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I pray General Bradson didn't kill himself in that fall. It amazes me that the flight out to Cape Verdes is so, so long. I would never want to do that, come back, and then two weeks later do it all again. lol
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CSR Book Club Csr Story Selection: Shepherd's Crook
Lisa commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
This was such a terrific story! I don't usually read this type of story, but I guess I didn't pay attention to the story tags. Glad I didn't - I wouldn't have missed reading this for the world. It was such a great read! -
Beautiful, just beautiful.
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Thank God Brandon's pain got him to stop Eric from going any further. I'm thrilled of course that Chase didn't kick Brandon out of their room and call off the wedding. The whole encounter was just one big misunderstanding with drunkenness (is that such a word? lol), and bumps on the head thrown in for good measure. I just hope that the coming tension between the boys (all of them), will be resolved.
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Wow. That poem just blew me away. I don't normally read poetry, but I've read a few things from you in the past that really impressed me, so I thought I'd give this a go. Half-a-box of Kleenex later...it was such a beautiful poem, totallyy. Your imagery and detail and the words you chose to use, were simply beautiful. Thank you.
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Thank God Andy's going to be ok. Evan really did quite a number on him. He's lucky there was no lasting damage. Now Andy will have Dillon and Evan's trial to sit through. It's nice that Sam visited him in the hospital. I'm looking forward to the trial. I really liked the quote at the end of the chapter.
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Congratulations to all the winners! In my opinion, everyone was a winner by just being nominated. =) You all worked so hard to put out such wonderful work and I appreciate all the time and effort it took to create such terrific writing. You're all winners in my book. And thank you to Corneles for those hella awesome banners! =)
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Holy crap, what a chapter. That dirtbag Bruno and his lackey were going to KILL Brandon. He had a fucking CHAINSAW!!!! Wasn't it a chainsaw? Or something electric that he was trying to slash Brandon's HEAD with!!!! And wtf is gonna happen now with those bikers descending upon Brandon and Eric in their drunken state? This is NOT going to be good. I'm already dreading the next chapter.
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Goddammit! What is he, like superhuman? WHY CAN'T HE DIE???? lol Clump is back again?! Oh shit! As if Brandon doesn't have enough problems right now dealing with those two lowlife rednecks (no offense to rednecks anywhere! ), now he and his band may have to save the country from The Scar once again. Terrific chapter, CJ!
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Well, he had me going! But yes, throwing away thirty years is just horrible. Or twenty-six...but these cheating people don't think of their spouses or their kids; they just think with their dicks. Well, I guess the women don't, maybe they think with their wallets. I don't know. I've never done that. But being on the receiving end sure does suck. Another great prompt, KC! I'm glad you're back!
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You made me cry, dammit. That was really beautiful, Zandra.
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When you think of it, seven months isn't long at all. You guys are all doing the best you can. Jeremy, I don't remember if I asked you this in a previous review, so if I did I apologize. Do any of you guys or Billy's parents go to therapy? That might really help, especially for Billy's dad. Therapy may be able to help him pick up the pieces.
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Billy, the sequel will also blow you away! Definitely should be published. =)
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See, if I were the boys, I would have found another liquor store; I wouldn't want my hard earned money going to a business which employs ignorant homophobes. I'm looking forward to the wedding and bachelor party. Well, Linda and Jim's and then of course Brandon and Chase's.
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I can't believe that after everything the bikers have been through with these boys that some of them are still so homophobic. Didn't they see the big picture when they almost lost their lives? People can be so stupid. Ok, on to the next chapter. =)
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I'm just keeping my fingers crossed that nothing happens to Eric and Jim while they're with General Bradson. So funny - Eric has no idea that everyone knows he's not going to San Fran. lol
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I say it's a good thing that Helen knows of Eric's plans. I just have a bad feeling about this. And also about General Bradson.
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I can see all sorts of things going wrong with Eric's plan. The only good thing about it is that Jim will be going with him to check out the island. I hope they don't get stuck there, or any other mishap happens.
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I can just see Eric on a motorcycle dodging the LA traffic. Man, those paparazzi won't know what hit them. lol Helen will have a cow. Next will be some tats and piercings and he'll be one of Jim's bikers. Like the last story, I am amazed at all the things I am learning about building bombs and the government. lol Terrific chapter, CJ.
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Great chapter, CJ! Chase's proposal cracked me up! lol I really hope Helen and the boys can help Bradson find his son, but I don't see how they could do that. It's not like they can infiltrate enemy territory or anything...
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I am loving this sequel, CJ! Carlshitski - no wonder the boys changed their name to Carlisle! lol I can't wait to find out what the general has to say to the boys' parents. And of course I can't wait for the bachelor party; it should be a blast (hopefully no pun intended. lol Too many blasts for our boys)! And Eric gets to audition all the male strippers. Hmmmm, will he take a walk on the 'other' side again?
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Good for Noah! That ass Derek deserved that and so much more. How dare he call Noah a whore and trash after all the boytoy bimbos he's been through! Glad Noah finally told Eli how he felt. =)
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Chapter 14 - Swift Reunion
Lisa commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Swift Reunion
Omg, Comsie! I'm fangirl squealing louder than Lori! lol Tristan and Jesse are so friggen CUTE!!! I love how Jesse's this big online celebrity, but when all the cameras are gone and it's just him, he's a regular, shy, insecure boy. I loved when he mentioned Tristan in his video, well, not by name, but by cuteness. lol Poor Artie. He needs a boy of his own. But NOT that turd Jason. hehe I cannot wait for their second date! I hope Tristan's mom doesn't prevent him from going out. Great chapter, Comsie! Well worth the wait! -
Denny is very intuitive. Jeff had no idea he knew what was going on between him and Fitz. I can't imagine the turmoil going on inside of Jeff. On one hand I'm yelling, "Go for it! You've denied yourself for far too long.", and on the other hand I'm crying for Michele and their little boy. Michele will be heartbroken. It would be wonderful if Michele could be just like Angie from "Crosscurrents". =) Another great chapter, Adam!
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Lol, Sasha, I'm ashamed at you! lol Just kidding! It's one of his older songs. I had it stuck in my head while I was reading the chapter so when I was done I went into the "Song of the Moment" thread in the Lounge and posted it. I blamed it on you. And boy do I feel dumb - I thought PBR stood for Pabst Blue Ribbon beer. lololol You know, "...another PBR on the way..."
