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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 29

    I found the following so very interesting; it speaks as to what we have devolved to...criticized if we get up and walk in the morning and criticized if we get up and run in the morning...damned if you do, and damned if you don't.... Amber was left alone in the room, with the news blasting Aaron for not caring about his mother. She couldn’t see a remote anywhere, and there was no way to shut the tv out. She sighed, resigning herself to putting up with the obnoxious human on the screen. One point did make her smile, no matter how the tv attacked it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Humph....I'm not convinced or buying it just yet... “Lord Sarin was gracious enough to suggest a break for lunch,” Aaron smiled tightly. “I have to be back in an hour.” “Despite all appearances to the contrary, Lord Sarin is a good man,” Amber admitted. “He and I rarely saw eye-to-eye, but his views were nonetheless rooted in Astara’s best interests.” She echoed Aaron’s tight smile. “With the exception of the pay increases he likes to give himself.”
  2. Sarah needs to curb her enthusiasm and temper her outlook, understanding that the world and will not bend to her individual will. Not at the young padawan's age that is...World domination takes time along with careful consideration and planning...
  3. Loved this chapter, sadly we are taught, thank you, you F'ing Puritans, that nudity is abhorrent and we should never appreciate , or see our bodies as we should...I loved the tenor of this chapter and the pacing, I hope this relationship works for both Dylan and Dom's sake... Hoo boy, it is about to get interesting to say the least for a certain @weinerdog...just saying...how can you not luv a mug like this????
  4. drsawzall

    Oslo bound

    This is a good trip for both of them, ironing out the bumps one can expect when traveling together. Many important lessons learned, and issues easily smoothly resolved....I think of this as a warm-up to the vacation the two will take to Italy...while it could be phrased a bit differently, it is gratifying to see Colin 'growing' into his body and accepting the same!!
  5. drsawzall

    Round Six

    Now will have to read Heart and an epilogue would be a treat... I can't help but admire your skill with dialogue as @Gary L pointed out and your rejoinder. I for the life of me suffer from the gift of gab but struggle with writing dialogue, I love writing vivid descriptions and scene settings, it comes so very easy to me, perhaps a mind meld al la Star Trek?
  6. Yea...what he said!!!!!!
  7. Very interesting, I suspect we will see a few more references to Egyptology moving forward...but on to more important things, how in the heck are they going to escape from the guys with the chainsaws when they left the freaking car on the other side of the veil???? 😶‍🌫️
  8. Well Bell is confirming he's a little shit...bet he says the following to all the boys/girls... A long pause. Toby was about to fill in the silence, when Bell jumped in. “Hey, ya know…what happened when we were together?” “Yeah?” Toby’s heart skipped a beat. Fear struck him instantly. What if he says it was all a mistake? Regrets, sorry about that, didn’t mean to lead him on, blah blah blah. “It was fun…ah…I mean it was…special.” Not sure just what to think about Carey and Apollo....other than to convince myself they will see each other again....Would like to see just how talented in math he just may be...
  9. drsawzall

    Round Six

    Fricking Tyson, he will be the type of politico that gets caught with his pants down on a school bus full of choir boys and nuns....ggggrrrr
  10. drsawzall

    Colin 9

    This is a very good observation and ever so true, could not have said it any better.... Count me in joining the sparrowfart fan club!!!
  11. drsawzall

    HMS Endymion

    Like others It is nice to see George back on the water and I also get the feeling that his command, while temporary, will be anything but... With a bevy of good-looking officers what do you think the odds will be he's canoodling beneath the sheets before the first week is up???
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    Chapter 19

    I get the feeling that out among the cages is Martina, I temper that thought that the animals that Micco will free will in the end, save him from the b*%ch.....
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    Let's hope Stewart doesn't bang his head anytime soon.....
  14. Well...what do ya know...who woulda thought or figured that that little shit Bell called, is the boy clueless or what??? Then there's Apollo, can't wait to see just where this goes...
  15. drsawzall

    Holiday

    Can't say it any better than this and I for one, am looking forward to seeing how Mr Russ changes the dynamics...
  16. drsawzall

    Round Five

    Tyson sealed his fate...bring on the next chapter!!
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    Round Four

    It's devolving into a real cat fight...Tyson would be my choice followed by Sona...
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    Round Three

    My...my...my...but how the claws come out...
  19. drsawzall

    Round Two

    It seems to be getting a bit snippy, would love to see more of the exit interviews!!
  20. Ya think, if not we should start calling him Lot and have him live in Sodom or Gomorra 😁
  21. drsawzall

    Round One

    Glad I did not skip over this, well done!!
  22. Karma isn't just a bitch, but righteous visitor for both Jackson and Zach...Looking forward to seeing how things work out with Colton...
  23. Things continue to fall apart all over the place, how long till the tide turns???
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    Chapter 28

    Oh my goodness...could it truly be this soon, we know it is coming...hang in there Dowager Amber... I still don't trust Lord Sarin, I keep thinking a pound of C-4 tucked up his backside and pushing him out of a plane at thirty thousand feet before detonation...it would be one way to honor his wish to be above all!!!
  25. drsawzall

    Concert

    Joe is turning out to be quite the amazing young man, isn't he... This was a fantastic chapter and a very enjoyable read, I can't disagree with any of the comments, although I am waiting for the other shoes to drop... I am sure we haven't heard the last from; Colin's mum and brother, Mhairi's ex and Joe's father, and those pesky trust funds...
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