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Chapter 47: Accelerated Plans
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 47: Accelerated Plans
If I understand this world and school as you have described it, Steven and his cronies should be facing expulsion and serious consequences... On the other hand, this just might buy Shawn a bit of cover from the curiosity of others higher up... There wasn't any justification for what the assholse did or letting them remain in school... -
Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
I don't know about anyone else but...ifin y'all caved when or before I did, raise your stinky hands... At this point, I was soooo done with the game, winning, losing or a draw just didn't matter... Five wasn’t hesitant as he moved his hand again into Percy’s balls. And if the noises the boy made were any indication, he didn’t mind in the least. He switched legs and did the same thing. Though this time, instead of just pressing the back of his hand, he fondled them gently as he spread the oil. -
Love is in the air, every sight and sound...
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As a Doctor of, hey..I stayed in a Holiday Express Inn once...Sawzallology, my diagnosis, after careful examination, is that our angst-ridden boys need copious amounts of oral sex...let's clean the pipes, rub off the rust, polish till it shines... while tickling the testimonials...
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is it possible he is suffering from bad and risky investments?
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Possibly just worn out from an ever-demanding job?
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The hook has been set deeply, just enthralled with this story!!! I can't believe I beat @Summerabbacat on this tidbit...was the color out of a bottle??? The woman with him had a helmet of blond hair, a testament to the hairdresser’s art, Now here in the states, while rarely will ancillary buildings be called 'outhouses', that term more often than not refers to... “So it must be true.” Tom laughed. “In fact, I’ve been thinking about that.” He looked at me, as if assessing my reaction. “About builders being shysters?” “Well, how you go about doing up the outhouses. How we go about it. I had another proper look around.”
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Chapter 18: A Place of Love
drsawzall commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 18: A Place of Love
Ohmy goodness...where is Emily??? -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Do like I do...fold it in half... -
Interesting beginning, looking forward to seeing where this goes....
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OOOhhhhh a pissing contest betweemn Alex and the Director...hummm... Then what could possibly be going on!! "Sebastien, the project. I want to move fast, you need to accelerate it. Are your assets prepared?" The corners of Sebastien's mouth curled. He nodded. "Very." The Director's eyes narrowed and he leaned forward. "Good. Let them know they can move up the timeline. Tonight, if they have an opportunity." Sebastien nodded. "Tonight."
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The Mini Orgy and High School Begins
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Mini Orgy and High School Begins
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What could you possibly infer?? Perhaps additional travel courtesy of Ivas???
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Chapter 44: Capture the Flag
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 44: Capture the Flag
I enjoyed this chapter as well, my only concern is that Shawn may be becoming a bit too obvious... -
Done!!! Need to review, check for errors...ha...ha, mispellings..ha...ha and all sorts of fox paws...it was minus 1 this morning and the day did not get much better...great day to stasy inside!!
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Thanks for this and growing my reading list!!!!
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The sleeper who was awakened
drsawzall commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in The sleeper who was awakened
And the truth will set you free... -
Ok...so I don't have to fly out first class...business will do!!
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Frosted Hearts: The Overlook
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Overlook
So...with all the mentions of mines and cave-ins, are we to suspect...some foolishness??? -
Translated as buffalo chicken wings???
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A great start and I can see all sorts of possible uses for...
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I get ther feeling there's more to come regarding what happened to Cain.... Then there's this... "Can it be," Marc began slowly and softly after a pause, "that you are trying to symbolically wash all the dirt off yourself?"
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Chapter 43: The Breaking of the Fellowship?
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 43: The Breaking of the Fellowship?
The following has me pondering as to the true gist of the Professor's comment; much was inferred...it would seem that more than one person/professors/AI and gAI are more in the dark than they realize...how much of the 'history' the professor shared is/was actually true??? He looked at me like I'd just told him I was from another universe. "Look, I'm just faculty here, doing my best to educate young minds so the military can take them and destroy them in— never mind, it doesn't matter. But I care about you guys. If you won't tell me, you should talk with someone. At least walk for a little bit before coming back for Science. Go outside, get out of this auditorium." -
I could go with that as long as it was somewhere else...far...far...away!!!
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Pick one...any one...but please pick Watchers...I'm an old man....
