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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    Anyone believing Alan is straight needs to see me about a bridge for sale…..
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    My suspicions lead me to believe that the four Norwegian's just may be the progeny of a program undertaken in Germany in the 1930's to create a 'super race'....of humans... I can't quite figure the importance of the bowl, that it is important is evident, if not then an expensive red herring...
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Lets see...The Norwegians are fast runners and well versed in DNA, Ralph is a new student who not only put fear into Oscar but had contradictory ideas on DNA research from the 1930's, it leads me to believe that the Norwegians may/might be the result of some clandestine DNA research... Now the bowl, if it came by honestly to the Norwegians, what is the purpose of gifting it? Does it hold a clue hidden or somehow transcribed upon it? Then the camping trip, hope the boys keep nudity confined to the tent, avoiding those pesky stinging insects....
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    Chapter 11

    I always thought something was off with the twins, it didn't ring true as to me, the interactions seemed forced as noted in a previous chapter... “Sorry Marc.” Said Roman sadly. And he is going to be the one hurt most by our discussion later. Unfortunately. I leaned in and kissed his head before I leaned over and kissed Camile, too. Camile pulled me tight as she looked up at the ship lining up on the threshold. I was watching carefully, as was the Destroyer around the side of the station. I am sure. Roman snuggled into my side. His head is on my shoulder. A fake smile appeared on his face. The term that comes to mind is, ‘Don’t leave your day job.’ As far as his acting ability goes. Camile was doing better. She even leaned in and kissed me. Roman decided he was bored and turned into me for a hug. His lips pressed against mine before his head went down on my shoulder again. Waiting is the worst. Then there is Chris, not sure he ever had what it took to be part of Marc's circle, he's more of a follower, particularly when it came to his dick...Having said all that, not sure he had the abilities to plan and run a smuggling operation, I see him as a tiny fish in a much larger pond. One has to wonder how many families are involved in this smuggling operation and I would not be surprised if the twin's family is marginally involved...what is the old saying, " Keep your friends close, your enemies closer"....
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    An interesting start to say the least, I could certainly see the guys enjoying time together...
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    Chapter 1

    Josel for the lack of better words, is in the fight of his life, and that fact seems to escape him due to his personality! After coming out of that cellar, one would think we'd see a new attitude from Josel, yet he seems to be incapable of change... Despite my criticisms, one of the hallmarks of a good story on a site like this, are the comments they engender, and you have me commenting...
  7. There's another puppet master playing the game, and at the moment holds a superior position, as he/she/ knows Aelfric Elias Tudor, while they remain hidden in the shadows. Possibly working King Johann for the short term and the long term??
  8. Good on Ralph, accepting himself and the joys that go with it!!!
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Then there's Julie Newmar to consider, while she didn't sing, at least to my knowledge, she could fill out leather clothing like no one else...
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    I'm thinking Quinn is riding Orion 'Cowboy' style....yehaww!!!!!
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Per your quotes above, why would anyone trust or put their faith in the boy when he can't stop acting like a child, personally, I'd be tossing him overboard, up to this point he's more trouble than he's worth...
  12. The comment above is what we call over here in the Northeast of the USA, 'Hitting the proverbial nail directly on the head"!!!
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Love it, and glad you enjoyed this story!!
  14. It’s times like this that make me think some folks need sterilization….
  15. drsawzall

    Steven's Story

    Can’t add much to the comments other than to say, thank goodness for Karma…..
  16. Patience is a frigging virtue, and as a wise old carpenter once told me the first rule of carpentry, ifin it don't fit...force it!!! Not sure it's good advice for an author tho....
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Ah...to be that young again in the bedroom, hallway, kitchen, bathroom, living room and have they done it in the elevator yet??? Looking forward to seeing how the Foundation's projects work out...
  18. Much going on here, and proving he was released from the system a bit too early. It would be nice if Josh and Ben actually talked to each other, however it would seem we are heading down that slippery slope...hopefully it isn't a long ride....
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Well...there's a twist...ally or foe??? "My name is Alexi Dumarov," the man looked up at the camera.
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Josel would be wise to lose the attitude, start acting his age and think on what others are saying. If he remains a spoiled, tempestuous little boy, it's gonna be a long journey with him...
  21. Loved this chapter and so glad to see this and other stories continuing...Looking forward to what comes next with all three stories. Now...to resist the temptation to read them elsewhere....
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    At this point Killian is the bigger wuss, idiot, numbnuts, fool, and suffering from a huge case of headupyourassitis!!! For a supposedly 'smart' teenager, he had Zac and Jessie right where he needed them in that classroom when the teacher walked in, I would have been singing like a canary, naming names and filing complaints, instead we get another episode of the Perils of Pauline Killian, unfricking believable... Somewhere between his legs are those dangly bits, you know, he knew where Jessie's was...the testimonials...and the source some fortitude... Now to the grapevine, was it Zac or Jessie who had that discussion with the asswaffle who passes as the sperm donor...
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    A Call From Home

    I would think with any message sent that there be an accounting on what has transpired back on Earth, Mars, and the other 'local' colonies before exchanging any significant news/developments. I would be very suspect as to 'political' conditions and how things may/might have changed during this time. Additionally, I would not discount or count out any scientific advancements they have made. There is wisdom in sending ten messages from ten different locations confusing any attempts at triangulation. Hopefully they take further steps in hiding their location....
  24. Something is going to go tragically wrong with the harpy. Methinks she’s up to her eyeballs in some sort of corporate skulduggery….and it is going to bite her in the ass….
  25. Welcome back…you’ve been missed! Alex is a putz, living on the darker side of things….don’t like him at all, hope I am proven wrong…. And I just love Gus!
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