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  1. drsawzall

    Epilogue

    This was very well done, and you had the rainbow of not only red herrings but others waving their look at me flags!!! Thank you for sharing!!! PS...please mark complete!!
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    Chapter 5

    This can go one or two ways, and I think Declan is gonna get lucky if the comments he made at the end of the last chapter were honest...
  3. My thanks as well, advice like this is always welcome!
  4. Some good advice here to follow!!!
  5. That's because she has plenty of "sister Karen's" out there...
  6. It's a small world after all....I'm wondering how their connection to Kevin Bacon works...
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    Chapter 5

    Wow....♨️
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    Chapter 20

    @Philippe One last thought, one of my best friends and his wife found themselves as permanent guardians for their grandson and granddaughter at 67 years old. Their father OD" shortly after the birth of the youngest. The mother found herself on welfare and had several drug episodes." Fast forward to the present day, the grandson is 13, and the granddaughter is 11. My friend's wife was concerned that they were out of touch and went to see them. The house was a pigsty, the mother passed out on heroin, and the boyfriend was nowhere to be found. They find out that neither kid had been to school since last November, missing 5 months of school Our Division of Children and Families was supposed to keep tabs on the kids because of the mother's drug history, and there's no record that they ever did, nor did the school ever call about their absences... Much of this could go away if we paid and fully staffed these agencies. Sadly, that would mean your increased tax dollars at work....
  9. drsawzall

    Introductions

    Things that make you go hummm, what could possibly happen???
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    Chapter 21

    Hopefully, the author won't throw any outrageous curveballs...let this grow organically... The whole sex ed part had me laughing my head off... “Look,” she said, rubbing her temples. “I know teenage boys. You’re basically just hormones with legs. And if you haven’t done it already, eventually… you will.”
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    Chapter 6

    What a fantastic chapter, brought back some memories for me...I'd been crushing on an older boy who finally broke some barriers and roadblocks in my head as he gave me the benefit of his experiences, and taught me lessons that stick with me to this day...
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    Chapter 20

    How long will any of the lessons learned stick with Killian??? Let's hope Walters shares the byline of the story!!! Will Killian's phone have a decient audio recording of the events in the barn? We know Flynn killed Marco and neither he or Caleb will escape justice... Oh...as an afterthought, We know the roads will be safe, Killian won't be driving for a bit...
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    Chapter 15

    Well...currently letters home are being sent in the year 1809...and you know who shows up at Captain Pitt's house in 1823, that meeting might be a precursor to the Boston molasses flood!!!
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    Chapter 12

    Oh no...he was a well serviced rent boy from the beginning
  15. And you're no Jenette MacDonald...and Eddie says...My kingdom for a horse...
  16. What do you do when a carefully crafted plan gets the ending all wrong? Or in this case, possibly all right?
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  17. Marvelous...simply marvelous and a real hoot to read!!!
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    Chapter 15

    How much longer will the pressure last before it explodes???
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    Pressure Points

    What can they learn from the following... When it was over, they stood amid the ash. Sirens wailed. Civilians cried. The attackers—those who hadn’t fled—lay unconscious. But there was no victory.
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    Chapter 12

    Time for the crew to start their own agency....F'ck em!!! Almost forgot Robbie...what a mess....
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    Chapter 5

    All I can say is Jimmy must have testimonals the size of naval oranges... My first concert was 3 Dog Night in the old Boston Garden, and I managed to see The Doobie Brothers just before they made it big with a kid from work.
  22. Why is Nelson/Eddie smiling....
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    Chapter 20 S3

    Cruella is finding out that all good things are coming to her and her poor car...And another successful trip to the hospital...
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    Chapter 22

    A fantastic day for the three of them...
  25. Just back from an early morning run to the local grocery/supermarket and noticed on the way Halloween decorations in a couple of yards and all sorts of bite-sized candy for sale at the store!!! Talk about a timely setting of the mood!!!
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