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Such an engaging/interesting chapter, Dad was so cute when trying to have an honest conversation with Tyler about sex and let it slip about how he finally managed to date his mother, who was she seeing at that time...and who was he seeing, and was he walking a tad on the 'other' side of the street???? Talk about another trip to Mars, the scene/setting was just so captivating and then you just had to include the following...I laughed so hard there was a clean-up call on aisle keyboard... “I’m better than okay,” Brandon assured him with a look of concentration on his face. “Feel free to move about the cabin.”

A pirate tale like no other and a very enjoyable read!!

This was very enjoyable and thank you for adding it to these pages.

The bigger question is, could she safely raise a child???

Interesting to say the least, I hope to hear that there are stories, a thousand years into the future, of then Arch-Duke Golden's very painful demise via "The Right of Correction"...the prick...

And a happy Easter to all.... Somehow...Renn will trip himself up, of that I have no doubt and break Zdain's spirit...

I don't think we've seen the last of Marie-Looser...there's bound to be some asthmatic, cancer ridden Hell's Angles out there...

A harsh and powerful reminder that all you need is to be true to yourself...

Thank you for this, for when all else is lost, be true to yourself... And what now? How do I fill the empty space in this shell? This void left by your eviction? Can the host survive without the parasite? I think so A wise friend said to me “The opposite of shame is pride”

A reminder that one should look before one leaps and to treat others as you would want to be treated...

As much a parable as a poem, very well done!!~!

It is constantly amazing to find, and relearn, that much can be said in so few words...

The following snippets truly spoke out to me...Thank you!!! So I ask: why presume to insist that everyone wear lifetime labels if we can’t all believe such things to be as true as kisses underneath the streetlights or laughter in the rain or their love? ******** Our puritans protest too much, I think for they forget what’s written in the book Judge not, lest ye be judged – but fabulate that Jesus would have grudged to sit beside and bless those who might look as if they should prefer to dress in pink or change the gender of their underwear while all the scribes and pharisees stood there.

A couple of two thought provoking poems, well worth the time to read!

I enjoyed both and found them to be thought provoking. While I could relate to poem 1, poem 2 really grabbed my attention and left me thinking! Well done!!!

So...Alice confirmed, that barring any catastrophe, her plan is to grant Dante his freedom, Tom still remains a putz, and I have little to no respect for him and, for the lack of better words, Frank needs to come out of his many compartmented closets and grow up....

I thought that those who participated in the anthology so far, have done a fantastic job!!!

So...Richter arrives to save the day and then there is Edward, The Marquis of New York, does he become Arch-Duke Golden, the prick?

Now that you mentioned it, Russ's photos had me doing a little 'adjustment' dance in my desk chair.....

I've been having much of the same feelings... In the meantime, let's get to know the babies!!!

This chapter had me smiling from start to finish...just loved it!!!!

Personally, I thought Jake was a hoot, wiseass, and a tad precocious....I did note the following about Jake... Tyler nodded but couldn’t help but hear Daniel say as he walked away, “Hey babe, before Jake says anything, you and I need to have a little talk tonight.” Then there was this little bomb drop, now...how to tie Junkyard Matt, Daniel, and Tyler's father all together... That shocked Tyler and to cover he asked, “How do you know him?” She leaned back in her chair and steepled her fingers. She answered quietly, “I went to high school with his husband, Jesse. Actually, your father and Jesse were really good friends back then.” “You say that like they are no longer friends at all,” Tyler mused as he tried to read the emotion that flickered across her face. “You know how it goes, your amazing friends in high school and then you grow apart with college, and what have you,” She replied smoothly. The comment..."the what have you"...leaves so much unsaid....like car chases, jail, and earlier trips to Mars...perhaps/maybe???? I think Devin is struggling with his sexuality, more so than he would like or is comfortable...denial is a river a mile wide, and not only in Egypt!!

How do they make Abel 'whole' again....what happened to him was truly despicable...it's well past time to get to 'Greenland"...

And now to acquaint themselves with the mysteries and pleasure that London offers... Will there be another trip back to Egypt?