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  1. What could possibly happen? And a big dick could make you king…
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    Comments above pretty much cover my thoughts. Davin, Gavin, and Colt remain enigmas with Davin being the first to reach out…it is still way to early to make any suppositions.
  3. Time for Brother Mathias to taste hot lead from the barrel of a gun....
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Tell me the following wasn't, and I hope to god it wasn't, the birth of disco.... And they obeyed. Oh, how they obeyed. The rhythm pulsed like a heartbeat, echoing across the marble. Varius moved with it — spinning, swaying, strutting — in ways no Roman had moved before. His dance wasn’t bound by gravity or tradition. It was the physical embodiment of rebellion wrapped in silk and sass.
  5. Then what's the conflict???? Simply milking the populace while they sit in their ivory towers???
  6. Wait till she has to do books 3 & 4....
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Someone should tell Kevin and his cohort that somewhere, a group of Neanderthals is putting out a missing poster...
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    Chapter 4

    Up to this point, none of us...and I think the author, knows completely where they'll end up..We have a hint of present-day sojourn, and that should blow a few minds.... I think we've all been there...once or twice, and I laughed so hard there's rice on my keyboard and not for the first time... "Lizard," Wojciech leaned in, his nose wrinkling slightly, to sniff the meat. It did, surprisingly, smell palatable. He looked suspiciously over at his companion. "Are you absolutely certain it’s safe to eat? We are in an unknown land, Stoker, with unknown… culinary habits." "Well," Stoker said, considering the question with a thoughtful tilt of his head, "I had a chicken that gave me a touch of the runs once, sorr, back home. Didn't kill me though." He chuckled.
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Hopefully no one else has discovered the opening and what they will find will have been undisturbed since it was first sealed!!
  10. drsawzall

    Thresholds

    Will the mirror images have increased abilities? if so, how are they duplicating?
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 15

    I have to agree, this was a fantastic chapter!!!
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    I'm intrigued by the possibility of some "bigwigs" possibly being blackmailed by Ira... I'm also wondering if a visit back to see Caleb might be in order, letting him know the secret room is known and it may reveal who else has been there...
  13. Why do I get the feeling that the Lord Mayor will never see that seat cushion again and...could there be something important inside of the padded seat???
  14. I'm gonna guess a few understandings will occur!!!
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Someone has it bad.....Chubby hit the nail smack dab on the head...
  16. I'm gonna assume that this society does not inhabit the entire planet, what are these other societies like???
  17. At least 4 parts, 10,000 words long with an epilogue for the epilogue!!!
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    This just keeps getting better and better, there's a trouble with storms...one never knows what damage they will leave in their wake... Let Pitt keep his gloves and his moral distance. Jamie Blake was a storm gathering on the horizon, one the lieutenant would not ignore forever. Let William Pitt keep his polished mask. Storms didn't ask permission. I am stunned that Daniel is only nine, what a tough life he must have had to go to sea so early...
  19. The holiday should prove to be entertaining at the least!!
  20. drsawzall

    Cursed

    Not all disabilities and illnesses are visible. A well-written story that gives us a glimpse of a day in the life of one who struggles.
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    Cursed

    This one hit hard and close to home for me. The son of a good friend has Crohn's disease and has lost his lower bowel from a surgical intervention and an ostomy. While he's feeling better, he'll carry a hidden reminder every day. There are new biologic drugs out there that can work wonders, such as , Humira, which I take monthly for psoriasis, a genetic cousin to Crohn's
  22. Hummm Then a faint shuffle. Zereth, bloodied but alive, pulled himself from the rubble. His silver hair was streaked with mud and blood, his face twisted in rage and resolve. A handful of surviving Helmsfirth soldiers staggered to his side, and with a final glare at the oblivious heroes, he led them limping into the distance, vanishing into the smoke and trees. Don't we all wish to be so lucky... Ash tipped his head back and laughed, loud enough that a few soldiers turned to look. “He’s gonna be born swinging a sword, just watch. It’s in the blood!” GASP...you mean a piano-playing encyclopedia junkie???
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    But will it do Hugo any good where they end up next???
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    There are so many ways this could go, and the title is truly ambiguous at the moment as to whom the consequences will apply to... Three of the bandits have suffered the consequences of their choices... Sam learned some harsh consequences as well... Is their quest over with the return of the girl???
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    Chapter 1

    Oh my...that's an intriguing start!!
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