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  1. Philippe

    Chapter 6

    Hmmm, wait until the church twins show with lies of their innocent acts; those that PESI will probably broadcast in the courtroom or at the judges desktop! Hahaha. Playing Hot Potato is fun too, so much better when in the courtroom. 🤦‍♂️ Oh, and names withheld for security? Evil forces are at play here! 🦹‍♀️
  2. Philippe

    Chapter 5

    Teacher? That’s an oversimplification; teacher, nanny, security, psychologist, tailor, friend? I imagine if PESI is an AI, then the test of their intelligence will also be a truth test of PESI to apply all aspects of the above specialities: to overcome any teen insecurities, to motivate young minds beyond mere accomplishment, and to keep all trials within the stress levels that lead to revolt and rejection. Considering PESI’s specialities include near full time observation and application, PESI will know the boys’ expertise and interest before they acknowledge them to themselves; all kinds of possibilities if PESI is as self aware as the observational reports to the Doctor indicate. (Why am I envisioning the Doctor from Star Trek Voyager with holographic projections within the premises? I want to be a real boy? Lol Ok, Doctor, PESI wants to order some parts and supplies for their “technology classes!)
  3. Philippe

    Chapter 4

    So let me get this straight. The DOCTOR goes out and collects kids from the streets. He then brings them bring to his high tech home, and turns them into Frankensteins! What an interesting twist on the rescue of life for these kids.
  4. Philippe

    Song of Soul

    Amen! I agree and await future posts with eager anticipation! Oh, that ending was amazing. To me it conveyed the meaning of joining in a higher more meaningful way; in love, their bond, and spiritual connection. The most significant concern I have is now the ambassador’s gate is now known to Prince “Cleanse the World.” I feel this was a grave mistake to expose that asset, especially when so close to the Platinum Prince and his allies. Fantastic chapter! Please post at your soonest, but I appreciate and thank you for the quality and detail you provide for this magical tale.
  5. Philippe

    Chapter 24

    Fergus may be worried about the loss of respect from HIS pack but he has seen the warnings of Jimmy’s strength and the wolf ready to run wild; yet he toys with notions of domination of a near feral wolf, the same type beast he needed Jimmy to manage for him. So I think his biggest concern for Fergus should have already been being Jimmy on board and introduced for pack petition. He has now contributed to the more feral determination and raw strength of a strong wolf, a possible challenger, that highlights his lack of leadership; I believe his days to be numbered as the pack will not rally to his aid and without the pack he is not a great match for Jimmy, and a poor match for Jimmy protecting his mate and fighting for a pack.
  6. Philippe

    Chapter 5

    As he heard the heavenly voice “Build the sandwich, they will come!”
  7. What did Travis see? Hmmm, well...Sean and Granny are set up for out-of-body experiences, but likewise Travis’ mom and dad both could be having a spirit venture. The evil that resides within Emma, Bruce, and Andrea doesn’t yet allow me to believe that guilt would have claimed them; nor would a spirit meeting at the temple strike me as a probable confession or of remorse in death from those characters. Given the position we find ourselves in; I believe we may be seeing Sean, drawn to dad, placing all of his innocent confusion before Travis where as a spiritual person Travis may learn of Sean’s frustrating search for Stephanie’s “beautiful uncle” and where he may lay blame with mean uncle. Given all Antonio’s faults, he is still Sean’s father too, and the natural pull has already been observed but not yet understood. Can Travis, Praveen, send Sean back to Celine, Stephanie’s mom, as his anchor to return to his body and and an understanding that dad is speeding is way. What will be the reaction when daddy Travis sees Praveen’s ex husband as an emotional wreak at the bedside of his, their, son? How will the family reunion be with, Emilia, Celine, Antonio, Aunt Vanessa, and then Eduardo, Ray, and Stephanie. I’m betting the odds of a good night for the evil three will be near nonexistent! , @vanalas, you’ve given us one heck of a cliffhanger; those are totally unfair when life and death, of a child, is involved. Correct this ASAP, post, post quickly, HELP!
  8. Nice backstory for Caleb and family’s desperate need of a safe haven and home. Their acceptance into the territory, then into the pack was great, but then true validation comes when Caleb is accepted as the enforcer itself; this hints to a strong coalition I sense coming. But as Mason found his destined mate, a shadow mage, and accepted that mate without thought of rejection raises brows for sure, but to then chose a lion as his enforcer shows a true embrace of all; and this all carries the seal of approval from the former Alpha and Alpha Mate, a very strong endorsement. The upcoming visit from the New York Alpha serves now as an endorsement of trust and alliance for the Mason/Vincent pairing of Wolf and Shadow Mage. I’m excited to see the upcoming Mage Dance and Mating Bond formalize the process towards this rapidly changing pack and alliance building required to ultimately bring the serial murdering dark mage to justice.
  9. Philippe

