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  1. drsawzall

    TA Chapter 5

    I suspect Struan's CO is a jackass, with an unmatched ability to snatch Defeat from the Jaws of Victory...Is it possible he could make his resignation immediate??? One has to wonder...with weeks left in his 10 year term of service, what is the most remote Army outpost they could send him to??? I suspect his soon to be former CO wants his own vacation retreat...
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 207

    One has to hope that those children see past the bigotry of their fathers...another heartwarming chapter despite the rough patch...So sad some folks never learn that life is too short for that type of BS...
  3. drsawzall

    SW2

    A lesson that perseverance does and will pay off, that with patience and courage...it does get better!! Having said that Josh, despite his embarrassment, should have gone to the police station, from the looks/sounds of it, there was plenty enough DNA to obtain a conviction for rape and child pornography...but I digress from what was an amazing story of courage!
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 23

    Valrinda hasn't finished with the assailant(s) yet would be my guess... I hold and have no sympthany for the so-called cat Parallax. Once the star is found that cat needs to be booted swiftly in the backside and a being worthy of the responsibility given the job... He was too tired and too frustrated to be indignant. Well, too indignant. “What do you mean, you don’t know? Aren’t you supposed to be my guide?” He’d taken that to mean that Parallax was sending him someone that would know where to find the star that had been taken from him, but he was getting more and more of an idea that Valrinda was more along for the ride. Not that he wasn’t a wealth of knowledge about the world that Beckett found himself in. He’d have had no idea where to go or how to find the road, how to trade to get money, his new clothes and stuff. Not to mention he’d probably have been killed by one beast or another. There were probably smaller things that didn’t come near a dragon but would consider a human a tasty snack.
  5. drsawzall

    TA Chapter 4

    Well, what a piece of work the Lt Colonel is, a sneaky bas^$rd!! It may be quiet at the compound at the moment but where are the two thieves, more importantly, who's feeding them info???
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 17

    Thank god for Aunt Marie and Uncle Steve...getting the boys professional help will work wonders... Sadly, I am of the opinion that Stacy and her mother just may be just a tad beyond help...Mother needs to have a serious intervention with Child Welfare Services regarding her parenting skills... Will we see Seth's father make an appearance now???
  7. Most everything ended well, Bruce needs a ''Come to Reason'' moment...
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 26

    Or to help with the humping???
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Well now...it will be a new take on the genre...Wonder if they can tan??? 😉
  10. drsawzall

    Actual Words

    The boys work together....what could possibly go right/wrong...
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Wonder how your imagining works during a full moon....hummm
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 16

    The almost good news is that Blake may have found a boyfriend in Ernie Fellows... The best news is the shite has hit the proverbial fan.,...how do you put the jigsaw pieces back together...
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 15

    I had to put this down for a bit, such a pathetic band of frigging losers...sheesh...Do these folks all get their fix from the local shake and shake shop called... I'll change my opinion with Ty for now, there may be hope for the boy regardless of how he swings Then, what are the chances Stacey goes all Sissy Spacek at the dance when she find out Craig is gay
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    Chapter 26

