Andrew Q Gordon

I cheated and opened the door first?

Oh no, the shopping isn't going to be exactly like you think. **runs and hides from Chey** -- -- As for the Peter/Jason insecurity contest - It's interesting you put it that Jason is more secure that Peter. You're the first person to see it. Peter projects, needs to be in control of himself and surroundings. Jason on the other hand has fewer hang ups like that because his life has had fewer upheavals. Dad never ran off, no one outted him in HS, he's not worried about school - well he wasn't until he met Peter . Wait til you meet Hurricane Barbara - you're gonna love her. Thanks for reading and for the comments -

OMG THAT's SO easy: There's just one choice: Ducati I really like this one . Sigh, Mike gave me a choice, a motorcycle or a child. Guess everyone knows which one I picked.

After I post this, I'll need 22 more posts for the coveted and completely arbitrary 1000 posts. [including Games and Humor posts that don't count for some things but show up on your profile page counter. Since that is higher, I'mma gonna go with that.] Since I am flat out of smart, witty, insightful comments, I'm gonna cheat and start this topic. I'm sure this isn't worthy of a Mark Arbour 'cheat' but I'm working on it, Mark. Feel free to say or ask anything - while I don't promise to answer every question truthfully, I will respond to them, even if it's to just be evasive. So help a sister out and fire away. I wish I had a prize to give away for whomever's post leads to 1000. Maybe I write your name into Purpose in an upcoming chapter.

No comment - a certain someone in my house doesn't think it prudent to discuss our bedroom activities on line - Mike doesn't think it's such a good idea either

Why sadly??? I'm happy - you embarrass me at times with how much you liked this.

First the bad news, the contractions don't really get better for another 8 or so chapters, that's when someone started to read/beta for me. Perhaps I'll go back and fix those one day very soon. Shouldn't take too much time go tweak that stuff. Right? As for enjoying it - well on THAT issue .... er never mind, you'll just have to read it and find out

How do you know you'll like my cake?

Oh goodie, I get to be first. That was a very good first chapter - especially for one that has to begin the 'world building' process. Lotsa questions, but a good feel. Now if only Shade could keep it in his pants long enough, he might get the job done.

Can I have my cake and eat it too?

okay, you did warn me The contractions DOES get better - promise - as for Peter's ass? well let's just say Jason thought it was perfect

Totally gonna pass on testing that theory Up to you - I will say I love responding to comments good or bad, so if you feel like reviewing chapters - go for it, I am told I am a tad irreverent in my reviews and I suppose my response are no better. That said, feel free to drop a review every chapter or so, that way I can be chatty back. Oh and good or bad are both welcome. I'm not going to change the story right at this point but things that didn't hit you as so good are helpful in the future. Thanks Andy

Top bunk is mine.

LOL. The first is fine, you're free to use 'cock' anyway or time you like. It's the other one that is too offensive for use - or at least so I am told. [Yeah I know, I SOO thought I was supreme ruler here, but there are a few natural laws I am NOT allowed to subvert. } Thanks for the laugh Andy

Thanks for reading CJ - appreciate the comments. I'm sure the title was a bit of giveaway but my hope was the twist would correct it. Now to get the rest of the story out of my head onto 'paper' Thanks again.

I know it's bad form to comment on one's own story, but I'm kinda surprised no one dogged on Nick for doing to Trevor what Trevor said he wouldn't do to Nick. Trevor said he wouldn't hook up with Nick because after they did the deed, he was likely to move on, that he couldn't be the monogamous bf Nick wanted. Then when Nick meets Alex they do hook up and Nick moves on, leaving Trevor with nothing but a night of passion. Guess I wasn't half as clever as I thought LOL.

I was just SO sure you would know what a Quatloo was - not knowing ruined the post about betting 200 Quatloos on Krandur. No biggie, all my jokes are flopping today

Momma T is a problem. She has trouble seeing beyond her own social standing. Perfect families have perfect kids. Never met a mom like that before? Dad is a bit more grounded. His boys are his life, not his standing. I have someone in mind as my inspiration for Royce - made sure to wish him a happy FD today too

Exactly, sucks that the biggest asshole was also once his best friend no? Yeah this is going to go to hell in a hand basket in just about .01 seconds.

I must have done a bad job, because in my mind Darryl had NO clue. It was a shock. jason is like a brother and he just never saw the signs. Oh well, but yeah, the two are gonna have some serious making up to do

Wanna bet a 100 Quatloos on whether Darryl knows or not? Yeah Jason is a bit clueless because he doesn't get the problem. He doesn't see peter as a gold digger so can't image the problem. Oh well, everyone has their issues. We both know what mine are yeah I went there, but no 'whining'

haha, this was one of my favorite chapters too. I said it in a response to a different review. Just felt like they needed a fun chapter to keep things real.

Money, an issue? I think - but what do I know right - that Peter can't push it so far that Jason will leave. I think Jason will not let Peter's hangs up push jason away. Just saying ;P

yeah that was a trip to forget. Right about the time I came out, I had a female 'friend' expect we were going to get it on. AWKWARD! This had no relation to that moment, but it was a bit of the inspiration for it. My goal with Jason is to show him NOT as self confident as you might expect but still not be unbelievably naive about his looks etc. Thanks for reading.

My goal was to not have them hop in the sack bing bang boom. Maybe I'm weird, but I don't think people who are looking for dating material have to do that. I wanted it to be they both wanted to but also wanted it to be right. Let's see how sweet and good they are together