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Everything posted by drsawzall
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There's bound to be all sorts of diplomatic snakes in the weeds, if I were a betting man, Granger will be traveling to Amiens...it will be one of his most skillful engagements if he is able to mollify Bonapart...
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While the word is multicultural, I believe it is used in the english speaking world enough to warrant its inclusion as a possible word choice...kismet kismet definition - Search (bing.com)
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Personally, I would have had them leave before halftime...no excuse for that behavior... Then I have to wonder if we are in a time warp with the following...The quickest way to get to the article would have been going on-line to the paper's website.... “We should pick up a Boulder Sunday newspaper when we leave here, so we could see if there’s an article about what happened last night,” Pops stated, “but I doubt if there will be anything about it yet. It was after midnight when it occurred, and I suspect the paper would have gone to press before anyone at the paper even saw the police reports. It may appear in Monday’s paper, though, provided it doesn’t get pushed out by something more important. And since the local pharmacy back home sells copies of the Boulder newspaper, I’ll just purchase a copy tomorrow night.” “Then if there’s anything in the paper about what happened to us, take a photo of the article with your phone and send me a copy,” Devin told him. “I’d like to see what it says too.” “Ok, I can do that.”
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Chapter 3: Nightmares and Revelations
drsawzall commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 3: Nightmares and Revelations
There's definitely an attraction between the boys, as they could feel the need between them. Then there's the book he needs to read, what will be discovered?? -
Channing reminds me of Joan Collins in Falcon Crest as a young man, it's an image that just popped into mind, what are the chances he's fixated on Todd???
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I think Ollie's Nonna is there with good intentions and to let Andre and Chris know that there may be some subterfuge by 'the other half' of the family. I believe anyone trying to interfere with Ollie will feel the wrath of Auntie Margret....Could ther possibly be money due Ollie that has been hidden from him??? This cliffhanger isn't really a cliffhanger, it is more like a "wait and see hanger'...
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My goodness...looks like our boys will have their hands full...won't they... Then there's this... Also during the meeting, I was informed that the Amixorian Domain had intercepted many Interstellar Radio Messages sent from Earth since 1974, to make contact with any intelligent living beings in space. I was told that in the past, the Amixorian race has come across several other races, and some were not at all nice, and it would be preferred to keep them well away from this solar system. I was in full agreement with this decision, and I agreed to put this matter to the relevant authorities on Earth to stop sending the messages out.
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A little disappointment
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A little disappointment
It would seem the smoke around Heyward's fire is getting stronger, I have to wonder, if he is...how over-extended is he??? Or is it time to take the profits of his serious artworks like any good investor, and focus on the 'new and upcoming masters"??? -
Here's hoping Todd slays his demons and he and Barret find each other....that and I have a sneaking suspicion that Todd's artwork is about to take off, possibly like Banksy?
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After about 5 tall Gin & Tonics, with a dash of Roses Lime Juice, I'm guilty of the same forward behavior...Loved this!!!
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Loved this, looking forward to more!!!!
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Late to the party once again, moving house sucks.....and there's so frigging much, and more to go and do...like shopping for curtains for 31 windows...I wonder if I can get away with discarded coffee bean bags from the local roaster, burlap is in or so I am told They have pretty designs...would they be vegan @Summerabbacat??? But I digress...this was a splendiferious chapter and others have said everything I would have but sooo much better!!!
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Loved this chapter, I have to think Uncle Sev might/may need a bit more time than forecasted... The following blew my socks off...how amazing!!! When his dad and Aunt finally emerged, he noticed that Severin swallowed, but smiled and moved toward his Dad. They practically blocked the line as they embraced, Hans putting Severin in a bear hug that Severin clearly didn’t expect. And then he kissed him on each cheek, then ran his fingers through Severin’s hair. This time, Hans clearly took the lead, but unlike over 40 years ago, they both stood and enjoyed the moment. Then his father did something odd. He grabbed Severin by the lapels of his suit. “It’s same one! You’ve kept it all these years…” Hans remarked, rubbing the materials in his hands. Severin nodded his head.
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Guilty as charged...I might/may have remembered their names, and on the rarest of 'dates' possibly a last name....
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Well now, all I got is hummm....
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Can't add anything to the comments above other than to say what this chapter did to me...
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Had to do some catching up…..as I remember Guam is an independent island…. Henderson senior could count the number of times he’d ever been surprised in his life, on four crooked, arthritis-ridden digits of his left hand, discounting for an amputated pinky. There was one time during his military service in marine corps, when their brigade was ambushed by Vietnamese in Guam. He Jake still worries me, Liam needs to be staked naked to an anthill naked with a solid bar of rock candy stuffed up his ass….
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Much to ponder in this chapter, love the way this story is coming together!!!
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More Tests, More Evidence, and the Trials Begin
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Tests, More Evidence, and the Trials Begin
Hey @weinerdog, @chris191070...1st on Pg 3!!!- 73 comments
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More Tests, More Evidence, and the Trials Begin
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Tests, More Evidence, and the Trials Begin
With apologies to @RainbowPhoenixWI... Jesusmotherfuckingchristonafuckingbycyclemeetingmotherlovingmonkeysodomizersposingasdildoworshipingnuns.....I mean just what the fuck????? If tomorrow's chapter fails to post, what our author might see when looking out his back door... Followed by- 73 comments
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It would seem the dynamic has changed, I am very interested to see if there was additional fallout from Harold and Charles stupidity...
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Oh the hubris of youth... “But if you get caught–” “I won’t. Damien can’t even tell what I’m doing in the surveillance footage since it looks like I’m just placing the price stickers on instead. He’s none the wiser.” I find it so darned cute when I hear a Bieberler trying to act so 'adult'... “Oh, that’s wonderful,” an older woman said. “People your age don’t usually want to work and rather spend their days complaining, while living under their parents’ roof.” Okay, boomer.
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Great point, and will we see or hear of him again???
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Greg is growing into his role naturally as if he was born to it. His means and methods are bringing out the best in all those who surround him, the hallmark of a great leader, can't wait to see what the future holds....
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Let's hope Franz quickly picks up the wherewithal to not be a drag or an anchor on this journey to wherever they are going....and that in losing his virginity he did not pick up any 'unwanted guests'.....
