Marzipan
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**giggles** Nice B-day present for Andy But I still liked Matt's better. Fun chapter.
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oh... Andy is starting to recognize something in him. I liked how you brought it out. Not just best bud feelings for Matt developing into something sexual, but also the red haired boy in the locker rooms stirred Andy's attention making this story heaps more realistic. I have not read many bi-stories in this site, I'm happy to have found yours
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Well, Andy is the king now, thanx to Stacy ADD? Does that explain his lack of self control and screwed up self-defense behavior? Interesting. I like Matt wanting to keep him closer.
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Oh, poor Andy First love, first time sex, bittersweet summer romance... Sigh. You described it so well.
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This is to my gal Sara: Once there was a wonderful author named Kingdom, she managed to get a taste of stardom, a fan here and there, no enemies anywhere, since she was so sweet to us all and soon to be LukaDom! With adoration Maria
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Hihihihi... I think my signature is sexy too! Now the ultimate reason for starting this thread is coming clear... And I totally agree with you Cailen on the rest of the post too!
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If I say I find how someone's brain works sexy, for me that does not yet qualify as romantic interest I do hope you'll find a whole package!
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Ok, I can see Dark's point. Sometimes those can't be parted like said above. Personally I wasn't talking about ideal mates. Things, not only people, can be sexy, moods can be sexy, thoughts can be sexy. I'm throwing out some examples too.
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An older woman **snickers** soo cute. Yup, a gal17 is much older than a boy 14 I feel Stacy wasn't as innocent as she looked out to be in Andy's eyes. Another well written chapter!
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OMG. I gotta love Andy's logic, haha. Pandora's box is open for good, I'd say. This is so well written and you carry the story on with ease and make me smile with funny lines here and there.
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So the introduction part is over and the tension build up is next. Nice start with that innocent flirting. I can already see it turning serious in no time!
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Oukkies guys, I'm interested. What is sexy to you? Is it the looks? The behaviour? The intellectual skills? Certain assets? Please, the more details (no gore stuff) the better. I appreciate physical beauty as anyone. Typical and classical beauty is in itself really boring to me. Beauty with something off in it, and you get my attention. What really really gets me most is a combination of high intellectual capasity and overflooding imagination ( both can manifest in many ways). I guess I'm attracted to the brains then. I also find the types that don't follow the central line in life sexy. The ones who color outside the lines even sexier.
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You dreated a deep background for the boys. Believable and psychologically realistic. **reads on**
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Chapter 7 - Barbara Makes Her Presence Known
Marzipan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Barbara Makes Her Presence Known
Mums fix everything Poor Charlie, I hope he got a kick now to face the day head up high. I know from personal experience how hard it can be to be selfish and live the way that it makes one happy. It can be soo hard, if one is used to be the good gal (or boy in Charlie's case ). Since when ever I can relate with a story, I know it is well and thoughtfully written. -
Oh... I didn't expect this... Really really made my heart jump for the boys. At first laughing for the image of the tiny aplha-males then heartbroken for Matt's brother... Really lively and beautifully written.
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I'm hooked. Really good and promising start. You give us a seemingly clear ending with the prologue and now I just have to read on and wait for you to finish this story to find out if the end is really gonna be this bittersweet as the prologue says.
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Is it unethical to try to get to know a guy from others because you wa
Marzipan replied to Tara00's topic in The Lounge
Totally unethical you could also stalk, pry and spy on him, see what makes him tick and then make a move Just do it live your life to the fullest. Sometimes you burn (like I did only a few days ago) but at least you'll know. Good luck. -
There once was a cool young hottie called Mark, Who lived in a far away farm with a black dog that never bark, He never turned down a good humor in chat with us, And was a cause of a scandalous sexy rumor about him and **** alone steaming windows in an empty buss! For your innocence I’m gonna leave the rest in dark. _____________________________________________________ There you go Mark My first ever try with the Limerics.
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That was hot. Oh the hurt in the start.. I liked this little story. Now I think I might want to jump to your LONG story Well done with this "old piece". Do post more of these old ones and maybe finish the ones in process if you have time, for our enjoyment
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I like that Chase has become such a great bf to Coop. And Coop's being clear minded for a change is refreshing (despite the alcohol caused amnesia ). Good thinking to make a point about his drinking, I'm not judging, but he did get into awful lot of trouble when he was drunk. Didn't he I want to see a payback for Rusty... He deserves it. I can't believe time flies so fast I have enjoyed Coops journey to finding himself sometimes with holding my breath, sometimes gigling sometimes horny as heck, but always always wanting more. Well done babes! One more to go!
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Listen to your heart on that job offer. I have first hand experience with bitchy bosses... So, are you thinking about continuing with the morphine or? I hope your spirits are still up. I'm so looking forward on meeting Ariel, seeing him through your eyes
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Siiighhhhh. My heart nearly stops beating when I think Coop might die... A bittersweet chapter. Just like only you can make them. A good one.
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It's so hard to get past the worry sometimes...
Marzipan replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
Comsie and congrats for the Shack! I think you write exeptionally well, sometimes I'm just sighing out of emotions you create AND make me remember in myself too. You are a fine diamond. Keep doing what you do! I'll be reading it.
