AnytaSunday

Well, I joined GA because I was looking for help with writing gay characters. Then I fell for the place--lots of great stories and talented authors and, above all, some of the nicest people I've met! Also, my husband thinks the site is great and likes that I write and submit stories here. He's also particularly impressed with how much people (esp. my beta reader ) supports each other here.

Heya Stu, That was a really fun chapter. I love the hint at the visions--that adds a helluva lot of tension to the upcoming conflict. Sarala made me laugh--I like her and Dan's interactions. She's fun. The whole using energy thing from food and such--Great excuse to eat naughty high calorie goodness. The 'practice' with Matt and Dan was great--it added to the story with their weapons/skills practice, but had a nice amount of playful hotness to it. I certainly appreciate that, lol. The skim over their love-making worked fine here--the scene was way more about their emotions and the caring/loving side comes through nicely the way you wrote it. Laste comment: three games of monopoly??? How long were they playing. That game takes forever. LOL. Thanks for the read!

Ahhh, okay, West Coast Dude, I take full responsibility for that slip in grammar. That was meant to be something I should have caught! Guess I was too mixed up in the emotions of this wonderful chapter to fully focus. I just loved the end--I was a very, very happy 'un to read it. Andy, thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful story with us. You're simply the best! *dances.

Hey, this sounds like a great idea! I would love to write maybe a short story for this(if I find the time). Only, my problem is, I don't have much experience with deaf people. I have had friends with hearing difficulties but not deaf. Um, I guess I would like to write a story and will try research as much as possible, but I would hate to slip up in some way without realizing and unconsciously offend in some way, ekkk! As for stories, have you read 'St Nacho's' but Z.A Maxfield? That is a story about one deaf guy and a musician. Parts of the story I really liked (it may be slightly on the 'too much sex' side, but overall it's good). All the best for this competition here then.

Depends on the maturity of both involved. But it has to be legal.

Ohhh, looks like I'm not the first this time, LOL So, shit! how cool was that chappy? Yeah, pretty cool--many conflicts foreshadowed here. I hate it (in a good reader way) that there is yet another obstacle between Blake and Haze, namely the pressure from Haze's mum not to F-up the only thing he seems to be doing right, i.e the relationship... Hmmm, can imagine that will make progression between the two of them more challenging. I'm so looking forward to meeting the girlfriend though, this will be interesting... Poor Nats. I totally feel her embarrassment, and yes, I imagine it's easy to think it's something wrong with yourself when so rejected. I liked that they had a good friendly moment though, before that. It was honest--I hope they can recover from this and establish a friendship. And... really hanging out for some more Haze and Blake interaction. I want a glimpse of that spark between them again! I want to see how they work together to help eachother. Like the chapter title, too. hehe. Hmmm, you know what? I'm really not liking that xbox of yours now--I soooo want the next chappy asap. LOL, jk. I'll be the patient angel I always am.

The Doors. OMG, love it!!! hehe. Thanks for sharing your story. It's quite morose.

I agree with Maria and Andy. This is a wonderfully written, poignant piece. It's also very depressing, because the honesty in the words make this so real. And it IS real. Uh, my gut has just sunk really low after reading this. It's amazing that your writing has done that. Beautiful words, wonderful pacing. I will look out for more stories of yours. Thanks for sharing.

Go Frosty, yeah. I enjoyed reading your first story. I say, keep up the writing. I'm curious to see other works of yours.

Yeehaa! This is a great chapter. Okay, so I was super curious at one little grammar thingy (because I never heard your opinion on it ) So I was being a queen Minx to check out how you decided to handle it, LOL. It thrilled me to see how you did it. You know what I'm on about. hehe. Yeah, the writing feels tight in this chappy. Awesome work! I know just how glad you were to get this one done, too! Though, I remember feeling a bit sad reading this, because it was the last unseen chapter of this story. Of course good things must come to an end eventually, but it's just been such an adventure and so much fun to read this and explore Jason and Pete's (and a bit of family) relationship. Keep rocking those keys of yours!!! Looking forward to reading the response to the final chappy too. Oki doki!

Yes, yes, have a lovely day!!! Happy B.day!

