Tim. Not everything was lost even if it felt like it. You are a special, sensitive person and deserve loving, trustworthy prople around you. That *** of a father you had represents a nightmare we all fear. I wish you much strenght to get past this and not let what is dark and qrong in the world win.
When I joined I started posting tons of questions to Member Q & A. Today I noticed I have more posts in Games and Humor. I read all forums. Especially writer's corner is interesting.
I don't like soapbox mainly because I don't want to get rallied up and spend every minute of day defending my case. Still I read there and today was the last time I giggled at some stupidity going on there - it is clearly almost as fun as Games and Humor.
Didn't happen in a story... I had a client today at gym. She kept saying ALL the time "just niin" which is "Oh, that's right" in English. GOD I wanted to strangle her.
Well, it is the same with the clothing. Some forget the clothes when the transformation happens back and forth - they magically disappear then appear back again.
If you want to make it more realistic you need an explanation that works for you. You create the were. Most were's I know are mammals and beasts - what about pray animals like elks or...
Shit, I have an idea for the After Math antho! Whohoo, thanx Lugh.
What a great task you have in your hands! Can you fit it in seventeen chapters, really? How do you choose what to add and what to leave out? I think you have lived such an interesting and rich life that people will be interested to read about it.
You can add pictures to your stories, I do that all the time. You need to place them in your GA gallery first (easiest way) then link them in the middle of the text where you want to put them.
Andy has a point there... Is something BIG about to happen to make the elementals choose sides? And is it possible that Duncan is so blind towards magic when there are creatures like demons and vampires aroud... Just as Aure said, "How old is he?"
Kynan is resisting bravely, just how can the prince hate his tears? Is it discust really, or maybe something more distressing to the mighty demon? Hm... Will Kynan fall for this prince or will he make his way to the little wolf's heart... I can't make up my mind where you are leading this story. I must say the Dark Queen is pretty wicked, I don't like her at all.
Ah sigh. Poor Alan. He is in this over his head. Where does he next turn to to get more answers. How can he help and protect someone who he doesn't really know and doesn't know the jam they are in? Wonder what happens when Kynan sees him the next time, after all... Alan is now 18 and not really a kid anymore...
Aure... OMG... hehehe... I never ever in my wildest dreams could come up with a lover like him. I want one of his kind!
What is it about Duncan that attracts both Bryce and Aure?
There are so many characters to follow that I get greedy when you don't cover all of them in one chapter **hmph** I am enjoying this too much!
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Have you read Dark's Waylon's Crossing? You'll love it! Here is a link http://www.gayauthor...waylonscrossing
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My darkest Dark asked me to sketch some pictures from his stories and I immediately thought of Waylon's Crossing since it has the most colorful group of characters in it. I had the story on hold for a while and now I'm reading it again and loving it
So here are the first drawings I did. I think more will come soon! Sorry that they are HUGE, I don't know how to make them smaller
Alan, the young werewolf
Aure, the air elemental
Bryce, the vampire
Kynan, the half-demon
This was an exciting chapter. I'm not much of a fantacy reader so I'm sorry if it takes me a while to get homey with all the different elements of the story. I can say I am very thrilled that I am taking this jorney now since NO WAY IN HELL I'm stopping reading. As Andy said I am expecting to hear more of the faith of Kynan and I was almost gaping with the idea that the demon being tortured was him instead of Morticai (though Kynan is in a human form not a demon even if he is a half-demon, right?)
Bryce got himself a follower hehe, he is stuck with Alan now, isn't he? So far he is the most interesting character here. I want to learn more about him too.
Should we collect all these phrases together and build up a short story, what do you say guys?
One of my least favourites is "in the aftermath". Lucky me, it is the theme of the winter anthos XD How the heck am I gonna be able to invent a story for that when all I can think of is Adam Lambert's song. Hmm... maybe I'll write a fan fic then