    Dr Dull...self-medicating I see... With shaky hands, Dr. Dull pulled a bottle from his desk, took two big gulps, and put it back. “Perhaps if you stopped suppressing your emotions and dealt with them in a healthy way, you wouldn’t lose control like this.” What could possibly go wrong/right at a sleepover???
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Well...I am not the only one who picked up on some not to subtile clues.... I ran at a slower pace than normal, not wanting to wear Scott out. I kept an eye on him, watching for signs he was tiring, but he was keeping up and didn’t seem to be falling behind. By the time we had turned up the road to the farmhouse, my shirt was soaked. The humid morning was keeping my sweat from evaporating. When we stopped by the barn, I turned and noticed Scott’s shirt was still dry. ‘Dang, he’s in better shape than I expected,’ I thought as we both took a drink from our water bottles. Important to note what is underlined above... “He was great! I helped him around the house a lot, and he told me all about his life as a boy in Germany during the war. The funny thing is, he’s got a grandson named Scotty.” “No way? I bet you thought I was him when you first saw me.” Scott said with a laugh. “Nah, I met him over Christmas, like two years ago. He was eight or nine then, so unless you’ve time traveled, you’re not him.” I said, then I looked at Scott in mock surprise “Do you have a DeLorean hidden in an old barn somewhere?” “Nope,” he said. “I just age really fast, but I’m almost done with that now.” Again, what is underlined above As we shopped for the food on my list, the conversation turned to some of the supernatural aspects of Roeder's books. I said they were nice in stories but didn't believe in those things. Scott was shocked until I explained that I didn't disbelieve either. I'm smart enough to know that I don't know everything, and if I were given evidence of something, I'd reconsider, but it all seemed so unlikely. Angels, ghosts, witches, werewolves, and vampires couldn't have been around for thousands of years without someone having discovered them. He said many things in science had been unknown until recently, and many more were still unknown. I want to say Scott is a Vampire but he travels well in the sun...humm...I know that dogs and other canines don't sweat...so again...hummm Type faster...post quicker please and thanks!!!
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 25 S1

    Why do I get the feeling that at some point there will be conflict with the evil skinwalkers? All in all though, a very informative and interesting chapter!
  17. All empires end or give way and not in an orderly fashion, the changing of the guard as a new King takes the stage, threatens the old regime as influence wanes...While not everything is as it seems, as Lady Cecily would inform the non-ersatz Lord Grey. There were at least dual purposes in her ruminations... Methinks Thomas Wolner mayhaps be in over his head, the spark to the tinder at Speakers Square???
  18. Oh my goodness...I mean WTF???
  19. drsawzall

    In the Woods

    Glad I found this and it is a breath of fresh air!!! You had me with the following!!! "Hi Cal. You didn't tell me you went and had another child." "Before you get too confused, Matt. Mom's name is Calista." "OK, thanks Reggie. Although I wasn't really expecting Calvin." "Yes, Elias, they were running a special on young teenagers at the store." "You always love a bargain. But I believe we're making him think we're odd. Hello son. How are you and who are you?" "Hi Mr. Lincoln. I'm good. I'm Matt Harrison. Actually, I'm your paperboy. Mrs. Lincoln offered to feed me instead of paying for the paper this week."
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    Chapter 3 Bean

    One would have call this part of the evening fortuitous as some of what was lost was found...and more ill-gotten gains were found. I have to think the shawl and jewelry/bracelet will more than 'prove' they have two of the thieves!!! Now the boys need to get to town and get the word out and over the telegraph wires to be on the lookout for the wounded bandit... I think Lucas will ease Jubal's fears as their bond grows... Oh...and boys...get the to the barber and spend the 2 bits for a bath and a shave!!!!
  21. drsawzall

    TA Chapter 3

    It looks like the fun just won't stop...does it??? As noted, theft of gems, a stabbing, murder of a train employee, beating the station manager, when caught, send these two jokers and anyone else cooperating with them, swimming in Leaders Creek where they can go dancing with the crocks!!!! The following had me a bit worried tho... Backing back about twenty metres, I found enough space to go off the road and into the bush, having engaged four-wheel drive on my vehicle, I carefully drove through the bush, until I reached my boundary and returned to the road, which had deep ruts in it, to get to my front gate. I was not too happy when I saw some minor damage to the gate, where someone has attempted to get through and onto my property, with no success.
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Well, you've set the stage with all sorts of clues, I am wondering tho how being shaved equates to a sore rear end and jut what does Mike have to do with either???
  23. Loved this chapter but...there's gotta gonna be a cliffhanger round the next chapter or so...
  24. drsawzall

    TA Chapter 2

    Every law enforcement agency in the general vicinity should be on Red Alert, and the Army as well...what a great exercise for the Army as one of their own is in danger... When the local police did not answer Struan's call, he should have made a few more calls to other law enforcement agencies...
  25. Sounds like a bad LSD trip...did someone slip some magic mushrooms into a meal???
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