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Everything posted by drsawzall
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I have to disagree with the thought behind this comment. As @drpaladin has noted he 'owes' Elisabetta exactly nothing. I can't condone the thought he's a snitch either. Someone harms my family; you can bet any information I had about the act would be communicated to the relevant authorities... As to love, that's a bit more difficult to ascribe to any of the boys. There has been a spark between Marco and Giorgio from the beginning, and at the same time, while both Marco and Cosmo knowing each other is gay, both realize any sort of romance between either of them is going nowhere. It simply isn't in the cards...I see Marco and Giorgio as two lonely souls who have found a nascent connection. it's early days for the two of them, it will be interesting to see where this budding connection goes and grows... I also want to say I appreciate your comment, it made me pause a bit and rethink my thoughts and feelings, for that I thank you!!!
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Yes indeed...he had two speaking roles back just after Toto and Michele vanquished the dinosaurs that were threatening Ravello...how's that for an eidetic memory....oh...or was it space aliens???
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I'm going with a nightmare, and it is time to make tracks back to a certain hut in that swamp and see if the witch can also cure Nathan of his nightmare...
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Peter has jumped from the proverbial frying pan into the fire so to speak. It will be interesting to see how the baseball conditioning and tryouts go and if Coach is as good as his word...While I can't remember, thanks old age, all the details...I get the feeling Carl isn't giving up and will do something to improve his odds...
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A bit late to the reading party but I love this story, like some, I have seen and read this at another site and am glad to not only re-read but comment. This is as well written as any others on this site and will keep you enthralled... Thanks for posting!!!
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I just don't see as Cosmo as being unredeemable... The degree to which Cosmo would appear to share that perspective was something that I continually revisited and revised during the course of writing this story.
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Another Getaway and Patient Crisis
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Getaway and Patient Crisis
Thank you for this, while I'll realize some may see it differently, I had one moment of clarity befiore she passed...and I can't put any sort of price on that,. -
Another Getaway and Patient Crisis
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Getaway and Patient Crisis
An amazing chapter, glad to see Steve was given good advice about having any further incidents 'recorded'!!! I sympathize with Brandon, and he was fortunate to have a last moment with his mother. Mine had been lost in the throes of dementia and in her final days placed on 'comfort care'...I was at her bedside on her last day, surprisingly she woke, took my hand and clearly told me how much she loved me, and quietly passed. -
Can't disagree with any of the comments above, that Keith was able to come out of such a background is amazing! Thomas is just the right panacea for Keith's soul and well being!
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All I got is...
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Chapter 10 - Acceptance
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Acceptance
But what about the voice in the back of his head???? Can a way be found to disable/override it??? -
Chapter 9 - The Scientists
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The Scientists
Wouldn't a Sam's Club, Home Depot or a BJ's Wholesale Club be a good place to start??? -
Chapter 8 - Weapons
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Weapons
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Like all the comments above and as noted before, I thought there had to have been something else in Oscars make-up or background that had him reacting so strongly...and I still wonder... Then there is this that has me scratching my head as to why.. my grandparents informed me that my parents and siblings had no idea of this recent purchase and that they would like to keep it that way, so I agreed to say nothing about what I had seen today.
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Wonder how many red herrings are named after Bart or any other form of Bartholemew....
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Shades of @Ivor Slipper....
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I'd almost be willing to pay to see a video of their first night together...talk about a match made in H E double LL... What are the odds both have a knife at each other's throats before the first article of clothing fell to the floor...
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Cosmo has some tough choices to make and if his internal dialogue is any indication he is moving away from Elisabetta in increments. If I had to guess his connection to her is almost severed as he realizes she wouldn't mind going out in a so-called blaze of glory... I think he sees that isn't the way he wants to go...the struggle now is, can he find redemption by doing the right thing??? Can Elisabetta be fixed, is there any hope for her? Did Elisabetta really want them to embark on a wayward life together, or was that just talk? It had almost sounded like she wanted to go out in a blaze of glory. Does she really think that would be… cool?
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@James Carnarvon I must be psychotic...ooops prescient!!
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Together they are stronger than separate, give the torch a chance to dry out and perhaps it will relight, if not it is possible that the amulet may lead the way!! I mean, they have to make it to book 2!!!
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Starting in the middle
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Starting in the middle
Thanks for sharing this wonderful tale with us and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter(s)!!! I may be wrong, but I am suspecting a cross over, wondering who Dan works for.... “So, how come the new post?” He shrugged, “No idea. I was approached.” My response was a to widen my eyes in mock alarm. He smiled, “Oh, I did the research. The bloke was pretty clean. Seriously loaded, known for his parties.” I grinned, “Do you get invited to said parties?” “Not a bit, I’m strictly outside staff." "Bit of a change. You enjoy it?" "It's a leg up. A team of guys to look after and some serious security kit to play with. Overtime for special events only, planned well in advance.” His eyes sparkled, “No more cancelled leave, double shifts and working weekends at the drop of a hat.”- 20 comments
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Amen brother as fine upstanding folks like our elected officials....oh wait...
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My age might have me a tad confused, but if my memory is firing correctly...oh...my age might have me a tad confused...but...I believe dear old Satan's spouse Debore Thomas comes with her own cart load of baggage....
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Lost A Day, What Else Aren't They Telling Me?
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Lost A Day, What Else Aren't They Telling Me?
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All I got is... Billy shook his head and said, “Oh, we're not even close to losing, Diego; not even fucking close.”
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