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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Thank you for the warning preceding this chapter but you might want to amend it a bit, ya had me in tears after reading the following...as well written paragraph as I have read anywhere on this site...Thank you for this.... “Isn't it obvious? You want acceptance. You want people to want you. You want to feel accepted by those you care about, because your fuck face sperm donor makes you feel like you don't deserve it. You push people away, so you don't get hurt. But you're only getting hurt because you don't feel like you're worthy of their time, love and consideration. Kenny loves the shit out of you, bro, but you're still worried he'll leave you. You're being weird about me wanting to be friends and family with you, because you're worried that I'll find some reason to be rid of you. What you're failing to see is that we want to be in your life, all you have to do is just let us do that. I know it's hard, but you have to trust us. We're not your bios. We're choosing to keep you, just like your dads are.”
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Chapter 5 - Healing
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Healing
With the knowledge these folks have, will our intrepid explores be allowed to leave??? Ogdia frowned. “We realized that if our creations were shared, like the design for our planet Gartrio for example, smaller versions could be constructed and used as weapons. The process of converting the energy into power creates such vast levels that it could be used to destroy entire planetary systems -
A fresh start for Oscar, let's see where this leads to!!
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Interlude- Search for Avalon Part II
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Interlude- Search for Avalon Part II
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Interlude- Search for Avalon Part I
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Interlude- Search for Avalon Part I
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It would be an interesting spin-off as most of the boys she is likely to date may have boyfriends... Haha, I love this. Sounds like the title for a spin-off series!
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Giorgio is about to realize Ravello just may have someone (Marco?) to pique his interest, it was obvious he was hitting on Cosmo... the following pretty much sums it up for me... “So,” Luca summarised, checking the facts off on his fingers as he went. “The emotionally screwed-up, closet gay kid from the notorious crime family in Naples is sent to live with a couple of evangelical old homophobes in Salerno. He ends up hating them almost as much as he hates his birth family, and teams up with a girl who also hates everything. Not content to waste his life away smoking weed with his beard, he goes off for secret fumbles with a younger boy, only to be caught in the act by his beard’s kid brother, who’s now trying to blackmail him.” He mopped at his eyes, wiping the tears of mirth away. “Honestly, you couldn’t make it up.”
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Chapter 3 - The Aergoroth Nebula
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 3 - The Aergoroth Nebula
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Trust no one!!!! Morgana, I surmise is unable to leave her current place of abode...what she is seeking could be very dangerous, for everyone!!!
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The forensic accounting firm of Sawzall, Sawzall & Sawzall stand ready to review the work of the prior accountancy firm Dewey, Cheetham & Howe... And what sweet poetic justice would it be to see Morainic Miles living back with Mum!!! And yes, Miles is as thick as glacial till...
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He ain't the only one...Hopefully this clue pans out!!! “Geez, Jim. I keep battling red herrings, and I’m back to square one.”
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Once again, we are gifted with a story that will thoroughly engage you, the reader and at times have you scratching, no not that folks...this is an attempt a seriousness!!! This story is bound to engage you and the comment section and boy did I comment, even to the point of getting mud all over my face and having to live with some of my comments... Folks, this is what a great story does. Stop reading this and get to the first chapter already!!!
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Back to Jerry, A New Boss, and More Appeals
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Back to Jerry, A New Boss, and More Appeals
Thank you for taking the time to share this with us, some of what I am thinking I will leave in the review. You hit all the right notes in crafting this...for this, thanks!!! -
I sense that the difficult part is past with the exception of having to testify, if there is any justice in this world, the perp will plead guilty ASAP!! It is comforting to know that others who were involved are and might be coming forward, many more nails for the coffin!!! I am heartened that Ollie will be staying with Noah's grands!!! I get the sense that Belindas may be shifting careers...pronto... I found the following tidbit somewhat unsettling... Andre answered, “Better than I would have expected. We have a list of names that I haven’t given to the police. Four I didn’t know about and two I had forgotten when I was telling the police. Also, we’ve remembered the names of a couple of the adults involved.”
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Chapter 2 - Boullia Bay
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Boullia Bay
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A very enjoyable chapter and like others, this brought back some poignant memories of things I got up to back in high school...you know that time just after Columbus discovered the New World and blue jeans....
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Oh, the stupid dance of hormones...the only cure is getting over one's doubts....
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Chapter 1 - Allthrin
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Allthrin
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Prologue - The War
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Prologue - The War
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Oh my goodness, talk about a stressful situation, a homophobic father and misunderstandings clouded by uncertainty...
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Good lord forgive me...for I am about to sin...repeatedly....
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Strange Bedfellows, and Some Progress
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Strange Bedfellows, and Some Progress
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Well...That was certainly a kick in the pants, having to leave in the middle of the night as the world you knew falls apart. A chance at love gone up in smoke and flames, leaving in the detritus of the disaster, a traveling companion, you'd rather kick to the curb...
