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  1. As for these twins, at least, they finally have a path home. Yea!
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    Part 1

    Well, bunji-bunji sounds familiar. A sound my lower half made after a long night out…just kidding. Wikipedia led me to Miriam-Webster and they define it as an Aussie tree with a bark that is poisonous…
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    Chapter 5

    Call your mother, she must have “connections “, friends in low places who could “facilitate “ the paperwork… "Right let’s figure this ship out, and then get back to Port Talon, we’re going to have to..." Mickey swallowed and glanced back out of the window. “We’re going to have to do paperwork, claim this ship, and register her… him… it…. They?” *”I am a him, the ship is… well undecided. I need to explore and find out.”* Hughie said. With any luck there just may be clean socks and a laundry..
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    Chapter 7

    Or they figured another way to come and go, and I would think that would draw unwanted notice. Needless to say, someone needs to check the license plate numbers, most likely a dead end, and the ferry and lodging/reservation system logs... Just how big is this island? Were they able to capture anyone from the five cars?
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    Crossfire

    The vengeful prick in me would suggest Niran develop a headache from two copper jacketed 9mm slugs just behind the ear. But then we wouldn’t have a story. In this case tho, turnabout is fair play. Put the ball on his court. Legally.
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    Chapter 7

    From Ch 4 There are more things under heaven and earth Austin than you have dreamed of…. Will Xavier reconnect with Austin and how can he accept what has been decided? Who fired the shot, were they part of this pack, or a pack in conflict with them? From Ch 5 Some pretty expensive hardware those three were packing, and interesting to see they did not want to blend in. Could they be off the island already, or are there other targets? Having gone after the pups, another pack is aware of succession issues in this pack and whoever it is, isn’t being subtle… I think this pack let their guard down, and has a mole buried, hidden with in the pack. All out war has been declared. Those driving the SUV’s are still a threat and need to be contained if possible.. if not start running license plates, tho it may not tell them much… Who/what bit Austin, and can the other body be recovered or is it too late?
  7. Can Russell provide winning numbers for the lottery? If so, sign me up!
  8. Early days yet boys…
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    Chapter 4

    GROAN
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    Chapter 3

    At that age does it ever go down?
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    Chapter 29

    The noose tightens incrementally as Louis' supplies dwindle while he awaits a second attempt at reinforcement. This fleet will have to run a gauntlet of ships from Cinque Ports. Generous terms are offered to the rebel barons who keep slipping away from Louis. Any attempt to flee London will be costly as the weeks pass. What remains now is a crapshoot based on uncertain timing. Each day, week, and fortnight constantly drains Louis of his fighting strength. All that is left is what will Louis do?
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    Chapter 13

    Federico da Montefeltro - Wikipedia
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    Chapter 15

    Cormac should understand that his warning works both ways. It would not surprise me if, in trying to arrange an "accident' Cormac or one of his spawn gets badly hurt... As to trying to stop the work, time to put up some discrete trail cameras to monitor the sites, and have them linked to Declan's computer....They come in all shapes and sizes and are easy enough to conceal. Cormac all but stated plainly that he and his spawn won't be idle. As to claim on the land, perhaps Cianán has a stronger claim....
  14. Well...the corollary that a stiffie has no conscience is proven once again...
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    Chapter 11

    Well...no surprises here, it was to be expected that Sam would do something stupid and he did not disappoint...
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    Danica

    Well this was unexpected scene, Joy took gleeful pleasure in delivering the message…and I agree about Remy…and if I remember correctly, aren’t there restrictions based on incidents in his past, that precludes Dante being freed? I find the wager at the end to be very interesting…
  17. Great Uncle Edwin reminds me of my great uncle Herbert. A pious church going man, who taught at a ‘Christian’ college. He could be and was at the best of times insufferable. And with his roving eye, it was a wonder how he managed to fool many. It was while on a church mission to Manila, that all the Filipino houseboys were changed out at his mother-in-laws insistence….
  18. All I got is Natasha is For herself...
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    Chapter 16

    Such an innocuous word....Clarity...one that insidiously corrupts the souls...as to whom does clarity belong?
  20. Thank you for this, and leaving the possibility of furthering the story. Just as importantly, publishing this as a completed story. So many great authors start to post before the story is completed, and then get lost...leaving us with an unfinished work.
  21. Normally, this would have been a story I would have walked away from, until I gave the first chapter a chance, and got hooked, as you will see by my comments. There is a richness and depth to all who populate this story that leaves you wanting more. And for me, the scene in "The Nail" was one of the best parts of this story, and where I fell in love with Mack and Mills. I can't wait for the next installment!
  22. Hopefully not in the bathroom… He wasn’t expecting an answer, but got one anyway. “I’ll help you.”
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    Chapter 2: Kai

    This sort of reminds me of the TV show, Lost. If any polar bears show up, I’m gonna take a hike…🤔
  24. Well, how they get out of this predicament will be interesting….
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