I honestly don't know what you're looking for in response to this, but I'll share a quick thought: Yes, getting reviews and responses from one's readership is extremely encouraging to an author that puts in a lot of time to create a story to post online for free. Personally, I think if you want to be reviewed, there is an element of 'tit for tat'. That is, if an author writes reviews highlighting what they did like/what could be more improved on, it is LIKELY that their name will be seen more in reviews and other people will check out their stories in response. Of course, it can never be 100% tit for tat--because there just isn't enough time in the day to keep things even. Still, putting yourself out there by doing what you wish to be done for yourself will help to boost up the author's reviews. Why do I put my stories up? I've never claimed writing is just for me. I WANT people to read and more than that, I want people to like what I wrote. HOWEVER, I am fully aware that writing is a process--there is so much to the craft and it takes years to hone those skills. Why I appreciate people's reviews/constructive criticism, is that it helps me to develop myself as a writer--but also at the same time encourages one not to give up. Having beta-readers and editors will only help with a story being seen too, as quite often a good crit partner will promote the other's writing too. Also, open up a discussion thread. Show that you're interested in what happens with this story, try and engage with the readers. That will help too. Um, yeah. But my note to all beginning authors: Don't give up. It can be hell hard writing--but if you keep working at it and allow yourself to be open to learn--you're more likely to get there.

Cool places, peeps! Because I don't know how to put a picture up here (yes, I'm that lame), I have a link to my gallery which shows my root home in Wellington. https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/gallery/image/3451-wellington/ This other one is a snapshot of Berlin during the Soccer World Cup: (Brandenburger Tor) https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/gallery/image/3450-p1010449/ Hope the pics work. If they don't here's a pic of Wellington: http://www.furnituremovers.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2009/04/wellington.jpeg And here is where I am in Berlin: http://hottest-host.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/Ferienunterkunft-Berlin-Friedrichshain1.jpg

Not always. IDK, I think it's something more and more discussed in relationships and decided upon together. LOL--sure, sometimes that's the case too. BUT, also the guy can be the one dropping the hints. It works both ways. Mine is dropping hints at wanting to renew our vows at our tenth anniversary. He keeps pointing out wedding dresses and saying how good I'd look in it. Haha. He's not so subtle, actually. Anyway, I don't think there needs to be any 'rules' around proposing.

You're welcome. More hugs.

Maria, thanks for reading on. I wish the story only made you happy, dear. Sorry, though, because I think it also made you a little blue, huh. Hugs.

Certainly wouldn't be something to rush into, but if my feelings were strong enough for the person, I would. Of course, taking precautions and using protection are a must. Also communication, talking about it and doing research are all essential too for beforehand.

LMAO, hahaha, that is funny.

Maria--Thanks for reading and leaving such a lovely review. Yeah, Benny is blind as a bat in this instance, LOL. Well, I think we all have moments like that sometimes, haha. hehe.

Congrats peeps!!! You've all worked so hard for it, and the banners look awesome, btw.

Heya Andy, Was just off to bed when I thought 'I bettcha Andy's posted a blog' and voila. So be that the case, LOL. hehe. One) Wow, this is soooo exciting. Every day, every week and it's getting closer. You're gonna be a dad!!! It'll change your life forever. Two) Well now, ain't he a silly judge. Three) I think it's sad anyone would do this to you. Oki-doki, let's hope the rest of your day picks up. Focus on the baby thing. That's sweet as.

Whoa, I certainly was not expecting THAT, now. Yes, I got the feeling he might get angry bouts after the conversation they had on the sanddune, but I really wasn't expecting it to be quite so much. Actually, when Haze first admitted it was him, I thought he was covering for his 'dad' who may have done it in a fit about not being able to see his son/able to convince Haze to acknowledge him or something. But I get carried away there, because before the shocker ending (all very well written, you know), I loooooved the interaction between the two boys. This was soooooo sweet. The whole Haze made sandwiches to bring along to a picnic for them and the driving lessons. Loved it. I can't wait to see how this plays out. I want to know why /what prompted Haze's lash-out. Want to know what the mystery is with his father. I reckon, though can't be sure, there may be a connection there. Also, curious how the town will talk about it. AND really super interested in how these two souls will help each other and how their relationship develops... This was a very enjoyable read. Thanks for that. Keep up the awesome writing. Can't wait to see more. Big smiles.

Yeah, I agree with Nephy's assessment there. This felt very dark and gave me goosebumps. The images that came to my mind were incredibly sharp and had an effect. In my mind, poetry that can make me feel a particular emotion is good poetry. This one did. Thanks for sharing

Cheers, Tiger! Glad I could provide some entertainment--and that the story turned out as you liked. Yay. Sweet, hope you enjoy others too.

Ohhh, stuff's a brewing. It's been a while since I popped in to leave a review, so I thought I'd drop a line. Nice how Peter and Jason respect the Grandparents' rules. My fav part of this chappy is the end scene--I just think it's spot on. Really feel tension building... My-oh-my whatever will happen next??? Again, since I've read the chappy, I thought just to skim it, but then parts just draw me right into it again and I'm properly reading! That's how awesome this is. Sweet, so, will you be posting more regularly from here on out? Bet many are wondering the same thing. hehe.