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  1. I suspect there is at least one or more snakes in the grass, and further trouble from the Russian quarter....
  2. Talk about a chapter rife with innuendos and speculation....not sure I can add anything other than to say, we need another chapter or 3 freaking pronto..... @Mancunian just may have hit the proverbial nail on the head with this pregnant pithy comment...
  3. Well now...quite the revealing chapter to say the least...looking forward to the show and what might Francis Heyward's motivation for 'private curator' tours???
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    Chapter 17

    Marc is full of surprises and talents. It is a shame that others can't see what his hard work has accomplished!
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    Chapter 2

    Such an accurate portrayal of what life was truly like and the failure of politicians to do their jobs. There is an article in the September '23 issue of BBC History Magazine called Did they Really Have To Fight To The Finish by Holger Afflerbach detailing the failure of common sense and diplomacy during the Great War and the rebuffing of peace overtures nearly from the beginning of the start of that war. At one point, nearly 11,000 men were dying every day. By the time the war reached its conclusion, an entire generation of young men in France were decimated. The failure on both sides lead to the inevitable rise of Hitler and one has to wonder today if we aren't seeing some of the same intransigence today...on many levels, worldwide.... The article can be found here: Did they really have to fight to the finish? | HOLGER AFFLERBACH - DiscountMags.com
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    Chapter 22

    Can't add anything to the wonderful comments, they've said it all and much better than I could. I wish to thank you for sharing this story and your craft with us, a job well done Sir!!!! Thank You!!!
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    Chapter 21

    How does one ever heal from an experience such as Matt's? The brilliance of this story is that often one does not, at least with many sessions with a qualified professional. The type of abuse Matt suffered from deeply wounds the psyche and we have to give Andy credit for backing off and not cutting ties, to continue towards a developing friendship first. That Matt was able to hug Andy shows a desire to work towards healing, and I temper my comments that as with anything worth having, patience and time work wonders. Late to the party and looking forward to the next and somewhat sad that this incredible, well written story comes to its conclusion!
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    Chapter 24

    Of course faceless escaped, probably masquerading as Jolanda for all we know setting the stage for even more cliffhangers....
  9. I'm not sold on Greg, while his story may be real, there is room for subterfuge....
  10. @weinerdog, were you just called/labeled a "granny fanny"....don't let @Summerabbacat know, or it may impact your dating profile....
  11. So glad to see this story and what it portends for future stories arrive, and if the first chapter is anything to go on, we are in for an enjoyable ride with all of the attendant ups and downs... While I have used this line before, it more than applies here..." Therese is like a river, a mile wide and an inch deep....Sounds like she is the perfect, "C you next Tuesday" girl".... Ralph, your prison is all in your mind and I look forward to the confluence of events that help you realize that... The twins are adorable, wonder what part the perceptive little tykes will play in helping/leading Ralph out of his internal prison... Bring on the next chapter!!!!!
  12. Some of the best work on this site, you won't be disappointed!!
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    Lukas 1

    What a fantastic start to this story and dang you, about halfway thru I was reaching for the tissues, this is so very well written and true to life. As a younger man, I was working in the engineering field as support services. The Chief Mechanical Engineer found out I did carpentry and painting on the side to augment my income. He had me do some painting in the mother-in-law suite in his house in anticipation of her moving in. Long story short, once the work was completed and after she moved in, I had to go back and take care of a few small things for her and replace the toilet. It was at the visit I saw the tattoo on the inside of her wrist, she was a survivor of one of the camps. She quickly sussed I was gay and accepted me without hesitation. When the toilet came up off the floor, she looked in the bathroom and saw the accumulated dirt underneath, telling me it was schmutz, not really shite but fertilizer. I have such fond memories of that woman and the utmost respect for her as a survivor who was able to put the past in proper perspective...
  14. Just remember to take Arya for a walk every now and then wheh reenacting...who woulda thought it was those types of books... Wow,” he eventually said. “Thank you for trusting me with it. And I promise, I’ll never tell a living soul.” “I’d appreciate that.” He slowly shook his head. “Wow…” “Stop. It’s just a job.” “Yeah, I know, but…wow! And I am going to read them. And if it’s anything like Megan says, we’re gonna reenact every bit of it.” Oh gosh… Now that would be thrilling!
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    Chapter 29 S2

    Looks like someone is thinking about a different kind of ring other than a class ring.... And we wait to see when the bitch, witch from next door makes an appearance...
  16. Eventually being the operative word, for both of the POS's...
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    Chapter 15

    Thanks for sharing this with us, truly enjoyable!!!
  18. What game are you playing Francis....rumors of your demise/decline abound and smoke from all quarters indicating financial heat... And Vaughn and Dan have the right of it... “You think that’s what this is, power play, look at me I can have who I want?” “Maybe. But I want none of it.” “Knickers firmly on, in future.” “Definitely.”
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    Chapter 27

    This chapter had it all, and Ollie is so fortunate to have Andre and Chris...while I am not surprised to see his mother passing, it is another hit to the already fragile boy, thank goodness he has the support he needs, mind you, it will take some time for things to settle out...Will the wedding be run by a couple of 'Momzillas'???
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    Chapter 16

    I still don't trust Jackwad the brother....Good on everyone graduating and let's see if Marc's plans bear fruit....
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    Chapter 14

    Glad to see the musical is moving forward and Grant has to be an ignorant putz...Did he really think Tim was going to roll over???
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    Chapter 3

    The Baron's meeting sort of reminded me of another family run organization!!!!
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    Chapter 3

    Gasp, kiss him and he turns into a frog???? What would his superpower be, giving toxic warts on the areas the sun don't shine????
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    Chapter 20

    Enough to go on and sometimes, simplicity rules and rocks!!!
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    Chapter 20

    Late to the party again..... and can't disagree with any of the comments...I've always had a soft spot for Maeve, she reminds me of so many important women who helped influenced my life... The following nearly broke me it was so well written, and that is what a fantastic author does with his craft, pointing out an economy of words are sometimes more powerful than a paragraph or chapter...To wit... Maeve watched Andrew trot along the path and disappear down the stairs to the dock. She stared out into the darkening night. "If you have a mind to, God. Bring our Matthew back home." From your lips to God's ears Maeve... @weinerdog, I think your Bronze should be a Silver, and get my spot in the corner ready..., @kbois is part of the team, a coach if you prefer....not in the game so to speak and this judge concurs...you get the silver!!! @Mikiesboy, I'll be making the stuffed steak tomorrow, will let you know how it turns out....
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