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I think this was your best chapter, I loved the part with Cian...

Bout time and yes @Cane23, go...go...go power rangers!!! Is it too much to ask to give Scarlet The Bald this world's version of gastroparesis...oh wait...she might...it would spalin some things... Seriously, do what you need to get yourself taken care of!!!

Yes, but how many setbacks will they encounter??? Let's just let 'em kick ass from start to finish....

That's where Cian steps in....😄

How about when the battle is over and they find their romantic hideaway.....and Elion should get pregnant...

With descriptions such as below...no wonder Thalion hummed through a mouthful of food. “Oh, that one? The floaty, gentle one telling me to be calm and serene and all that rot?” He waved a hand. “Of course. She drops in now and then. I find her incredibly patronizing, but I do enjoy her breakfast suggestions.” Kieran’s expression darkened. “And you just listen to her?” “I don’t exactly get a menu of options,” Thalion said breezily. “It’s either obey or spiral into madness. And I hate spiraling before noon.”

Well the surprise that Holden and Elion were more than the sum of their parts was great, not as wonderful as Rory using the death curse... I must be an outlier, King Thalion we hugely unimpressive. It is way past time to put these A-Holes on the back foot, I mean...it's past time to take the initiative...

Glad to see things are smooth at the Dunlops, Amy seems like a good fit...Marie-Louise and teenage boys, what could possibly go right???

This should prove to be very interesting, however, Several of the leading archaeologists working in Egypt today happen to be women!!

I agree with the comments and as noted above, this was a very informative chapter....

My spidey sense is tingling as well...insert the theme from Jaws here.... "Thank you, I'll miss you," he told them, hugging both. "We'll miss you, too," one of them replied. The other added, "Don't worry, I'm sure you'll have a great time at BBC. My days in college were some of the best of my life." I hadn't really been listening, still preoccupied with societal taboos from Earth-616, but something clicked in my head. Wasn't that what my dads had said? Come to think of it, wasn't that what Lev at the hospital had said, too? "Yes," gAI verified. "Exact same words as your dads, and almost exactly the same as Dr. Metasis, not Lev." "My spidey sense is tingling," I told gAI silently. "I agree, that is … odd."

I think for most of us, our futures look to be very warm....

With that latest interaction with the Prime Minister and Foreign Minister, you can bet that they will harbor some displeasure at being "corrected" as to the present lay of the land and negotiations. And bluntly being told that Daventry is not to be blamed it share in any approbations if things go sideways.... Without any way to counter Grainger, you can bet that instructions to put him back out to sea are in the works....

My thoughts exactly, there's DNA in the condom and prints on the bags of chips... let's not forget the possibility of DNA on the sleeping bag... Will Killian enter all the newly discovered info and such in his trusty notebook??? Pray tell...what kind of trouble is going to find Killian before the weekend is over???

Interesting comments, I remain curious as to the watch taken from the dead German soldier....

Methinks the jewelry soothed the waters! Not sure the Prime and the Foreign Minister's realize the depth of Grainger's connections if push came to shove and bless Cavendish for some clever thinking!!! “Thank you, Cavendish, for seeing the threat to me, and thank you George, for jumping in to defend me,” Daventry said sincerely as soon as they’d repaired to the drawing room. “I am glad I was able to help,” Cavendish said, then got a bit nervous. “I am hoping the government follows through with our plan, but if they do not, we will have a monstrous battle on our hands.” “I would think that going up against the government would merely make us part of the opposition,” Granger noted. Cavendish shook his head. “If they launch an attack on Daventry, you will use your star power to defend him, and then they will be exposed, not only as being wrong, but for being dishonorable.” John Nash is certainly ahead of his time, isn't he...I found the following to be very interesting... Who Flushed First? The Early Adoption of Private Drainage in London 1812-1847 - Economic History

I'm reminded for some reason of a movie called "Throw Mama Off The Train", and I kept thinking throw Noah off the freaking train...Then there's this, which is ever so true... And I remember thinking: I don’t deserve either of them. I'm hoping against all hope that this indecision isn't gonna last another bazillion chapters cause it would kill a great story...

Looks like full steam ahead and thankfully they won't need those "yellow" rocks!!!

I get the feeling that the three of them are like ships that pass in the night...will someone hit the foghorn!!!!

I am team Elliot.....

I have to wonder if our hero will ever use the tool he's carrying to his advantage!!!

Poor Matt, being called or intimated as to being the "undefined" could, might, may be an issue down the road... Hope Freddie's eyes are ok....

Thanks for taking the time to share this with us!!

Go figure, never heard of this before!!!

This is a very well-crafted story, one I am enjoying very much!!