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Chapter 11 - Dry Land
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Dry Land
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I was thinking that Greg and the MIB were one and the same, it would be a hoot if Greg inadvertently helped to end the MIB... How far from one of the theme parks are they or a shopping mall???
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From my comment in the last chapter, Connor could have the next baby!!!!! It would be such poetic justice.... "What happens when I go into labor?" M asked. "I did a few minor modifications to your body," Mother said. "You have a cervix. It's behind your prostate." "What?" Connor made a face. "When you go into labor, your cervix will start having painful contractions. It'll begin to dilate so your baby can be born—" "See!" Connor cried out. "I told you you'd destroy your asshole!" M glanced fearfully at the drone and finally, Mother addressed Connor's shock and horror head on. "He'll go right back to normal. I redesigned his body for this specific process." "I don't know why," Connor scoffed. "This is completely unnatural." "It's natural now," Mother said smartly. "Perhaps more males will chose to be modified like M in the future. He is the first, but he does not need to be the last."
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Poor Marcus...stuck with the exact opposite of Connor.... Thoughts on M wanting a second child...what a hoot if it were Connor was the one carrying that child...now's there is a happy ending I'd like to see... What will Mother come up with, will the MIB make an attempt during M's delivery???
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Old habits are difficult to break... "Don't be so negative," M said. "I know we can do this." Connor laughed darkly. "With a drone from Best Buy?" M jumped up and leapt at Connor over the bundles of cords. He shoved him right through the door and slammed him into the wall out in the hallway with an incredible strength. Connor choked on his tongue as he lost all the breath in his body. Back in the room, Nathan started to chortle with glee. Connor gazed into M's eyes with complete shock. The blond leaned into his face. He pressed his forearm painfully into Connor's broad chest. "What the fuck?" Connor hissed. "You're hurting me!" "Stop doubting my power, Connor," M breathed into his face. "I used to have a problem with seizures, but I don't think it'll be an issue anymore, once the baby is born." "Wha-what?" "I told you. I'll figure this out," M said. "I will, Connor. I'll fix everything. Just wait and see," he pressed. For some reason I am reminded of the TV game show "The Weakest Link".... starring you know who....
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Might there be a 'romantic' interest for Oscar as well???? Batteries Oscar, don't forget the batteries....
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If only we could...if only we could,
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So, in the meme time.... Anything else you care to recommend???
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Thia was the right chapter at the right time, Bryan finally heard the words he has been hearing all along, here's hoping the help he gets works...BTW...Billy was spot on!!! Caleb, how my heart goes out, that he would rather be anyone but himself, my anger at this isn't so much directed at Diego, Steve, or Bryan, but at the fucktards at the school he attends to, there isn't enough space or time for me to fully vent my feelings here... Diego and Steve need to keep talking with the boys and the boys need to do the same, and not just conversations starting with "And how was your day...?" The Fucktards girlfriend, Miss Diesel Tailpipe...How can she think a long-term relationship is possible given the preponderance evidence??? Now as to your brain fog dear author, as a Dr. of Sawzallogy, my informed opinion is as follows....
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Chapter 10 - To the Sea
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 10 - To the Sea
So much hate...what will they find once they cross this body of water?? -
Pretty please...
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Right on Tris!!! Could not have said it any better...
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I remain concerned about Hunter's backstory and was surprised to see he was partially deaf. Here's hoping things are about to improve for him. I hope he has a chance to see his mother before she passes...and the step-ass is caught looting what belongs to Hunter, with serious legal consequences!!
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Chapter 9 - The Forest
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The Forest
If Tygo can freeze the world, why not have her do so in the cities that others are cleaning up and have the bad guys teleported to a place they can't leave... From Ch 4... “Sorry, kid, I left him in Teshon City with his sister and a bunch of our people. A teleporter brought me here yesterday.” A teleporter? Djaruki thought. Is there a way I could have traveled all this way without walking? She was very curious and asked aloud, “Is the teleporter here with you? Also, if this place is unfriendly to our kind, then why’d you come here?” -
Chapter 7 - Z'Matri
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Z'Matri
Missed this chapter...is it possible that one shift can neutralize others? -
Things are getting a bit sticky now...By sealing off the Bastion, might this possibly work against them?? “I won’t sit behind these walls while the people I swore to defend are killed!” Thalanil roared. “This is truly your will?” Laia looked at Tamasi uncertainly. “Yes, I think it is for the best,” Tamasi’s purple eyes searched Laia’s for support. Laia nodded solemnly and then raised her necklace from around her neck. “Members of the Wizard Council,” Laia spoke to herself more than anyone in the room, “We shall stay and defend the Bastion from enemy forces.” There was a quiet pause as deep resonant sounds hovered in the air and then Thalanil’s anger drained from his elven face, his eyes blinked as if suddenly heavy.
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Ben Franklin once said that 3 people can keep a secret as long as 2 of them are dead!!
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Could not have said this any better...I do wonder about Heyward's desire to meet Greg... Donald Mitchel is a user of the worst kind, a true prick...
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Ha, I've been thinking the same... Or what if he gets an arm from a ginger like me, with millions of freckles?! 😜 Or a straight man (which is the most likely), is he going to be...what was the word...more...'diagonal'?! 😁 Better than being called bifurcated.... Or had a sister with one leg called Eliene... Truly this proves the need for the 'Groan" emoji.... There will still be issues surrounding Manny's recovery, and there is always the possibility that a transplant might not work. However, prothesis' have come a long way and might be an alternative!!
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I may have mentioned this elsewhere but so much of my and my generation's past is considered history...and to think there are those who refuse to believe I had a stegosaurus for a pet!!! Thanks!!
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Be careful not to push Hunter too hard, it is a wonderful thing that is being done, I wonder of Hunter has claim to the house his stepfather tossed him out of...he may need legal help as well!!
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Chapter 8 - Gawa & Tisa
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Gawa & Tisa
When your enemy is intent on destroying you and no amount of persuasion will or can deter them, what do you do??? Is it wrong to stop by any means necessary those who would end you without compunction or hesitation??? -
Nathan's stupidity has borne fruit, perhaps the demon can bring Nathan to the witch in the swamp, or there just may be a cure on the other side in the tear in the fabric the demon and the 'goblins' came thru.... If not, actions and the lack of action have consequences as we have learned...
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Thank you, there's more to this tale, another segment comes soon!! Having driven older cars for a large portion of my life, I am surprised just how many mickey mouse repairs kept me going!!!
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Temper Connor…temper…M had best start figuring out the solution to the MIB pretty soon…..
