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My grateful thanks Drown, your comment means a lot to me, rest assured there is another segment coming shortly!!
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Chapter 13 - The *Final* Last Drive-in
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 13 - The *Final* Last Drive-in
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Chapter 13 - The *Final* Last Drive-in
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 13 - The *Final* Last Drive-in
I'm reminded of an old line from Monty Python, "And now for something completely different"... -
The Talk, and Manny Gets Another Welcome
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Talk, and Manny Gets Another Welcome
Thank goodness then Gherkins, kosher or sweet, were left out of the discussion...not that I'm alluding to anything personal... -
Well...they have kicked the can, in so many stupid ways... Nathan picked up the pen and hesitated a moment. He was exhausted pretending to be someone else. They were so far away from all the trouble of their past. He decided to risk it and sign his true name. He passed the pen to Brohm, who glanced at him wearily upon seeing the signature. Pen to paper, Brohm held still a moment before signing his real name below Nathan’s. Not once but twice...Was it enough to cancel the image spell the witch did for them??? “Miss Charters?” Nathan called out. An aggravated growl replied from the other side, followed by the scrape of wooden legs on stone. “Who is it?” demanded a woman’s voice. “My name is Nathan, along with my partner, Brohm. We’ve travelled from the west in search of your knowledge and help. Could we speak to you?” When they meet the daemon, will it talk of Nathan's bite??? Nathan's wound is fatal or so he was told, might there be a cure Rabiah my know of???
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Chapter 12 - The First Shifts
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 12 - The First Shifts
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Hunter was very smart to video the entire incident, Oscar's legal team is going to have a field day with the two arresting idiots...take them to the cleaners and then the municipality as well!!! Oh my freaking goodness... “Mind your business sonny and leave us be,” the second officer said to Hunter, “Any problems here Mr Kingston?” one of the Campus security officers asked when he appeared, “Yes, these officers have just injured Mr Kingston and they refuse to take him to the hospital. Can you please call for an ambulance right away,” Hunter responded with concern in his voice. “No need, we will take him there ourselves, when we are done with him,” the officer said as he shoved me into the back of the police van and slammed the door shut. Luckily I landed on my uninjured side on the floor of the van, but the jarring effect sent shooting pain up my arm, and I now had tears running down my face. A few minutes later I was escorted into the police station and sat down in an interview room.
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Chapter Twenty-Three: Breach
drsawzall commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Twenty-Three: Breach
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Best comment yet, now if the designers of IKEA furniture a shoe rack to fit the exercise bike/clothes hanging station life would be a dream!! A delightful chapter but I am and remain concerned for Thomas, I believe without actually saying it, Thomas saw more than anyone should see... In some parts of Africa, outreach efforts by several Christian denominations based here in the US of A, have actually had a hand in formulating the laws that persecute gay and lesbian folk, by working with those in power...
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The Talk, and Manny Gets Another Welcome
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Talk, and Manny Gets Another Welcome
While this chapter was, for the most part calm, it was interesting to see that the Puritan ethos in this country can rear its ugly head in nearly any facet of our lives... Sex and sexual attraction are demonized, treated as filthy, and not discussed for the most part, leading to all sorts of issues. Open, honest discussions about our bodies, sex, and intimacy should be nothing to be afraid of. What should be of larger concern will Karen and Ken going to turn out to be healthy, productive, tax paying citizens, contributing to the welfare of the larger world around us... Not that I have any strong opinions or anything...now...where did I leave that danged soapbox????- 34 comments
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Thanks Geron, it's high praise and I am deeply appreciative of your comment, not to worry...there's more to come!!
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Chapter 11 - Dry Land
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Dry Land
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I was thinking that Greg and the MIB were one and the same, it would be a hoot if Greg inadvertently helped to end the MIB... How far from one of the theme parks are they or a shopping mall???
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From my comment in the last chapter, Connor could have the next baby!!!!! It would be such poetic justice.... "What happens when I go into labor?" M asked. "I did a few minor modifications to your body," Mother said. "You have a cervix. It's behind your prostate." "What?" Connor made a face. "When you go into labor, your cervix will start having painful contractions. It'll begin to dilate so your baby can be born—" "See!" Connor cried out. "I told you you'd destroy your asshole!" M glanced fearfully at the drone and finally, Mother addressed Connor's shock and horror head on. "He'll go right back to normal. I redesigned his body for this specific process." "I don't know why," Connor scoffed. "This is completely unnatural." "It's natural now," Mother said smartly. "Perhaps more males will chose to be modified like M in the future. He is the first, but he does not need to be the last."
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Poor Marcus...stuck with the exact opposite of Connor.... Thoughts on M wanting a second child...what a hoot if it were Connor was the one carrying that child...now's there is a happy ending I'd like to see... What will Mother come up with, will the MIB make an attempt during M's delivery???
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Old habits are difficult to break... "Don't be so negative," M said. "I know we can do this." Connor laughed darkly. "With a drone from Best Buy?" M jumped up and leapt at Connor over the bundles of cords. He shoved him right through the door and slammed him into the wall out in the hallway with an incredible strength. Connor choked on his tongue as he lost all the breath in his body. Back in the room, Nathan started to chortle with glee. Connor gazed into M's eyes with complete shock. The blond leaned into his face. He pressed his forearm painfully into Connor's broad chest. "What the fuck?" Connor hissed. "You're hurting me!" "Stop doubting my power, Connor," M breathed into his face. "I used to have a problem with seizures, but I don't think it'll be an issue anymore, once the baby is born." "Wha-what?" "I told you. I'll figure this out," M said. "I will, Connor. I'll fix everything. Just wait and see," he pressed. For some reason I am reminded of the TV game show "The Weakest Link".... starring you know who....
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Might there be a 'romantic' interest for Oscar as well???? Batteries Oscar, don't forget the batteries....
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If only we could...if only we could,
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So, in the meme time.... Anything else you care to recommend???
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Thia was the right chapter at the right time, Bryan finally heard the words he has been hearing all along, here's hoping the help he gets works...BTW...Billy was spot on!!! Caleb, how my heart goes out, that he would rather be anyone but himself, my anger at this isn't so much directed at Diego, Steve, or Bryan, but at the fucktards at the school he attends to, there isn't enough space or time for me to fully vent my feelings here... Diego and Steve need to keep talking with the boys and the boys need to do the same, and not just conversations starting with "And how was your day...?" The Fucktards girlfriend, Miss Diesel Tailpipe...How can she think a long-term relationship is possible given the preponderance evidence??? Now as to your brain fog dear author, as a Dr. of Sawzallogy, my informed opinion is as follows....
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Chapter 10 - To the Sea
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Right on Tris!!! Could not have said it any better...
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I remain concerned about Hunter's backstory and was surprised to see he was partially deaf. Here's hoping things are about to improve for him. I hope he has a chance to see his mother before she passes...and the step-ass is caught looting what belongs to Hunter, with serious legal consequences!!
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Chapter 9 - The Forest
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The Forest
If Tygo can freeze the world, why not have her do so in the cities that others are cleaning up and have the bad guys teleported to a place they can't leave... From Ch 4... “Sorry, kid, I left him in Teshon City with his sister and a bunch of our people. A teleporter brought me here yesterday.” A teleporter? Djaruki thought. Is there a way I could have traveled all this way without walking? She was very curious and asked aloud, “Is the teleporter here with you? Also, if this place is unfriendly to our kind, then why’d you come here?”
