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Then there's Julie Newmar to consider, while she didn't sing, at least to my knowledge, she could fill out leather clothing like no one else...

I'm thinking Quinn is riding Orion 'Cowboy' style....yehaww!!!!!

Per your quotes above, why would anyone trust or put their faith in the boy when he can't stop acting like a child, personally, I'd be tossing him overboard, up to this point he's more trouble than he's worth...

The comment above is what we call over here in the Northeast of the USA, 'Hitting the proverbial nail directly on the head"!!!

Love it, and glad you enjoyed this story!!

It’s times like this that make me think some folks need sterilization….

Can’t add much to the comments other than to say, thank goodness for Karma…..

Patience is a frigging virtue, and as a wise old carpenter once told me the first rule of carpentry, ifin it don't fit...force it!!! Not sure it's good advice for an author tho....

Ah...to be that young again in the bedroom, hallway, kitchen, bathroom, living room and have they done it in the elevator yet??? Looking forward to seeing how the Foundation's projects work out...

Much going on here, and proving he was released from the system a bit too early. It would be nice if Josh and Ben actually talked to each other, however it would seem we are heading down that slippery slope...hopefully it isn't a long ride....

Well...there's a twist...ally or foe??? "My name is Alexi Dumarov," the man looked up at the camera.

Josel would be wise to lose the attitude, start acting his age and think on what others are saying. If he remains a spoiled, tempestuous little boy, it's gonna be a long journey with him...

Loved this chapter and so glad to see this and other stories continuing...Looking forward to what comes next with all three stories. Now...to resist the temptation to read them elsewhere....

At this point Killian is the bigger wuss, idiot, numbnuts, fool, and suffering from a huge case of headupyourassitis!!! For a supposedly 'smart' teenager, he had Zac and Jessie right where he needed them in that classroom when the teacher walked in, I would have been singing like a canary, naming names and filing complaints, instead we get another episode of the Perils of Pauline Killian, unfricking believable... Somewhere between his legs are those dangly bits, you know, he knew where Jessie's was...the testimonials...and the source some fortitude... Now to the grapevine, was it Zac or Jessie who had that discussion with the asswaffle who passes as the sperm donor...

I would think with any message sent that there be an accounting on what has transpired back on Earth, Mars, and the other 'local' colonies before exchanging any significant news/developments. I would be very suspect as to 'political' conditions and how things may/might have changed during this time. Additionally, I would not discount or count out any scientific advancements they have made. There is wisdom in sending ten messages from ten different locations confusing any attempts at triangulation. Hopefully they take further steps in hiding their location....

Something is going to go tragically wrong with the harpy. Methinks she’s up to her eyeballs in some sort of corporate skulduggery….and it is going to bite her in the ass….

Welcome back…you’ve been missed! Alex is a putz, living on the darker side of things….don’t like him at all, hope I am proven wrong…. And I just love Gus!

I'm not sold on the twins; I realize this makes me an outlier of sorts, but it all seems just a bit too rushed...to me something is off... Poor Chris, what will they find when he docks, and aren't his parents going to be surprised...

Too many commercials for me to get stuck in to a game. I liked the following……and this is how a football widow comes to be…. Devin, you can set the pizza boxes on the dining room table, and then I want you to go get the bags that your father is still holding, as he stands there watching the football game.”

Simply brilliant....

Thanks for an early chapter. No go out and buy a Powerball ticket, with the winning numbers! Loved this chapter, have to agree on the eye color, but as the twins are identical, what if they both have the same color eyes? Not a frigging clue as to who the new Baron will be!!!

I’d ask that you give the story a chance. I use a quote from Moby Dick that addresses the dichotomy of life. That the beauty that surrounds us is sitting on a foundation of, for the lack of better words, barbarity… I appreciate your thoughts an comment…thanks

Calling Kane's mother anything despicable would be insulting to any of the vile terminology I could toss her way, in some ways...she's beneath contempt, a pathetic, pitiful, harpy, who is so unsure of herself she inadvertently resorts to stereotypical mannerisms. Despite her diminished stature, one good prick and her balloon of faux self-righteousness will suddenly deflate.... Killian, you were the recipient of some wise/sage advice...listen and think about how fast you are ready to go...I'm reminded of a line from the movie Joe and the Volcano, while the setting is different, the young boy utters one of the great movie lines when faced with an important decision...'There's something to be said about playing with yourself"....

Calvin is confused as @Summerabbacat noted above. He isn't distinguishing between his lusty hormones and virginity with sex that would actually mean something with someone who actually cared for him. Alan is the worst sort of person, a predator if you will, who is using and teaching Calvin under the guise of instruction to the gay facts of life. Hopefully Calving will take the following feeling and grow from it....Sex is much more enjoyable when both are committed to an equality ion a relationship. I fully understand that there are many flavors that make up our tribe, Alan would do well to understand that... Emotionally I was unsure how I felt about Alan’s domineering demeaner and tendency to order me around. At times he made me feel inferior, a feeling I did not like.

Well...happy birthday to me, now for a cold shower....