Marzipan
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You describe pain so well, I felt it in my head too. I have a hunch that the snakes are going to be my favourites I just love snakes *sigh* I have one word left to say: MORE. Ok, I have a second word too: SOON.
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How else would you know the weasel loves you back?
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I am curious What windows (if you have multiple) do you have open RIGHT NOW on your internet browser? Share the links if you dare Mine: GA obviously. Gmail (I was logged in) Local newspaper with FB related news New story in Lit from one of my favs. WOW, only four windows open, usually I have ten.
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Can I have a pet weasel?
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Is the other big, furry weasel making you uncomfortable?
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Hello Welcome to GA Just browse the forums, find a topic that interests you and leave your comment.
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So, just how confused are you ?
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It's my stethoscope you perv, what did you think it was?
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What they look like? Your swimmers??? Nuh, you can keep them from my eyes The baby pics I really do want to see! I bet she'll be a sweetie. Remember to stop and breathe during the last couple of weeks and be well rested when the princess finally arriwes!
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Chapter 2: Dangling By A Thread
Marzipan commented on Linxe Termoil's story chapter in Chapter 2: Dangling By A Thread
Rectal examination in front of everyone, OMG, poor Micah Micah described how he was annoyed with his brother yet as the story moves on you reveal they have a loving and trusting relationship. It feels right, you make me believe in them. So far you have made me like all the characters a lot and managed to get me invested to keep reading. -
Chapter 1: Leaving the Nest
Marzipan commented on Linxe Termoil's story chapter in Chapter 1: Leaving the Nest
Micah He has adorable voice! I was quite impressed how you made me "see" and "feel" some of the scenes. I liked the start, a lot actually! It felt heart-wrecking and sad at times and then you hit me with surprise humor. I shall continue now. -
I don't think I have any shame. BUT do you think it is wise to post everything you write? Should I get some sort of front guard to make me keep some of my things hidden in the dusty files of my lappy? So far I have thought it is valuable to put my stories out there to get fb if anyone someone is so kind to give it to me. Hm. Ok, so the question is. Do you post everything you finish? If not why?
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Aww Tim I just wanna tossle that frizzy cut Looks good!
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I think you got a great smile! Welcome to GA hun!
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It was a thilling story and a sweet story! It was told in a cutely naive voice that appealed to me.
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So what is the name of the game today, "let's play doctor!" or?
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I think you are brave. Don't ever shut up about things that you need to let out. None of what has happened is your fault and there fore anything you need to feel ashamed of. If you feel you have to let it out, do it. Remember I am always here to listen if you need. I hope your nightmares will eventually be just words on paper, not something to wake in the middle of the night.
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Well said. I could not have said it any better
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wow, hot!!! Babe write more erotica
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[Jian Sierra] Jian's absence from the site
Marzipan replied to Bleu's topic in Stories Discussion Forum
We will definitely miss his presence in the chatroom but he wishes me to emphasise that he's not dead yet He is definitely not dead! I am so proud of Jian that he doesn't let this annoyance get to him and he keeps his spirits up. I will miss my twin in GA-chat We will make this work somehow, I don't want him to feel abandoned by his GA-family. We all love him. -
Why is that king so happy????
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Hi guys, I wrote a little transgender story called Hello, Monday. I hope to hear your thoughts of it.
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Great news!!!!
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How do you detach yourself from your stories to see ìts flaws?
Marzipan replied to Marzipan's topic in Writer's Circle
Thank you Cia. 1) I will look into my stories with this repetition-comment in mind now. Especially with Sign and Tiger -stories. 2) Pacing, I think I hear what you are saying. What things are important, what are not? I do feel the pacing is slow to me too and sometimes the stories seem to get stuck to moving only ONE day at the time when I even I feel I need to make the ball rolling faster. I think this is because I tend to get caught with the moment. This is likely a problem especially with the long stories, right? I will think about this carefully too.
