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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Talk about being in the right place at the right time...
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Well we finally getting a better idea of what Marc's family 'owns' and Marc's desire to go mining, presumably to make his own fortune... What we don't know are the reasons, most likely economic and access to strategic mineral, raw material, resources... That Marc knows about Janek's issues, I feel stem from the brief glimpse we had of his background, coming from an area/home world, that conducts "unsavory" business with those who trade 'outside' the lines...
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At least this time Greg can control the narrative and be recompensated fairly for his work, and the funds realized will go a long way towards setting up a stable future for both he and Len... I've always had a begrudging respect for the young men who 'sell' their bodies for Art. Not so much for those young men who populate the various, for fee, pornographic websites. I'm not criticizing the boys who do so, we know nothing of their backgrounds or needs. it's just the sex portrayed seems to be so mechanical and scripted, with little to no, realism. Give me eroticism any day of the week, and yes, a photo or painting without showing the 'dangly bits' can be very effective!
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Presentation to Their Majesties
drsawzall commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Presentation to Their Majesties
Spot on I say, what what... And Elizabeth possibly being a playmate to Princess Charlott is a boon as well! Glad to see Calvert mentoring William, and Carmella being accepted at the very highest levels of society!!!- 17 comments
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Hopefully the idea of an outdoor education center will throw off the bad guys, sorta like hiding in plain sight....
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Doctor McIrrelevant strikes again...they surely broke the mold after he was born... It is way too early to go on hiatus, need another chapter soon!!!
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Interesting and getting curiouser... Chief Kibosh overheard us in the training room between simulations making jokes about the young kid that scored better than us on his flight exams. He promptly put us in our place by explaining the past training he has had. And the list was long. He’s been training since he was in diapers to not only run his family’s corporation, one of the largest in our region, ~~~~~ Two weeks later, Commander Caitlin Alexander summoned us to the Executive Officer’s office and explained what was going to happen to Thorp, Uroda, and myself. We needed to pass our shuttle flight exams and Marc Alexander was going to train us. He was to be treated as we would any superior officer as his status as an Alexander of Alexander Industrials demanded. The Alexanders owned our ship and paid our salaries. Owned a few warships, enough to field two fleets if needed. Strong enough that our presence is usually enough to not need to call in elements of the CONFED Navy. Which nobody wants poking around. Then as @akascrubber pointed out... Something is afoot, what will we find out...
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Cue the lights and enter stage left...and away we go!!!!
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I have to wonder of the soon to arrive 'visitors' will have orders to remove Bzup and return him to shore, let's hope that when that happens, Bzup say's no...What then will transpire???
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Thank you....
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Not a problem at all Beliber!!!!!
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A Minute? A Year? A Century!
drsawzall commented on R. Eric's story chapter in A Minute? A Year? A Century!
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It's a ship... It's called a screw. For more reasons than one! Well that explains it all, someone(s) is/are about to get royally screwed!!!
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All I got @Lee Wilsonis...
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Such a great twist with the inheritance....well done!!!!! Oh...Calvin, sending video porn to the unwilling...looks like another court date instead!!!!! My money is on Diego opening the door, that Kenny is still in school... Don't think there is a rock or hole big or deep enough for the asswaffle to clamber under/into.... Just how much will asswaffle's attorney and firm have to write off as a total loss??? And wither Judge Crustypants with that mysterious medical malady, stickupyourasssideways, will he finally seek help for it?
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You had me at... Hah! Dumbass. You’re not supposed to inhale!” “That’s what she said!” “She? Who…” “Arya! She looked at me as if she was saying - dumbass!” He expelled the loudest roar of laughter I'd ever heard from him since we’d begun calling. It sounded like pure joy. I chuckled. Alright, it’d been funny. “Ow. Man, don’t do that. God, you’re adorable.” “Thank you,” I snickered. “Serves you right for laughing at me.” That was nice, hearing that he thought that. He dropped that in from time to time and I never tired of it. “Well, don’t make me laugh then.” “Laughter is good for the soul.” “So is talking to you.”
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The proverbial shite is about to hit the fan...or is it the propellor????
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Oh frig... now ...
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if as @weinerdog noted, authors and editors don't count then
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Hindsight being 20/20, would it not have made sense to keep their mouths closed while in the house? Given their suspicions regarding their host, any discussions should have been taken outside, even if it were only in the yard/gardens. That and perhaps leaving during the day... Now...if these two chumps can get their act together they will be so much better off...
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I hope this a dose of reality that gives Kevin a different perspective and help him find his 'big boy pants'....
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The plot is definitely thickening...And will the following become a point(s) of conflict??? The master was silent a moment, watching Bzup. But then he nodded. "I have already so logged it." He turned, and smiled at Jem. "As master of Vespris, it is my right and my duty to ascertain the status of all those that travel in my vessel. I have logged Bzup as a visiting alien intelligence, A-Prime, final determination of his status to be made later." Jem and Nico turned to stare at each other, grins breaking out on both of their faces. Kel MacAffee gave out a little whoop, and Pora settled back in his chair and smiled. "Well done." Nita chewed her lip a moment, and then nodded. "I'll endorse that decision, if you'd like me to do so. Bzup's sentience was clear early, but I feel now that his sapience is equally obvious." "I cannot see that it will hurt," the master offered, looking pleased. "I do think it our duty to safeguard the rights of our visitor, until such time as a definitive study is made." "Do you think it will be enough, if our government visitors disagree?" Jem asked. The master looked unconcerned. "The notation in my log carries the weight of law here on Benteen, but especially here on Vespris. Under the structure of colonial administration, Vespris is a sovereign entity while at sea. Our Mister Mikulsa will have to abide by that decision while aboard my ship. And it will mean that Bzup's status as an intelligent being must be proven otherwise, and in proper legal fashion, should they not wish to be civil to him. So even if our future guests have that end in their minds, and do not wish to accord Bzup an equal status, the burden of proving that decision will then be upon them, and in a public court of law." I am curious if there are plans afoot by parties not yet arrived, to remove Bzup from the Vespris...if so, it won't be for one of, @weinerdog, @Al Norris , and @RainbowPhoenixWI's Siffle burgers with cheese and bacon.... I think Til Majors is needed to be part of the conversation that is about to happen... Mister Sharples, who had been watching Bzup as the alien stood quietly beside Jem, suddenly smiled. "Um...Master Terpin, will you have a moment when you're through eating?" "Yes. Have you something in mind?" The engineer winked at Jem, and then nodded. "Best discussed in private, until we can be sure the idea will float." The master's eyes crinkled, and he nodded. "The best kind of strategy, I think." He quickly finished the last of his food, and nodded. "Shall we?" While we can only get one chapter a day, Geron...Can you make mine a double???
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What will become of the 'special guests" and where will they go???
