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  1. Marzipan
    Three different lines to follow from now on? The elders, the angel and the prince. Interesting start.
  2. Marzipan
    One question first, the boys are living the year 2008, did u start writing this then or is there another reason for that specific year? Nicely raised stakes on Jason. Making everything even harder for him. I like that. You are not taking the easy way out. But, very soon as the boys wonder too they have a commitment discussion. In a way it was necessary since Jason had so much to lose and they both needed to be on the same page. I am interested to find out the root of Peter's insecurities.
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    What Jian said. Also, sooo cute what your mum said. Gotta love her. Coming out should not be forced. Everything happens when it is supposed to happen.
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    Oukkies, I am not sure what is wrong with this thread but it doesn't seem to be alive. A few months and a few chapters has passed here but here is the chapter 8, Sleeping Beauty I would like to hear what you think
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    Chapter 13, Friend in Need is out now! I really hope to hear you mind about what is going on
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    Yes, Tiger might have found his tamer too! Thank you for the comments The series will be completed, I promise. There are three main books and one or two short ones too in it.
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    Poem, One

    Marzipan commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem, One

    Another unique beauty.
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    Bent But Not Broken

    Marzipan commented on Lugh's story chapter in Bent But Not Broken

    That was heart-wrenching. Something like that I expected to have happen to Bobby in the cell, but really I tried to avoid thinking about it while reading Holy Day. Crap. Well, it could have been worse. At least now he is in the hands of the good guys. **Sad and happy, in more levels than one.** Thank you for this story Lugh. I do your Hanover-saga.
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    Thank you for leaving a comment and enjoying my work It means so much to hear that people like it. I have not lost my interest, but I was struggling a bit with other issues. Now I am posting regularly again
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    Thank you for your opinion Nemo sure does have passion for Dion. But will that be enough?
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    Ok, without revealing Nemo's future boyfriend I am playing with these options: 1. The story will come to a big conflict soon. The situation would build up soon, and would mean large feelings and a possibility of making a WRONG choice - for this story. Nemo is forced to make a decision that will have wide impacts on all the boys. There would be few chapters left. This option would leave an opening for a sequel. I still want a closure for the boys. 2. The story would follow Nemo's summer and how his decisions about future, not just who he wants to be with comes clearer. This would bring the story more to 20-25 chapters in length. M
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    Cooper Black Italic, I see. **giggle**
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    Chapter 12 Home Sweet Home is out now. It turned out to be a longer time between the last chapters and I apologise for that. I promise to do better with the following chapters. So, the question is, do you guys want a fast ending for the story or maybe build up tension some more. I have written two different endings. I need your opinnion on this. Thanx. :) Maria
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    I thought I had a bad week... Just don't ever say this can't get any worse because it does, life humiliates you until you just don't care. I am sorry, but that is true. The only way to deal with that is to keep bouncing back, take baby steps forward when ever it is possible. Take care. Maria
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    **Mega hugs** Congratulations Sara
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    What would be the other option?
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    Makes no sense to me either. I am blocked to leave a double review **cries** *** I am officially in love with Bobby. Brianna can have Amberly, just ship Bobby my way. Right, he doesn't want to give up on the red-head
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    Reroute Rout

    Marzipan commented on Lugh's story chapter in Reroute Rout

    Sigh, no, no, no, no. Oh NOOOO. I just had a flash back from the Holy Day. When they imprison Puck and Bobby, they do nasty things to the darling scientist Back to the shorty chappy. Don't apologize, it is short but it does have a great cliff Might have worked well combined with the previous chappy, but as it is, it is. That's that. I do like the fact that Bobby is caring and curious about Puck. And the little remark about the diapers... I loved also the comment about the sweet and - hmm - (not so) innocent Amberly, hehe. Now I have a threesome image in my mind, thank you very much. Ps. I don't know, what you know that I think I know.
  19. Marzipan
    Would you rather have me handling you then? ;)
  20. Marzipan
    Any room service here?
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    I hope too he has hit the jack pot. Maybe he has started to publish and gets payed for his amazing stuff now. I like the the lover idea too. It would be nice thoug to drop in a line or to for those of us waiting and hoping if he is not coming back any time soon. Dom is becoming a legend, especially after his hiatus... Legends... now I just got another idea for the fall antho... about where Dom, a GA Legend has been hiding Seriously, Dom, come back. Pleez.
  22. Marzipan
    Are you suggesting that "they" are not people?
  23. Marzipan
    I think you did well in describing Jason's torn feelings, the fear of being outed with the outcomes he thoughts are inevitable AND the desire to get closer with Peter. I liked this chapter again. The pacing was perfect and few of the moments were just super cute. The mouthwash thingy and all. Yup.
  24. Marzipan
    Do they call it monkey these days?
  25. Marzipan
    Was THAT what I think it was?
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