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Everything posted by drsawzall
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They say that beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, memories that never fade... Read on to see if you agree!
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Time passes on for all of us, but memories such as this show me time that'll last forever...thank you!
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So well done and thank you Sir for reminding this old fart how I looked at the wonders of the world so long ago, discovering that same passion is still there!!!! Thank you!!!
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Oh to be young again and be able to experience the wonders of your surroundings, discovering how fleeting some experiences may be... An exceptional series of thought provoking poems...
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Chapter 7 Passions Explode
drsawzall commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 7 Passions Explode
Now, let's see where this conjugal reunion goes, will it last or will the two be like moths drawn to the flame of the candle... -
Pulled in a Dozen Directions
drsawzall commented on Refugium's story chapter in Pulled in a Dozen Directions
Robbie has wandering eyes for the wrong person and he might have to have a talkin to~!!! Ritter needs to have a "Come to Jesus Meeting" with Samael and look at how far he has (over?) stretched himself... Ike Clanton...what can be said about a cowardly bully, one that is all mouth and quite the expert at bushwacking folks...nothing good is gonna come out of his visit... -
What's the old adage??? "Prior proper planning prevents..." What a fantastic idea to use the jeep with the pole to ensure safe passage thru some of the small towns!!! Gotta love the helpful police officer as well!! That bus you used for the story cover looks like a interesting ride!!
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Starting down the rabbit hole
drsawzall commented on leo4567's story chapter in Starting down the rabbit hole
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Despite running across a bunch of ignorant a-holes, when Jexon and Marcus accepted the job as traveling vets, was there any paperwork confirming employment with the traveling rodeo. I would argue there is grounds for breach of contract....the bus never should have been bought otherwise...let's hope they can turn this situation towards their advantage...
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looks like they will be traveling in style and the boys are going to get quite an education!!!
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Chapter 23 - Photonova Gland
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Photonova Gland
Somehow I get the sinking feeling that Ninyani will need to use his mantis gland in healing Tchama as a result of her being hurt at the protest/faceoff... -
Well heck...there goes the diet!!! Well done Sir!!
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You certainly picked a classic song...
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I think @raven1 might be on to something with his comment....I thought the following was very interesting, perhaps portending very interesting developments to come... “Only one injured; that has to be a record,” Alastair whispered louder than he intended. “And three more accessed the spark. Only one of them was even normal first access from memory; two were environmental stimulus-response, and one was stopping another,” Bear whispered excitedly. “Wait, they fought while accessing the spark?” Colton asked confused Teo saw us lined up and cleared his throat, breaking the circle. “You boys confused about what you are supposed to do?”
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Chapter 22 - An Unexpected Guest
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 22 - An Unexpected Guest
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It looks as if the Blue clan has their way...arrrggg there be dragons over there me laddie.... Last thing I remember I was running for the door I had to find the passage back To the place I was before "Relax," said the night man "We are programmed to receive You can check out any time you like But you can never leave"
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I can remember my father telling my Mother that she became Swedish by injection....
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It seems that Devin has plans to see Michael join him as a skinwalker, the question becomes, is it done by someone who is or can act as a shaman...OR...Could Devin be turning Michael by intimate activities??? 😉!!
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Another thought occured to me, the Duchess of Suffolk, was Grainger's mother a bit closer to Lady Kendall than we thought? While gossip and speculation seems to travel faster than any other type of news, Lady Kendall was remarkably well informed and current. It would seem to explain her bequest to the Duchess of Suffolk...
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Wow...Wow...simply wow... What a fantastic chapter and can't add much to what has already noted, other than to say that Davinia just may be opening a larger can of whoop ass...It is to be expected that she, her dunce for a husband and father-in-law just may not realize or understand how much the King, Prince of Wales and the Duke of Cumberland just how much esteem they hold Grainger in, considering how much he smoothed troubled waters. I suspect Caroline is going to be mortified when she realizes the magnitude concerning the error of her ways... I believe after further consultation and consideration, both estates will run very smoothly... It will be fun watching the clueless and befuddled try to overturn Lady Kendal's will... Thanks Lord Arbor for another fantastic chapter!!!! Now to reread it once again!!
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Well...it would seem that a mystery was cleared up except for the missing letters and where they might be??
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Chapter 21 - Dozi, Ilya, & Tchama
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Dozi, Ilya, & Tchama
My gut feeling is that the Messiah's will retrench for the night, to better plan and understand what is facing them...Conversely, it is time for the residents of the town to realize that they need to organize!!! Why do I get the feeling that Ninyani might be a secret weapon... -
Chapter 20 - Auntie Peg & Ninyani
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Auntie Peg & Ninyani
Well done, could not have said it any better... One thing has me wondering about Ninyani, we know he has the ability to make things hot or cold, in his defeating the old "god'' of his village, one unintended side effect was the death of everyone in his village...does he have the ability to create the same sort of effect elsewhere, or was it just a one time thing??? -
Chapter 19 - The Principal Messiah
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 19 - The Principal Messiah
I think it is time to retrench, solidify the guard force rotation, have reserves in place to meet any opponent and securing your homes and businesses... -
No rest for the weary from the vacation, talk about jumping from the frying pan to the fire!!! I hope Jexon and marcus get a bit to unwind and help the new family members settle in
