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    Are we dating?

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Are we dating?

    Damn you, KC, my laptop just burnt out from the heat..............
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    "If you are happy and you know it......." :D KC, ya did it again.....simply brilliant.
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    Well done. Am glad I found it. I found the abundance of emotion very credibly portrayed. The fragile nature of their connection was always present, similar to a time-bomb ticking away in the background. The tension and passion were almost too much to bear. .......Yes, what will they get up to next???
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    These chapters get better and better! Hope we have a long ways to go.
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    This is such a treat! I especially loved the dialogue-it really revealed how strongly they are beginning to connect with each other. The Bolognese recipe is mouthwatering.
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    Am loving this. I was very fortunate to spend some of my "growing up" years just outside of London. This is bringing back fond memories. You got me hooked, again.
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    Chapter 10

    charlieocho commented on Kiltie69's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Just discovered this story and was drawn right in. Very fascinating and I am looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
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    Mom knows best

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Mom knows best

    Oh Good! I was starting to fret that we might be nearing the end. This chapter reveals that we have some ways to go. Don't want to finish this for a while. Another brilliant chapter, KC. (I hope that's not true about downloading porn.....my computer has been misbehaving recently!)
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    Behind Closed Doors

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Behind Closed Doors

    Really love how you set up the beginning of this chapter. Almost like a long, slow and steady drum beat intro, and then the rest just flowed so perfectly. Masterfully written.
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    Trust

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Trust

    OMG! Got so caught up in my own drama-filled world that I forgot to look for this! But I finally remembered I was missing something....and here I am. KC--another satisfying chapter. Thank you.
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    Home Sweet Home

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Home Sweet Home

    Bravo, KC, Bravo. You do not disappoint, even when "on the mend."
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    Kiss and Tell

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Kiss and Tell

    Here's sending megatons of healing your way.
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    Yea!! Ya done it again, KC......knocked the ball right out of the park.
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    Damn you, KC! It's gonna be a long week, waiting for more...... .
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    Great chapter, again. You have us impatiently waiting for more!
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    That was a challenging chapter to write, and also to read. You did it masterfully, I must say. (Had to put on my Sherlock Holmes' cap to find the Wizard of Oz reference in the last chapter--but I finally found it!)
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    Brilliant. Very gracefully balanced in so many ways. A pleasure to read. Am sort of glad to have a little "break" here, otherwise, I might just keep reading until I have finished it. Now if only I could find my "Live at Angkor Wat" DVD.
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    Oooooo! Lovely! Am so glad I took a chance on reading this story.
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    Chapter 15

    charlieocho commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 15

    Well....what a seductive story. Lots of little hooks to pull the reader in. I had totally forgotton how much I enjoyed the last story of yours that I read. Will do some catching up. Your storytelling is both riveting and otherworldly. Excuse me......I must get back to the story!
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    This is not a date!

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in This is not a date!

    A great start, KC. The pacing is just right. Looking forward to reading more of this.
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    Another mind-boggling chapter. Words of praise simply do not do justice to this gripping story. The full force of the hurricane--the shrieking wind, the flashing lightning--was right in your face. No shelter from this storm. Each time I think I have reached the uppermost level of respect for this author......he raises the stakes. :worship:
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    Fresh Air

    charlieocho commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Fresh Air

    "Your love keeps liftin' me higher Than I've ever been lifted before, So keep it up, yeah, quench my desire, And I'll be at your side, forever more, Yeah"! (Bravo.)
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    Hey Fever

    charlieocho commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Hey Fever

    Bravo! Worth waiting for. This isn't going to settle down any time soon. Did you mention at some point that this is somewhat autobiographical? Yikes! And you have survived....Wow. It's gonna take a week to calm down from reading this chapter. Onward!
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    This is such an incredible story. I took a little break from reading it and just got caught up. It will be disappointing when it is finished. There is so much to it. I especially enjoy all the geography and history lessons within it. A true tour de force. The suspense is communicated so well. The writing cannot be praised enough.
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