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    Chapter 2

    One would think that evolution would have worked it's wonders on teenagers....It would seem Winston is too easily upset Loved this chapter and wanted to share some info... https://duckduckgo.com/?q=Aurignacian+statues%2C&atb=v314-1&ia=web https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Venus_of_Hohle_Fels https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Geissenklösterle https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phallus_von_Schelklingen
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    Chapter 17

    I thought to myself when I saw that the chapter was posted, that when in the heck will we see Dakota and Connor finally have more than a "ships passing in the night meeting".... Now...lets get that next chapter out PDQ please and thanks!!
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    Chapter 6

    What did Danny see as @weinerdog pointed out??? Another chapter brought to you by the folks at...
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    Chapter 9

    With Travis in training and Pro honing his skills,one has to wonder if they were to combine forces....wowzer...
  5. Next time I move my ashes will be scattered to the F'ing winds.... Loved this chapter it was priceless and having said it so many times, a master class in plot development and wordsmithing... Now...you got me hook, line, and sinker with the following...I'd melt so fast I'd agree to: Do the dishes, the laundry, take out the garbage, turn on your e-reader to the morning newspaper while placing the coffee cup on the table, wash the windows, dust bunny patrol, put up and take down the Xmas lights, and hand over the checkbook...errr...perhaps not... “So, yes, I love you. I’m in love with you. It seems so obvious to me it’s laughable you could miss it, but I understand why. No one ever showed you they loved you. Well, guess what? If I have my way, I’ll never have to say it because I’ll show you every day until forever. Because to me, that’s how long I want to be with you. This isn’t dating. You’re the real deal. We’re the real deal.”
  6. So does...
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    Chapter 220

    I can remember once yelling at my mother that I had no clean clothes that morning, it was then she took me to meet MR and Mrs Washing Machine and Dryer...Point being is that boys are very capable to look after themselves and are better off knowing how to do so...the following lines indicate so...learning to cook isn't just for girls.... “What did Angela say?” “She said she was glad they arrested Ann. She was always saying the kids didn’t need all of this fancy food.” “So we are now one cook short.” “Mary and Clara said they would over look and teach the girls.” It is past time to teach the boys as well...after that episode with my mother, I also learned how to cook and became very good at it. I'm very upset that it would seem that Christian is not the son his father raised, or so it seems. Time to call in the auditors!!!
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    Chapter 3

    With several chapters by the Queen of the Korner Krew toying with our emotions and fear of innumerable cliffhangers.....
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    Chapter 3

    OM F'ing G...first on Page 6!!!!!!!! WHEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Chapter 3

    It's why they make adult sized Depends....
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    Chapter 3

    Including @drpaladin, Not very likely at all, moved back to farm country and happened on a hike to pass a steaming manure pit nearby. Thought of Caleb and what they both had in common. Relief flooded through Caleb. The horse and donkey were the only living things he cared about. He hated to think about the beautiful Palomino getting hurt because of his stupidity. He already had enough of that in his life. That's what we are blaming this whole mess on, stupidity...sorry but that excuse just does not cut it. Caleb made the decision to turn traitor, leading to the mutilation, death, and science experiments gone bad on young pups. As I see it, there ain't no coming back from that... One has to wonder what fortuitous sequence of events can wash the stain of his actions away.... Luke asked for the truth, but Caleb knew he wasn’t ready to hear it. His friend still remembered the old Caleb, who was trustworthy and honest. That man ceased to exist the day he decided to betray his pack. So he veiled the lie behind the truth. Ain't that the truth... Ok, haters...I've stocked the fridge and I can withstand the siege..., nearly finished the move and have unpacked several boxes. Got 11 miles on the rail trail this morning, feeling somewhat less grumpy. Only one or two trips back and forth left. On a positive note, my attorney just handed my cousins attorney invoices and copies of canceled checks, I've got 'em by the short hairs, with interest due...There just may be light at the end of the tunnel for you know who.....
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    Chapter 23

    I agree with this comment wholeheartedly, Seth's mother given a choice as to how her new born daughter should be cared for, raised to be able to eventually mainstream, has all the hallmarks of abuse...while I can sympathize with the tragedy Stacey's birth was, there is no excuse for taking every possible step to get her the care and rehabilitation she needed, then to top off the treatment of Seth endured over the years, without explanation is unforgiveable... Lastly, where is the father???? He did himself little favor for disappearing. Quite frankly legal advice, proper care and counseling should have been legally mandated...
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    Chapter 23

    Or a malleable BF for Stacey???
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    Chapter 26

    Of course Valrinda has been hurt and drugged, Parallax the irresponsible feline has a lot to answer for... There's nothing wrong with broccoli if you cook it right!!~!
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    Back Home

    One thing is for certain, there is a bumpy road coming up...good on Toby figuring some things about himself, somehow, I suspect Toby might be accidently outed...but there are so many other directions the fireworks can come from...
  16. Jeremy DOA or badly injured? @weinerdog had a thought that it might be a DOA, I'm thinking badly injured, needing much assistance during recovery. Oh...I would not go so far to call it a cliffhanger, more like a 'wait and see hanger'.
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    Prologue

    Humm, an interesting beginning, let's see where this goes...
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    Chapter 8

    Who needs enemies with friends like that??? It's a freaking wonder that Pandemonium has lasted as long as it has....
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    Chapter 7

    How soon till Lip betrays Travis???
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    Chapter 12

    I have to agree with @raven1, I found this elsewhere, and the writing for this is so much better. Looking forward to seeing how this one develops....
  21. I think someone should have had the discussion with Carlo about dialing back the retribution, but sadly it is too late. While Mike will need intensive medical care and months, if not years, of therapy, Carlo is lucky that Mike will most likely live. Once the story comes out about what Mike did to Lance, and then the fight with with Travis, and the past history of Mike's bullying, Carlo will most likely won't be charged. I'm not sad or sorry about what happened to Mike, I just think that in the moment it was overkill. The kick to the head was unnecessary and uncalled for. Mike was down on the ground, unable to defend himself. If it proves to be fatal, Carlo deserves whatever the legal system throws at him. I happen to think that at this point, Carlo isn't any better than Mike...
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    Chapter 31 S1

    A great chapter and like the others I had to 'visit' some of these places via the web...truly fascinating and educational!! Petroglyph National Monument (U.S. National Park Service) (nps.gov) Loretto Chapel Miraculous Staircase | Loretto Chapel
  23. Well...there's a twist or two...Can't disagree with any of the comments above. Lady Cicely has the right of it, her comments at the King's dance several chapters back are coming to fruition... It's about to get messy, Gustave isn't as obsequious as we thought him to be, he's much more aware of the comings and goings of his retinue...Fran was lazy in this regard...
  24. As others have noted, Lucas is set on capturing his own 'wilding' and it won't be oats he'll be using for bait... The following bothered me a bit, I have a nagging feeling the Sherriff ain't one to let go so easily... Lucas met his gaze for a few blinks before looking away again. “Appreciate that, and all I can say is Reid is my friend, but he needs to be respecting I know what’s best for me and that I can make up my own damn mind… and I have.”
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