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  1. Somewhere out there is a twink pining for a dad just like me….loved this story!!
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    Dario

    Time to face the music for Jas and his partner, and become functional adults, if not...divorce ASAP
  3. While an agnostic, I find relevance in different parts of scripture, and felt the following was applicable here... This phrase comes from Mark 8:36, “For what shall it profit a man, if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?” Frank smiled, the expression softening his whole face. It was the first real smile Marc had seen on him. "You bring it out of me. Makes me want to be better. For the team. For you."
  4. Living out here in Central Massachusetts, not only the center of the universe, but smack dab in the middle of what's left of our small farming community, one would think the opportunity and the chance to go galavanting on the back of some four-legged means of conveyance would abound...sadly, just not so. I have, however, had a moment on a mechanical bull. Calling it more than a moment is being generous....does this count?
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    HD Chapter 6

    The unkindest cut….
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    Chapter 1

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    Prologue

    And we are off with a whole new adventure and looking forward to it!
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    Oliver & Timothy

    This looks to be quite a story, bring on the next chapter
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    The Six Pack

    Loved this chapter from beginning to end…all I got is…where’s the measurement? Flynn squeezed his hand. "I don't run." “You might want to when Gary gets his dick out.” Who in LA doesn’t know about O’Briain’s tab Dr. Okonkwo watched them with an expression that was somewhere between amusement and exhaustion. "If you're done, I have other patients. Myra will handle the paperwork. And O'Briain?" "Yeah?" "Pay your tab."
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    Quid Pro Quo

    It came to me in the last chapter that I thought our sun king was the culprit….and while that thought is the progenitor of a few red herrings, until otherwise demonstrated, I suspect Bastian is the killer…
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    Chapter 1

    Brilliant, the best time travel tale yet. What a fantastic imagination!! More please!
  12. While I don’t condone what Sakis did, I can’t condemn it either.
  13. Oh my goodness, won’t Granny be surprised….
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    Chapter 18

    Thank you for sharing this with us, not to mention your incredible talent. Being on the next!
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    Chapter 16

    Thanks to the wisdom of the comments above, what I had planned to say has pretty much been covered….just so tremendously sad, And as noted, even today our pick and chose religious zealots bastardized their faiths. They do so to cover their ignorance and bigotry and revel in their actions.
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    Chapter 11

    Someone once asked, how would one eat an elephant, only to hear, one bite at a time! Johnny has built the foundation form his career, and the next steps is to successfully build a fantastic career...
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    The workshop

    Slowly but surely, Neil is coming into his own as he begins to understand there is life after coming out of the closet! Eric Ravilious - Search
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    Chapter 15

    Hey @weinerdog, first on page 2….
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    Chapter 15

    But we know from an earlier blurb from you, he has a story of his own later on….
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    Chapter 1

    Early days, I have to believe Rhaelce isn’t too far behind…they both want to continue the trip to see what is on or near the mountains
  21. I have to wonder, was the expression on George’s face before seeing the black hole event horizon, a direct result of seeing Mickey in glorious underwear action… George stood from his corner, and stared out of the viewport with it’s jaw hanging open, and pointing in sheer terror.
  22. Much better and more effective than crop circles…
  23. This chapter could have been called Stormy Waters…..I give Callum kudos for realizing he was so very close to stepping over the line… Aled was able to gain closure with his return to the farm….
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    Chapter 16

    A lot of hurt feelings in this chapter…and folks at cross purposes, and everyone needs to get their acts together…
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