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Family Life: pub lunch
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family Life: pub lunch
Let’s try this again, on the road and on a tablet…this chapter hit all the right notes -
Well…that wasn’t unexpected…wasn’t it…
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Chapter 1 - The Old Man at Christmas
drsawzall commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Old Man at Christmas
Thank you for this timely reminder. And folks please remember the reason for the season and not at just this time of year!- 28 comments
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Family Life: pub lunch
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family Life: pub lunch
This halter hotall the right notes!!! -
Either Unintended Consequences or Breaking Point
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It’s a shame that they don’t have penicillin for those pesky viruses!
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I can only imagine what must have gone through Ned's mind when he first spotted Peter after so many years, one wonders what Mithras will reveal when the meet with her shortly...
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Ian is quickly becoming a favorite of mine...talk about talent...
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Ok all you haters...the jury has crawled out from under the rocks they were hiding under and are pretty danged close to a decision... Hats off to @kbois for some of the best concurrent chapters for pacing, suspense, angst, and generally setting one heck of battle...Tho if you killed, bumped off or otherwise wrote Reilly off...I'd take it all back in a frigging heartbeat!!!
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Including @Mrsgnomie...hey...look at me...#45...at my age that's pretty danged good...
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Chapter 22 - The Dark Base
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 22 - The Dark Base
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A Condo, a Psychologist, and More Time With Dad
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Condo, a Psychologist, and More Time With Dad
I'm thinking it is time for some 'adult' time but the dynamic of bringing a boyfriend home may upset the fragile dynamic with Dominic, it is early days yet and to me it is a situation to slowly ease into. Now if we are going out with the specific reason to do some bow-chicka-bow-wow to vent and purge the tubes in a one-night service station, go for it I say...just don't want to see a neanderthal meeting Dom... -
Read on, there is more to come!
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The plot, whatever it may be...thickens...who are they rescuing???
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Chapter 20 - Three Years Earlier
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Three Years Earlier
Adn then there's the profit to be made if they can find a way to control the randomness...Money/economics...the 2nd most common cause of war... -
Thank goodness for mom...Dad needs to realize when Mike is 18 and legally an adult his control ends...Mike is smart enough to get a full ride to any college he'll apply to... Back off dad...
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Much happening in this chapter and all to the good!! Love the fact the mini-cooper is going to be worked on!!
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One has to wonder how secure the milt filter is with Jasper and his keeping steady employment. I don't think her salary alone will be enough to support the two of them. The 64-thousand-dollar question is, how comfortable will she feel if the maintenance from Brian stops. In fact, would she think that she may have to pay maintenance back to Brian?? I still have to think that Brian and Toby, and by extension, Gordon, are on solid grounds. I can't for the life of me think that any judge would condone putting a gay child in a homophobic house...considering the recording and Toby's notes. Robert Hugill...as to you question as to where to end the story, perhaps you should get back to us in another 30 chapters or so from chapter 36...On to Normandy!!!!
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A very interesting beginning to say the least...I wonder how developed their astronomical and mechanical technology is...
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We will see what the lottery brings as to who will go...
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My mother told me that good girls don't pass gas...to be polite...so, knowing that we can deduce much!
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Doctor Wayne and Jeremy's Distress
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Doctor Wayne and Jeremy's Distress
Someone Adam's age can't verbalize everything surrounding them and horrifying events, I hope to all heck that medications aren't needed... -
Chapter 19 - The Periwinkle Pickle
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 19 - The Periwinkle Pickle
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An urban street slang dictionary would be helpful for us older, gentrified old farts... Mike needs help...or it may end up bad for him
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Queen Amber needs a better PR outfit to combat what will be bad press, someone has to come up with a better cover story...most importantly...the bastards were caught and if able, let's hear them sing...there has to be other fish to fry!!!
