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That was a painful chapter, Mikey. How horribly sad for Tony. He's so lucky his phone was still connected to Marcus' and Marcus heard the whole thing. Marcus saved his life; that guy could have easily killed him. I am not surprised though to learn that Marcus has been in love with Tony for all this time. Tony has never looked at Marcus that way, has he? He's never thought of Marcus as a love interest. I wonder what his heart thinks now. I look forward to chapter six.

That was such a sweet thing for Thomas to do. I can't believe there weren't any empty tables in the cafeteria; the poor kid had to sit on the floor! And Andy finally redeemed himself at the end. It's good that he saved Oliver from being bullied. And by Andy's own teammates, no less! What a bunch of assholes. All is well w/A&M now and it brought a tear to my eye reading the last sentence. Great chapter, Elias!

That was ingenious whoever thought of Helen videotaping Charity and her blackmail. lol Good riddance to bad rubbish. At least now the cat's out of the bag, so to speak, and Jon and Eric came clean so now there's nothing hanging over their heads. I'm looking forward to the start of their tour.

I have to admit, I was cracking up reading Helen's tirade and how she ripped a new one from Jon and Eric. That was hysterical! lol She's going to ream them a new one yet again if she gets wind of what Jon and Eric did next. How the hell is Brandon gonna get out of this one? Chase will be devastated! And how the HELL does Charity think she's gonna get anything from Brandon if he's not straight? That's ridiculous of her to even think that! lol I thought the line Brandon said about going to Australia and how that will be a blast is right on the money! lol Ok, on to chapter thirteen.

Wow, I can't believe Nine actually pulled the trigger on Angel! I was hoping he'd turn quickly and shoot Ma'am instead! I am proud of him though for planning that escape out of the car and into the woods. I'm just sorry he got hurt. And you left me in tears again when Zune had to leave him b/c we all know what his fate was. And what a coincidence that Edward found Zune!!! If I remember when Daryl kidnapped Zune, the ride to the whorehouse was a long one, right? Was Edward still looking for him? He'd been gone for so long... Thank God he was found though and he'll never have to go back. I hope to HELL he rats out that snake Daryl for all the HELL he put him through!!!! Terrific chapter, sacred!

Hey Keith - I kind of thought the story was over as far as you updating was concerned. Keith, you do what you need to do. Your readers will always be here waiting until you're ready to continue with this story or maybe even write a new story. I know you have been going through a lot and I think it's wonderful that you're going for help. I think that's the best thing for you. You have your good days, and yes, you also have bad days that may outnumber your good days, but in time I think the good days will outnumber the bad days. You have to give yourself time to heal but I don't think this can happen if you don't let go first. And letting go may be the hardest thing you ever do, but it will be the healthiest thing for you because you know Elliot is still in a coma. Unfortunately, that may not change. You have to think about YOU now; you have to think about Keith and what Keith needs. Take the winter break to reevaluate what YOU need, get help from your therapist, and you'll see, in time you will feel better. It may not be tomorrow, it may not be next month, or in six months even, but eventually you will. You have to do this for YOU. And your readers will be here waiting, whenever you are ready to return to writing. =)

Omg, how the hell did the girls rat them out so fast? They JUST LEFT the hotel! lol Unless it was just a picture of Eric acting like an ass at Jerry's fundraiser. Speaking of Jerry, I wonder if he's the new owner of that company Dimitri was talking to Vladimir about? I look forward to reading the next two updates later.

You know, you never think about how hard these these bands have it. Especially young kids in bands. They can't drink, they can't get too much sun, they have to uphold their image, etc. It sounds like a lot of work. And that's not even including the long hours in the studio and writing the songs. You listen to a CD or the radio and you never think of the long, long hours that went into putting that song/CD out. And CJ, I should have done this in the last chapter, but I must commend you: you know so much about plutonium and uranium and explosives, etc., I'm really impressed! Ok, on to chapter eleven. I'm assuming they'll be two more chapters uploaded at 11:36 this morning? lol

Yup, King of the Cliffies...

I did hit 'Like' even though I didn't like the story. Like everyone else, I see you as such a strong person, KC. From what you said, you have been through so much and you have come out so brave and so strong. As Dahiti said, most people in that position would be looking at their past flash before their eyes, not their future. Your mind gave you courage to stand up and find a way out of there by letting you see a bright future filled with love. You are such a brave and courageous man, KC. I am so glad you got out of there alive.

The pictures of Iguazu Falls are beautiful! I had to Google it. The pictures didn't come out in the chapter. I even used a different browser, thinking it was my MSN browser, but I still couldn't see them. Anyway...on to the chapter review: Now I have a general idea of how Instinct and Dimitri and The Scar are going to come into contact with one another. And it all starts w/Jerry... On another note, I noticed that Jon has a flip phone too! lol Ok, on to chapter nine.