    Moments In Time

    Ahhh, son Mason has only now learned to sense/see ghosts, but it seems he may have had ghost around him long ago. His elder foster “grandmother” may have seen guardian ghost those long years ago. Mason may have an affinity that was previously unrecognized by him. Toby has/had “something” to win their freedom, but was it an item, information, or both; like lost works of art, without info, they can appear worthless. So now the item that Toby valued worthy of their freedom needs to be found or identified as Toby did. But underlying that “something” that would win their freedom is the question of “what gives anyone the power to keep them captive in the first place?” Toby would seem to be the one that was being held, but then again, he lived for and protected Rhys. Even now Rhys is manipulated, but is it for his value directly or the value he may know or hold that was of Toby’s credit? Levine wants Rhys, but in his twisted mind, is it that he believes Rhys will disclose his secrets in drugged pillow talk? This is like an onion with many layers yet to be revealed. With the team now working more closely, I hope they can apply the heat needed to make this onion open up for the core reveal! Another great chapter taking us forward! Thanks @Laura S. Fox!
  10. Interesting start for our newbie freshman William Harker; known to be Mike’s roommate. We know not his or mom’s true name, nor that of his father until given confirmation beyond pen name or whether carrying mom’s maiden name, or other, and what his relationship if any with his father. I also look forward to seeing how he was identified or became known as the “chosen” if indeed William Harker is to be the chosen of prophecy. The path for William appears to have been mapped out, but for how long has it been so, and at what point will he become enlightened to his own destiny. So yes, have have my interest thus far. Thanks for posting and please take us on the complete William Harker journey of transformative trials or to his ascension.
  11. You give a nice prologue for history and context of the prophecy for the storyline to be presented. I was pleasantly surprised at the level of detail and development for this mythical genre.
  12. Woohoo 🙌🏿, Pack Mom kicks ass and rocks! The old alliances were good no doubt, but the building trust now transferring to the next generation seems to not only keep those ties but may be building to more open trust and exchange; that seems huge for the smaller pack and smaller pack Alpha...Alpha(s)?; on the horizon is the goal of bringing shadow mages out; into more respectable and accepted existence. Hmmm 🤔, a shadow mage platoon, with access to distant regions within minutes, lead by an Alpha Wolf mate and with a near secret and an unscented security Lion 🦁; my imagination sees no real obstacles once this movement gets momentum!
  13. Well, it’s not as if the house fell upon the wicked witch Emma, or did it? Now quickly grab the ruby slippers Praveen...ahem, Travis! Hahaha, I love how the arrogance Emma sought to show her friends backfired horribly. Oh, the innocence of children...his name is papa silly! Hmmm, could it be the upcoming marriage celebration is interrupted by an awakening from a long coma induced absence? All opportunities for Bruce and Andrea to build their relationships seem to get undermined by their own resonance of disruption and destruction; will history repeat yet again, one can hope; yet somehow, Antonio seems to be looking for a lifebuoy ring at every turn. So now, six years later, the situation seems rife for a boomerang returning to reveal the turn of the lies that destroyed Praveen, and possibly caused the Almighty to leave the Gonzales household that dark and stormy night. Looking forward to seeing what’s around the next corner!
  14. Philippe

    Chapter 6

    I’m confused by the Dylan scents in the room (curiosity kills the cat....oops, Nemo?) but yet the concern and support for Jason’s health seems sincere; hmmm 🤔 this could easily be deception or possibly real sincerity. 🤷‍♂️ Unexplained is the bruise and/or knot on Jason’s elbow, with no recollection of origin to explain its existence. Is it natural or introduced for adversarial benefits. I suspect and hope it’s something natural, like allergies to something in his new environment. There is plenty to hold ones interest in this story. The suspense surrounding the main characters in itself is most intriguing. I look forward to the continuing storyline and hope the writing commitment remains strong and perhaps a shorter posting interval; this story deserves follow through. Thanks for sharing!
  15. Philippe

