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More Explanations, and Hiding Things From Rocky
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Explanations, and Hiding Things From Rocky
Folks who live in glass houses...always treat those who work for you as valued employees!!!!- 44 comments
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Two snippets stood out for me in this chapter and what a chapter it was... Dan wrinkled his nose, “Sort of, but I’ve never had what you could call a regular boyfriend, and life in the Force meant I kept my head down.” “So, you’ve never talked to her about what you want from life.” “Too scared I suppose. She has hopes; though she’s not religious, underneath there’s still something of the archetypal Catholic Nonna about her. Food and Family are her thing.” She stared at him, “You’ll have to bite the bullet some time, and I’ll say this for Vaughan, he’s very house-trained.” I was laughing so hard I nearly snorted my lunchtime glass of water... >No expense spared. But it is very… Another pause. >Revealing. “We’d noticed.” There was a noise on the other end of the line, but she did not say anything. “But Dan is being careful. A job is not worth giving up your dignity for.” >And Dan? “Has not lost his dignity. Yet.” >He is a very attractive young man, even Edna noticed. Those trousers are well cut, but very revealing. Edna says to tell you that you are very lucky.
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It will be interesting to see how Oscar makes out with the new course of studies!!
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After a bit over a quarter of a million words in this twisted never-ending tale of angst, lack of impulse control, and a shut and dried case for youthinasia, the only redeeming character in this debacle is the dog Jack... Oh...and M is preggers as noted earlier...
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Isn't that what they wear after a wild weekend???
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Before they arrive in Ipalos, I am willing to wager that they will all need each other, then there is Krahh and I am sure we will see more of him...and how will they explain the clothing???
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Chapter 58 - Back on the Hunt
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 58 - Back on the Hunt
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They have a supposition, let's hope the killer(s) is spotted quickly, hoping that they are unaware of the gang is on to them...
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It just keeps getting better and better...take a moment to watch the link in the comment above, it is nothing short of fantastic!!!
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Chapter 57 - The Bonanza, Part 3
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 57 - The Bonanza, Part 3
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Amen to the comments above, your health comes first and foremost...Please do what it takes to protect your health... Now... The human chimney decided not to come to court, will the fuckwad find his belongings on the doorstep or on the sidewalk??? Judge Crusty Pants is beginning to understand the nuances of the case before him, it could possibly be the cure for the ailment he suffers from, stickupyourasssideways, hope springs eternal!!! How much longer will Attorney Clark keep fuckwad as a client, when will he realize he's never going to see a dime in fees, past what may have been paid to date??? I snorted so hard at the following; lunch wanted to make a second appearance... “Objection, Your Honor,” Billy said, rolling his eyes. “It's common practice for attorney's to cover the cost incurred by witnesses, especially those who have to travel. In fact, I know that Mr. Clarke's firm has done this very thing, multiple times. That's how his first witness was able to be here.” “Is that true, Mr. Clarke?” Clarke looked like he was about swing on Billy. “Yes, Your Honor.” As with others, I am very concerned for Caleb, the why's and how's he ended up in the hospital...hopefully it is only to get checked for superficial bruises... Now as you know, my moniker is drsawzall and while I am able to treat any and all instances of wood related injuries, not limited to but including two by fours painfully inserted or used otherwise, I respectfully decline any sort of diagnosis or treatment plan!!! As to the ending, I shall take the following advice...can you get O'Douls in a draft???
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Studies first as always, take some time to relax as your job and main focus is to get the best grades possible!!
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And the adventure of a lifetime continues as the boys tour their country in all of its beauty!!
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Chapter 56 - The Bonanza - Part 2
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 56 - The Bonanza - Part 2
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Chapter 55 - The Bonanza, Part 1
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 55 - The Bonanza, Part 1
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I can only surmise that Baron Evans used, abused, and discarded young Samuel, we know from past interactions with the disgraced Baron, we know he's stuck in the past and to outdated traditions... The question now becomes will this happen before the trip to LA or after, and a deep, in-length detailed conversation with Prince George? Ya all know to make a good Bloody Baron Evans, Mary, y'all gotta add some pepper, Worcestershire, and shake the living bejesus out of it before inserting the stick of celery...squeezing the lime can happen anytime during or after to obtain the best effect...
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And we're off on another magical mystery, who dunnit, tour full, I'm sure, of red herrings... And away we go!!!
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The path towards forgiveness and redemption begins with accepting and forgiving oneself... An excellent chapter with much to think on!! I agree with the following, very well said... Trust your paperwork is in order, and verify that it is so... He stared worriedly at me and asked, “Does you son have access to your accounts?” “Do I look stupid?” I laughed. “That’s another reason my son hates me so much. I wrote him out of my will years ago. I’ll be damned if I leave him a penny when I die.” “Excellent,” smiled Colin. “I’ll check about getting you a new cellphone. That is if you want one.”
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Another fantastic chapter, loved the idioms and the vernacular. Even better is the growing bond between Thomas and Keith and it is a pleasure to watch Keith slowly come out of his shell as it were... One of my employers at the end of each contract for renovations to the facilities, would sit in his office at the end of each completed project with the contractor and myself and would go, "Let's sharpen our pencils, shall we"? as he tried to nickel and dime 'savings' off the overall costs. I heard him described by many something very similar to the following...a phrase sometimes used was something about pinching pennies with the muscles in his posterior.... “Fat chance of that. Guy that owns it skimped on the work something rotten, tight as a pig’s arse.”
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What will become of Simon as is returned to the land he came from, and what will become of those who used/harmed him???
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I had thought Cormac was the beggar as well, Tarn was a broken man and was on a path to self-destruction, the question now is, what becomes of Cormac???
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Chapter 54 - Blood
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 54 - Blood
They should contact the folks who gave them the list of ingredients and find out if they have enough blood... While the party goes on, and I am not opposed, the I.C.U.A. still needs to be dealt with is the most slow, painful way possible... -
Chapter 53 - Answers
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 53 - Answers
Don't think the pirates won't make another attempt to retake the place.... Something needs doing about the ships that got away with at least 10 Godstrolls.... -
Pulling a @weinerdog and making a guess, the stalker is Grayson...let's see how bad my prediction is!! Intriguing start!!
