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drsawzall

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  1. Loved this and what a great use of the fox theme!!!!
  2. Well done!!! In the best tradition of Mel Brooks and Carl Reiner!!!!
  3. What a great use of the anthology theme, loved the part about the cats, hats, and waistcoats!!! And I am very glad that I now feel better about my 70-some odd tropical shirts, some go back to the days of Pearl Harbor in 1941!!
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    Chapter 1

    A unique take on the anthology theme, nice job...
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    Lovesquatch

    What a great use of the theme!! And breaking news, the commentators' fish sticks just hit the trash can!!
  6. Great use of the theme and very enjoyable!!
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    Prologue

    Time will tell...
  8. CJ James, the undisputed master of the cliffhanger, with every freaking chapter...it got to the point it was ridiculously repetitive, and for me started to distract from the story, and in my opinion, was unnecessary. it could have been sooo much better.... Please tell me you aren't gonna do the same...
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    Chapter 10

    One almost wonders if there is a curiosity on Luke's part that intrigues him....
  10. Great use of the prompt!!@!@ Loved the way it ended, right out of the Twilight Zone...
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    Matthew

    My memory can't quite remember what the oath Matthew has taken, and the details thereof...
  12. Has any one seen......sound of falling on the floor...
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    Chapter 21

    Very enjoyable and thank you for sharing this with us!!
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    Chapter 20

    So unnecessarily sad... The Major looked at Will for a long time, "I can't forgive you, you know that don't you." Will nodded, "Yes." "But you know I love you." "I know," Will replied quietly, looking up into those terribly sad eyes of his father. There would be no reconciliation, only understanding that they were so radically different there never could be. But then, you never could choose family; they often were the ones you were stuck with.
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    Chapter 19

    The minor major surprised me and I have to wonder where the half sister is...
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    Chapter 18

    RJ can't see the forests for the trees...coupled with the fact he needs an assholeectomy...
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    Chapter 17

    So very true...
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    Chapter 16

    Arge could use a swift kick to the testimonials...
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    Chapter 15

    Not a pleasant morning to say the least...
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    Chapter 14

    Women are from Venus and men from Mars, and no...99.9999999% of us are clueless and don't have ESP or was that PMS???
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    Chapter 13

    My father thought it was time to teach me how to drive one afternoon as we were heading home from the city. We were in a 1953 Chevy pick-up truck with no tailgate, and an oxygen and acetylene welding tanks in the back. He stopped on a hill and told me how to feather the clutch while holding the brake down while simultaneously stepping on the gas... I did all 3 actions, and much to my father's surprise, both welding tanks slid out of the back of the pick-up truck...
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    Chapter 12

    So very true!!!
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    Chapter 11

    Phew....
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    Busted!!!!
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