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Marzipan

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  1. When I joined I started posting tons of questions to Member Q & A. Today I noticed I have more posts in Games and Humor. I read all forums. Especially writer's corner is interesting. I don't like soapbox mainly because I don't want to get rallied up and spend every minute of day defending my case. Still I read there and today was the last time I giggled at some stupidity going on there - it is clearly almost as fun as Games and Humor.
  2. Didn't happen in a story... I had a client today at gym. She kept saying ALL the time "just niin" which is "Oh, that's right" in English. GOD I wanted to strangle her.
  3. Well, it is the same with the clothing. Some forget the clothes when the transformation happens back and forth - they magically disappear then appear back again. If you want to make it more realistic you need an explanation that works for you. You create the were. Most were's I know are mammals and beasts - what about pray animals like elks or... Shit, I have an idea for the After Math antho! Whohoo, thanx Lugh.
  4. Happy Birthday young one!!!! XXX
  5. Marzipan

    Relive the past

    What a great task you have in your hands! Can you fit it in seventeen chapters, really? How do you choose what to add and what to leave out? I think you have lived such an interesting and rich life that people will be interested to read about it. You can add pictures to your stories, I do that all the time. You need to place them in your GA gallery first (easiest way) then link them in the middle of the text where you want to put them.
  6. Andy has a point there... Is something BIG about to happen to make the elementals choose sides? And is it possible that Duncan is so blind towards magic when there are creatures like demons and vampires aroud... Just as Aure said, "How old is he?"
  7. Kynan is resisting bravely, just how can the prince hate his tears? Is it discust really, or maybe something more distressing to the mighty demon? Hm... Will Kynan fall for this prince or will he make his way to the little wolf's heart... I can't make up my mind where you are leading this story. I must say the Dark Queen is pretty wicked, I don't like her at all.
  8. Ah sigh. Poor Alan. He is in this over his head. Where does he next turn to to get more answers. How can he help and protect someone who he doesn't really know and doesn't know the jam they are in? Wonder what happens when Kynan sees him the next time, after all... Alan is now 18 and not really a kid anymore...
  9. Aure... OMG... hehehe... I never ever in my wildest dreams could come up with a lover like him. I want one of his kind! What is it about Duncan that attracts both Bryce and Aure? There are so many characters to follow that I get greedy when you don't cover all of them in one chapter **hmph** I am enjoying this too much!
  10. Hi! Welcome to the site from my behalf too Have you read Dark's Waylon's Crossing? You'll love it! Here is a link http://www.gayauthor...waylonscrossing
  11. This was an exciting chapter. I'm not much of a fantacy reader so I'm sorry if it takes me a while to get homey with all the different elements of the story. I can say I am very thrilled that I am taking this jorney now since NO WAY IN HELL I'm stopping reading. As Andy said I am expecting to hear more of the faith of Kynan and I was almost gaping with the idea that the demon being tortured was him instead of Morticai (though Kynan is in a human form not a demon even if he is a half-demon, right?) Bryce got himself a follower hehe, he is stuck with Alan now, isn't he? So far he is the most interesting character here. I want to learn more about him too.
  12. I love the poor pup Alan! He is absolutely adorable.
  13. YES!!!! I am up for a little fun and hanky panky with the clishe story "contest" Lets do it!!!! Anyone else?
  14. Should we collect all these phrases together and build up a short story, what do you say guys? One of my least favourites is "in the aftermath". Lucky me, it is the theme of the winter anthos XD How the heck am I gonna be able to invent a story for that when all I can think of is Adam Lambert's song. Hmm... maybe I'll write a fan fic then
  15. I hide a lot of myself to the people around me, not because of what I am just because I hate that the people I don't like or respect has any private information about me. I'm not saying I live a double life since I dont't. I just don't like to share. If I do, I don't explain. What ever people think about me is their own business, it doesn't change how I think about myself. What matters to me is how the people I have let inside my life, who trully know me think about me. I don't hide anything from them. I don't want to nor can.
  16. Marzipan

    Chapter 1

    KC, I have nothing to add to what Wayne and crj said. I wonder though, which is worse, fearing the seizure to happen again or it actually happening. You are strong. Thank you for sharing, since I use writing as outlet too, I understand the importance and the raw feeling it leaves you with very well.
  17. Rustle's B-day!!!!!! **dance** Happy birthday hun
  18. I admire people who have strenght to be whoever they are without giving a rats ass what others think, including wearing a freking pink tuxedo if they want.
  19. I read this holding my breath even when I knew everything went well.
  20. Havefun!!! Sounds like a great day ahead It is a hard lesson to lear how to enjoy what you got and not to dwell on what you don't - I'm still trying to crasp that.
  21. Great to hear updates! I think you are all lucky and deserving of this happiness. Not just you and Mike, but the Princess and even Steph. You worked through a lot of hard stuff, but you kept it real. It is so good to hear you can now breath and relax and enjoy your new family member. M Ps. Ugly babies are the best.
  22. You can edit the text with the GA story editor, open a chapter up for editing and just do the same edits there as you would with Word. I think it doesn't allow to take out everything and post again. You'd need a mod to do that and even then I think you'd lose the chapter numbering. Might want to check this with Cia or Lugh. Maybe the FAQ has some info about this?
  23. I will let it pass that we didn't compare to John... I am so so very happy for you guys, seeing the two of you in live and committed to each other and facing whatever comes in the future with bright eyes and strong hearts brings me hope. I need that hope. I have much faith that you can reach the goal you are working towards together, may the road there be interesting and joyful! You two have my support and thoughts with you every day. Maria Ps. Your wife was a gem, now she is the brightest star in the sky, shining her love and blessing to you.
  24. Welcome to our crazy bunch Habit. May you find joy and amusement with us
  25. WAYNE! You have a character that is rebelling, those are the best ones! Hold on too him He will create drama and frustration in your mind, but hell yes! HE will feel all the more alive to you and to us readers.
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