    Chapter 8

    Oh nice, the backstory to explain Sasha’s relationship with this mother White and Cubs is bound to be a fantastic tale; but does this other Timber Wolf bring the answers?, the identity as Sasha’s pack?, but not that of his Alpha mate’s pack?, these are more riddles to ponder. The innate call of his TimberWolf vs the pack howl he finds more challenging? Being able to scent a pack he doesn’t know, another innate gift to add to Sasha’s riddle of “what kind of wolf am I.” As a mislabeled Alpha, it’s easy to see how Sasha is misunderstood being treated as an omega but his alpha wolf make it an omega with an attitude. With this new alignment of the Alpha Pairs, and the mysterious white wolf and Cubs, I can see this new bond and alliance drawing more whites into a inclusive pack. I’m excited to see how this tale will continue to bring new drama to the Alpha so lucky to be confused at what nature is dealing him and his pack!
  16. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    OMG, this just goes to show ya that getting “screwed by the man” and then, constantly chastised at home, by your nagging mate, can drive a man absolutely crazy and uncontrollably enraged; he just met his match when he chose a bonded human with a big, bad, rogue wolf as his intended!
  17. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Perhaps Fergus filled a necessary void in formality for the pack but he doesn’t appear to be of true Pack Alpha qualities. It’s too bad Jimmy wasn’t the one to find the pack before Fergus tainted the full recognition and acceptance of leadership they desperately need. So now Fergus chooses the less honorable path for Jimmy and for the pack, as he concentrates on making himself more powerful but without demonstrating respect and honor. We had learned earlier that Fergus isn’t likely to respect a human being turned, even if Sawyer has a successful turn, we are on a collision course for an Alpha challenge. Jimmy needs a pack, Jimmy will defend is true mate, and the pack is rife with frustration growing against Alpha Fergus. I don’t see the pack nor the Betas resisting any challenge or claim Jimmy may have for Pack Alpha when the feces meets the fan.
  18. Philippe

    An Apple a Day

    Uh oh, two young fellers come a courting, neither a want’n to sing in public but one a chameleon of friends, or is it two? 😂 I was cooking up my supper when ya posted this chapter. How ironic it was to have ya sharing my favorite, cornbread! lol
  19. Hmmm 🤔, so MeeMee and Sascha both have them leg wounds, and both of them have them deep soul searching eyes just a begging for Billy’s attention. We done got us a ho mesh o issues that ain’t makin any sense. We’ve got bunches of weird things to weed out, ya hear? And MeeMee just appears from way down yonder in Georgia; that is kinda spooky!
  20. Any power of attorney POA can easily be revoked with the institutions holding the accounts. However, at this point, canceling the power of attorney is probably a non-event as Levine probably moved those monies while the POA was in effect. Levine may have pushed for guardianship due to mental status and if done by court action then it must be cancelled by court action; which would probably require a court appointed mental evaluation for the releasing action. The challenge to the validity and accountability of the POA when signed by a mentally incapacitated individual would likewise have to proceed through court proceedings that would take months, however, emergency orders could be issued to provide an allowance until final hearings; any defenses declared for lack of funds would have to show reasonable and necessary expenses while caring for Rhys.
  21. Well...thoughts to consider, did Travis actually have to do anything other than be there to allow them to hang themselves? Interesting possibilities but I believe in many ways the endgame for Travis has been patience to let them choke on their own greed or to be caught in further acts of manipulation. Remember the Mayor’s ball and other high visibility photo opportunities bring bad press; even if they are not directly responsible the industry can have negative attention, and that is never good. The same can be said for both Bruce and Andrea as they have brought negative attention to themselves, Antonio’s company and the products they indorse. Also, as a model, Bruce should not be releasing/endorsing a product line that he has direct interest in; the conflict of interest itself could result in companies seeking fresh models to put a fresh face on their products.
  22. Oh Bruce, Oh Andrea, 🤦‍♂️Farewell, farewell ! Parting is such sweet sorrow, or such we say best and just rewards. Great chapter, I hope Katy brings three wooden stakes for Emma, Bruce, and Andrea as their souls are dead and their hearts are cold, and if involved as I believe then perhaps sharing deaths that are of the vampires will end their pain (or at least everyone else’s)!
  23. Philippe

    Pies With Lies

    While I’m all American, I’m a true Southerner, pecan pie recipes can have similar differences, some ok some fantastic! So give me a minced nut pecan pie and I’m in heaven! lol 😝
  24. You seem to have extracted my thoughts before I even got. To ask! 😂 I too have been looking to hear the backstory or Sebastian’s return scene.
  25. Philippe

    Chapter 12

    Well by DNA I think TJ is not a parent, nor father to Tristan; after all Tristan truly is a Mini-Me to TJ. Hmmm, so Tristan is the younger more youthful TJ that gets to play with the kids that have his exact DNA.
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