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Our young master has been to the manor before. What goes on behind the doors he can't open? Will the locket with his sister's image offer protection? And...what is Damien? Have they met before?
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The devil of this bargain is in the details....
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For all of what is going on, the actions of Leo and Caleb, they will, when they are no longer of service, end up like the righteous man...Their place at the side of Silas is temporary; what of his precious acolytes?
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I give him credit for trying to be chaste and lasting three days...I was gone in an hour....
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That was a twist and a half, and the other commentators covered my thoughts...What formula did Jesok discover? Is it truly worthless or a viable tool if one can recreate. That a bullet can stop a dreader is interesting; one would have to fire from some distance, at the least. Daren weilds a powerful force. Is Book Four the final book? If not, how many books are there?
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I have to wonder if we have seen the last of the hunter or his friends, he's a danger as he knows the approximate area these 'campers' are....
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Chapter 3: Handshake Protocol
drsawzall commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 3: Handshake Protocol
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And here I thought our esteemed @Summerabbacat was a vegetarian... And an adventure is beginning for one and all, hopefully including Jamal learning some 'new' duties...
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Very well put!!!!
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Having read most of your works on other story sites, this looks like to be an interesting read...
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I agree 100% with the following...and oh dear lord...what is the pizza boy about to experience....
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Much to wrap up with one chapter to go...
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Chapter 71: Confrontation
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 71: Confrontation
Shawn went and did the wrong thing; his best hope is to become a double agent and bring Director Green down along with Professor Durand... -
Having grown up on the 'other' side of the tracks from Brandon, I've met a few just like him, never quite understanding their lack of reality at times...
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A chapter of discoveries for Finn, realizing it is the person who matters, not the legends of those who weren't!
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Could not have said it any better, other than Ain's little head seems to rule his body in quiet times...his focus is all over the place, is it a result of his powers?
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Noah seems to be quite the charmer, and at odds with his controlling parents...where is this seaside community located, is it England...the US???
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While not a gamer, better uses for my time, bless those who do, I think I got the gist of this.....
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And the following article appeared in the NY Times today...talk about life imitating art...All about the market, legal/and non-legal in isopod collecting and trade.... Pillbugs Are Getting Top Dollar Online. Poachers Have Noticed. - The New York Times
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Resulting in an aurora borealis of isopiod sparkles when the protocols be damned and the chaos is embraced...Hopefully, Garrett isn't looking through the window; it could be contagious, much to Kyle's surprise... I think Orel is your most engaging character to date and his interaction with Kyle was truly priceless...
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The Holiday: Sightseeing
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The Holiday: Sightseeing
And some growing pains in the near future... Gavin patted his son’s shoulder. “Once we are back home, Jason and I are going to explore our options. Which means getting places valued and seeing what is and isn’t possible.” Jason grinned. “What he means is there’ll be maximum disruption, having to keep the place tidy.” “And no wandering around naked, or near naked.” Gavin raised an eyebrow at his son. Matthew looked alarmed. “Won’t the valuers make an appointment?” -
The Quest is Revealed.
drsawzall commented on William King's story chapter in The Quest is Revealed.
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Chapter 70: Back on Earth
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 70: Back on Earth
Only fools rush in without a solid plan...Shawn is dealing with multiple layers of duplicity here...it's like trying to pick one snake out of a basket full of them...That and I can't believe I am recommending patience here.... And, therein lies the danger to Shawmn and all his friends... "I'll keep poking around," Prof. Petrov added. "I agree that you're no use to anyone, including yourself, if you get revealed too soon. The current control system doesn't like things it can't understand." -
I loved this, every young gay boy's fantasy...there were a couple of Brians when you should have used Ted... "You're welcome Mrs. Travis. I'll be heading out now. Like Brian said, lots of cart wrangling. I'm going to go home and take a hot shower. Chase away the sore muscles."
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Another thought, they should take this public. Bad press is not what a studio would want, and it just might be the sword of public opinion that kills the bitch.... Ask yourself, how will the paying audiences react, and just who would they root for???? Needless to say, I am enjoying this story!!!
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