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Yes, it does, and those like the a-hole Lauren do get caught. The boys realize what happened, will they have the nerve to call him out on it, to send him packing, or inform the authorities?
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Chapter 42 - Muddy
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 42 - Muddy
Will Tawani be able to overcome those kryptonite charms?? -
Time to put them on the back foot and take them out..
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Perhaps it is because of something in Zal they can't control, need or want....
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Wait till you are a couple of decades older, it just may well be the highlight of your day....just sayin...
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I think Sinjin is a combo of both, god and spirit guide, and that he and Madam Woo are one in the same...
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Wait till he realizes what puberty is going to demand, there's a lot of pent-up sailors looking for a mission...
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Or they work for one...
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And destined for a career in mediocre middle management...
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Heck...repeat all of 'em!!!
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Chapter 40 - The Meet Cute
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 40 - The Meet Cute
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The thing that bothers me about Micah is that he seems to be a one-way street...I will most likely be wrong in the end but something is off with the boy...
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I'm sorry, as written, Ollie was way off base and took liberties he should not have had. I also agree with @Summerabbacat,, this chapter certainly has your readers commenting.
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I'm like WOW at this chapter, both good and bad...Has Mr Pepe LePew confined the illicit pictures/videos strictly to himself, or have they been 'shared' online? As of the moment, we do not have an answer to this, as @Altimexis has pointed out, just the thought has me seeing red!! Then, there is some fallout that will inevitably take place behind the scenes, between Nick's mother and the school, and serious financial recompense to be worked out. I have to wonder what they saw in hiring this cesspit to replace Mr G....who was responsible and vetted his qualifications??? Did Jack call his Grandmother? Miss Charice, the jury is still out, and I am liking her so far...why am I reminded of her twin sister from another mother...
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Kids...here are three examples that justify youthinasia....
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This thought also crossed my mind, and I also wonder about the source of Lachlan's funding for the start-up of his company...if that is how he got his start... As insistent as the a-hole was at the doorway, I would not put it past him to try to kidnap Rory...I would reach out to the police and give them a copy of the recording of his behavior...
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My grandfather used to say...follow the money. When one's ox is being gored, those affected by the demise of their pet projects scream the loudest...
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A fantastic short story, harkening back to those days when we sought other, like-minded folk! A very enjoyable read!!
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Thank you for this and the story of a love that endured and those priceless friendships among the crew...I am not trying to be greedy, but...another peek into what Jamie and William are up to, along with the rest of the crew sometime would be lovely! Thank you for sharing this with us!!!
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Cozy days on the banks of the river Rhine
drsawzall commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Cozy days on the banks of the river Rhine
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I still have issues with the last chapter, specifically how Ollie took advantage of Mack. Regardless of whether Mack was aware or not, the fact that no permission was given for what Ollie did was fundamentally wrong and on so many levels.
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A lovely, descriptive chapter of what will be their new home, what other wonders will they find?
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Just loved this chapter and the way it grew naturally....obviously there are many unresolved plot points, but this chapter was just sweetness and light... As to the future conflicts, especially the "businesses"...might the boys possibly found a champion??? Across the floor, watching them in the dark corner slow dancing together. Blake Wolochowski smiled, and nodded. Now the pieces all fit together. They weren’t front and center, they were hardly noticed in the whole swirling energy of the dance. But those two boys were finally beginning to find each other.
