.

This is one of the best I have read in years. I found myself smiling through most of the story. Well written, wonderful humor and an overall feel good piece. A job very well done Robert, it's hard to believe this is your first story. Sincerely, Bart

This is without a doubt the strangest, most unusual story I've ever read. It latched onto my curiosity and dragged me from chapter to chapter until I was finished reading and now I miss it's difference and humor. Great work.

This is the best chapter, out of many really good ones. I have enjoyed the "snowflake,snowplow, snowballs" banter all along, but the humor in this one and Snowflakes' description of what he is seeing is absolutely hilarious. Bart

This is a great story, I have enjoyed each chapter and always try to mark the "liked" button, but I am often told I have reached my quota for the day. Never have found what the quota is or how it is determined, but know you would have received more from me had I been allowed. Bart

I read this story quite a while ago and just re- read it. It's a great, fantastic work that cries for completion. Make it your New Year's resolution, PLEASE??

I really like this story and especially this chapter, however, I seem to use up all my alloted "like" votes too soon. I'm an avid reader and since I wanted to let you know I would have given you a "like" for this one, I wasn't able to. Bart

I just recently discovered this story and read through to Chapter 26. What I found is an extremely well written, exciting tale with a nice touch of humor added. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Well done LieLocks.

I really like the story, but it's very difficult to read when your space bar only works occasionally.