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    Chapter 45

    Like many others, I hope Tommy finds himself at Harrison West Noah...change is possible, but he reminds me of the fable about the scorpion and the frog... The Scorpion and the Frog - Wikipedia
  2. Not only is something rotten in Denmark, but in the coven/school as well...something is percolating in the background and Uma and Phoebe come off as less than truthful... I have to wonder if the girls were pawns in something larger... I suspect DNA will identify the dead girl on the couch as Kate...Will there be residual traces of magic that may point to the killer(s)??? Can't wait to see how this next, last chapter plays out!
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    Chapter 4

    One can only hope Anderson gets what's coming...Tho I feel harming Brady and leaving him behind means that he has lost a bargaining chip...
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    Chapter 45

    Can't add much to the comments above, they pretty much say it all...I do want to thank you for taking the time to write this and share it with us!!!
  5. A fine example of some of the great stories on this site!
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    Chapter 70

    Did you miss the balloon sleeves and wide lapels that needed their own zip code?
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    Epilogue

    Thank you for sharing this with us, a unique story as it is. You certainly piqued my interest, as evidenced by several of my comments!!!
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    Chapter 70

    A bit late to the party here, hopefully Cal and Brady move on from Charlie, not that he is a bad person, he's just dissociative. Wish the two of them well in the future, and while I may have been 'hard' on the boy...Alan too!!! And you can never go wrong with a little Marvin in the background, he and Otis Redding were unmatched!!! If you look at the lower left-hand corner of the video from 2:57 to 3:02, that's me with the striped shirt getting my groove on....
  9. Glad to see Åke settling in, I wonder why he has a reluctance to explore a relationship with Matthijs...
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    Chapter 47

    At the beginning, it seemed to me that whoever was responsible for maintaining the grounds simply failed at their job; it seemed to me that no one did the needed property maintenance... Am I wrong in understanding that John, Ethan, and Erik were a throuple? Do rotary phones still work these days?
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    Chapter 25 S3

    For those interested... The Brown Palace Hotel | Iconic Historic Hotel in Denver
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    Frauds

    Not for Wishbone... Oh boy! Seeking shelter in a hotel room, just the two of them alone! This is going to be so romantic!
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    Chapter 25 S3

    Wow...what could those 4 men be up to??? A VIP, a robbery, or some other sort of skullduggery??? If they were personal security, I would suspect the guys would be a bit more discreet.... Do what you need to feel better @Bill W, we'll be here patiently waiting...Thanks for this chapter!!
  14. More 'enhancements' on the way??? Is gAI safe?
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    Chapter 14

    And they say mothers always know their child's sexuality. Is it possible that she spotted tendencies in Creek as a child growing up?? That she's a bit nervous or concerned? I have to believe that if Marvin had not walked into that coffee shop, it would have been some time before he reached out to Creek...
  16. Another fine example of the very talented authors we have here!!!
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    Chapter 24

    Well... there's a surprise....Killian has a lot to learn, going fearlessly where angels fear to tread...
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    Chapter 3

    I mean...WTF...where is/was all the vaunted security these jamokes supposedly had...talk about sloppy....With the first incursion, they knew someone was coming, as a trip wire was sprung. Did they not learn anything, or upgrade their defenses?
  19. I'd be an oik if I didn't love the beginning of this story....
  20. Oh boy, another story in the Hugilverse!!!
  21. Uh huh.. Basic training, part 2! Boy, this author sure is dragging her heels, huh? What, Wishbone is chopped liver???? At this time, I would like to take a moment to explain something. This is not a harem story. And if someone was inclined to argue against that claim, at the very least, this is not Mason's harem story. It is Sakis'.
  22. "Like" totally I'm not a fan either....fun chapter
  23. The following makes me wonder as to what happens when a slave is too old to be of any purposeful use... "This damn chair is just uncomfortable." Dante stretched, there being another crack in his back, but also in his shoulders, and eyed Sawyer, who pressed a hand into the small of his back and seemed to be trying hard not to grimace. Sawyer definitely didn't look like it, as he was heading hard toward forty and was a worker and they were, to put it crassly, well, consumables with wear parts Ok...talk about role reversals, who shoved the stick up Frank's backside, and the change we see in Tom?? "Dude! What are you doing?" He squinted, coughed and spat. "Just doing my job." Frank grumbled and a second wave trickled down Dante's collar. "Yeah, sure..." He spat again and pushed himself out from under the machine. "And the slaves get to suffer." The sawdust scratched his skin and he guessed that later, when he went to change clothes, he would find it everywhere where definitely none belonged. "Fuck you, Dante!" Frank snapped with a face like he couldn't decide whether to throw a tantrum or a crying fit. This admittedly confused Dante a bit, but on the other hand, he was genuinely upset. Before he could snap back, however, Tom returned. Dante is 27, what truly is behind the sudden appearance of his mother?? I suspect there are underlying reasons that prompted this visit. It is as if Dante, all of a sudden, has "value" to his mother, and what is that value?? "But you're the first born of your generation, and traditionally they're brought home," she continued before he could ask what she was doing here. "Home?" he echoed, puzzled, glancing in search for help at Mistress Alice, who shrugged weakly. Is there a work-around the 'family service laws'?? Is it possible that Danaka Sapphire could find a way to 'force ' Dante to go with her? "I assume you've heard about the Family Service Laws?" He nodded faintly. Of course, he didn't know all the details of this complex set of rules, but he did know the most basic things: if a mother laid claim to her adult son under the Family Service Law and the son agreed, the current mistress had little chance to protest. If he wanted, he could return to Denser's Port with Danica. He glanced from Mistress Alice to Danica and back again, but his mistress once more shrugged weakly. A very intriguing chapter, and despite all he's been through with the Mitchels, he feels this is where his family is....
  24. Just loved this story from the first chapter on, as evidenced by my very first comment...and yes, Rib Eyes rule the grill in this house!!!! Now y'all know a friend or two, please raise your hands, who just may have needed a ride on the short bus for being just plain stupid!!! drsawzall 73,573 Posted May 24, 2021 Popular Comment Well, you had me when the ribeyes came to the table but the following was classic.. Jett’s brain had gotten stuck somewhere in between ‘needs the short bus’ and ‘just plain stupid’ at Kyle’s confession. When his wits returned he managed to whisper, “I’m not going to stop you.”
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    Chapter 2

    Two fucking years, Mr Grayson needs to pay for his misdeeds by his ending coming ever so slowly... Something that doesn't jibe... The cabin they are staying in survived an attack where Mr Vincent blew himself up. Brady has been told that after the firefight, Mr Vincent's network out there will hunt him down if he leaves... Not sure I would be comfortable staying in place, but look for a new bolt hole...the perimeter was breached and Mr Vincent did make it inside... I'm reminded that back in the '60s there was a movie called Zulu where a small force of British soldiers held off thousands....not sure I would want to take my chances Not that I'm a coward, just an oversized scardy cat.... Loving this so far!!!
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