CJ - I can't keep up!!!! lol Not only are you King of the Cliffies, you're an updating machine! lol I did have a question: when the boys are writing songs, they don't write them on a computer? For some reason I thought that would be easier. Don't they have like music scores and whatnot that you can write songs on? Like an app or something? And with all their money, Helen couldn't splurge for a smartphone for Brandon? She got him a flip phone? lol Poor kid...Oh, and the ten grand on his debit card - I think that's all gone now! lol Ok, on to chapter eight.

Ah, I disappear for a day and you have like ten chapters udpated! lol Well, maybe not that many... Awesome chapter, C James! I thought it was hysterical how Chase and Brandon sort of confided in Helen about their feelings, neither knowing they both feel the same way. lol I'm still tyring to figure out how The Scar and Dimitri fit into all this boy band stuff. Ok, on to chapter seven. =)

What a cute chapter, Cassie! Well, except for the meddling mom and all. I don't understand why mothers want to rush things and marry off their kids. Why? Mikeal (damn, I always forget if it's Mikeal or Mikael, I think it's Mikeal), is only in college. He has his whole life ahead of him. Why on earth does she want him to get married so young? I have never tried to set my two older boys up with girls their age. If they went out with a girl fine, if not, that was fine too. When it happens, it'll happen. Why rush it? Anyway, I think for Mikeal's peace of mind and his own happiness, he needs to come clean to his folks. His mother will never stop trying to find girls for him. And something Mikeal said bothers me. He's afraid his father will be disappointed in him. To him, that's worse than if he father were angry with him. Either of these emotions I don't understand. How can parents be angry or disappointed in something that cannot be controlled? Are they disappointed or angry if their child's hair is blonde or brown, or whatever? Or the color of their eyes? I just don't get it. And why should it matter? Ok, I'm getting off my soapbox now, otherwise I'll be here all night. lol Great chapter, Cassie!

Mikey, you're killing me here! Marcus is perfect and I demand a clone!!! Poor Brian. I still feel sorry for him. Tony too, but I think Brian was moreinvested in the relationship than Tony was, just from the things Brian said, so this is hitting him harder, even though he's the one to pretty much break up with Tony. Boy, that was a long run-on sentence. lol And...even if Tony sees Jared in the bookstore, he's in the same boat with his time; he still won't have time to spend on a full-time relationship. But maybe Jared won't mind. Ha, see, here I'm already putting them together. lol That would just kill Brian. I'm glad Tony and Jen made up. I'm glad she apologized. That's the worst when you started out as best friends and you break up. Not only do you lose your b/f/g/f, you lose your best friend too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to hear what Marcus has to say. =)

Where have I been that I missed this chapter? Marcus is wonderful. He's such a take-charge guy and he knows exactly what to do and how to get people moving. I need him in my every day life. lol Brian was really being unfair to Tony. I know he missed Tony but this is college; Tony needs to focus and make up all that work he missed. It's not like Tony's going out and hooking up with people! Brian needs to chill and not make Tony feel guilty. Ok, on to the next chapter.

Seems like Brandon and Chase have a lot in common. It's nice to see them bonding. I'm still really wary about The Scar. What is he up to? Why is his mission so dangerous? And most importantly, what the heck does it have to do with our boys?

Holy shit, what a mess!!!! I agree w/Jamein; trespassing is much better than murder or attempted murder! Too bad about the van though. It was a great van. And what a mess Miracle got into with Teacher Drew. lol

Man, I gotta sign up for Premium just so I can read "Save Tonight". It sounds like a great story!

Yay, Eli finally said it! Hopefully Noah will say it also and all will be good. Another great chapter, Rob.

They may like Mark now, but I'm sure they won't be shy about their feelings if they think their son is rushing into this with Mark, especially if Trey isn't going to school at home just b/c of Mark.

Man, I hope Brandon fires Gabe! That guy is such an asshole! I'm glad Helen and the boys figured out Brandon is just exhausted and not coked up. Ok, on to the next chapter!

Love country and Love Hunter; he's adorable! You should watch the CMA's from last year. He's playing "Wanted" on the piano, surrounded by fans and he's just so cute. It actually surprised me last year when a few country artists went mainstream: Hunter, Florida Georgia Line, Lady A. I guess Rascal Flatts has always been both...same with Taylor Swift and Kelly Clarkson.

Yup, Slytherin already told me it was Desp Housewives. Awesome show. btw.

Oh, yeah, Torchwood, I heard of that. lol I don't have any pay cable stations, so I really don't watch much TV. But he used to be on Nip/Tuck back in the day, didn't he? He had a few episode arc I think. That's why I know the name.