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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 18

  2. Marina finds out she's yesterday's news...
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 32 - End

    Forward I sally forth and move on in my quest to find part duece, the quest for the Holy Grail, an occasional trail of worthy bread crumbs leading us to the answer to @Okiegrad and his deserving questions. I shall march forward, suffer any indignities or flesh wounds...Thine quest is righteous and mighty!!!~
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    Something I excelled at...just sayin...
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 65

    Thank goodness I read this after breakfast, the food sounds wonderful as I'm sure the finished painting will be!!
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 32 - End

    Thank you for this chapter. I can't bring myself to call it an epilogue, just a pause in their lives. Hats off to Joel and his father for clearly delineating the root cause of the issues between Joel and his mother. I had tears in my eyes as Joel and his father hugged. And he was so on point when he clued his wife in on the damage she's doing, and that only the weasel, did you suspect anything else, is still living at home. Unemployed, a drug bust or two, and some carpet crawlers of his creation to boot. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for continuing this story, as it only got better and better. I hope that occasionally, we get a chapter that allows us to revisit these characters. Not a full-fledged, multi-chapter story, just an occasional one-chapter peek in on them once in a while.
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Very enjoyable…thanks for sharing!
  8. drsawzall

    Bash

    I think it is time for Ryan to move on…
  9. drsawzall

    Almost Home

    Well done and a great take on the theme…
  10. drsawzall

    A Story for Mikie

    Liked this very much, well done!
  11. Well written and concise, I am left with struggling to understand his mothers actions…
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    Chapter 10

    I may be wrong, going way out on a limb here, my left-hand sawing the branch behind me but...something is off...in an earlier comment in, I believe in this story, by our caffeinated author, it's mentioned that Kyle's destiny with true romance was another story to come... And yes, I missed my coke zero this morning, and now I am off to the fridge...
  13. Some interesting theories and possibilities, Atlas can't or won't reveal the full extent of his powers, Nora appears to be much more than suspected at first, and...well, Damien continues to be held captive by his OCD... And the thought of a water mage might/may be involved... I find the dream about the tank to be a possible clue/reason as to why Kellen's magic is on hiatus...
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 34

    From the frying pan...
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    Chapter 23

    The kidnappers must have left a trail...gather up your combined armies and lay waste to the frigid queen's kingdom, or is that queendom???
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    You reminded me of a commercial for insurance...let's see what the next chapter will bring...
  17. Oh my goodness...thank goodness it's rainy this morning and I have time to check a few of these out!!!
  18. Do I sense trouble from the elders?
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    As I commented before, they should all rent a room and maple glaze themselves using their ‘secret sauce’…..
  20. Be careful of what you wish for seems appropriate to say the least…
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 20

    It would indicate to me then it is a much larger ‘game’…..
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    Someone, the ones that ordered this is gonna be wishing they thought about this twice…
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 20

    This confuses me...Unless Kier's father is in on the 'game'... "It's not the duty solicitor, Sarge," the officer interrupted, her voice low. "It's... well, you'd better just come and see." Annoyance flickered across Miller’s face. He shot Kieran a look that said *this isn't over*, and left the room. Kieran waited. The silence stretched, tighter and more anxious than before. He stared at the blank wall, at the recording equipment with its steady red light. Ten minutes passed, each one an eternity. Then the door opened again. Miller walked in first, but he was a different man. His smugness was gone, replaced by a shrunken, furious bewilderment. Behind him entered a man in a pinstripe suit so sharp it seemed to cut the stale air. He carried a calfskin briefcase and an aura of expensive, unassailable authority that made the room feel even smaller. And behind the solicitor walked Kieran’s father. Mr. Varys looked exactly as he always had: a study in controlled grey. Grey suit, perfectly pressed. Grey hair, perfectly trimmed. Grey eyes, cold and assessing. He entered the interview room as if inspecting a particularly unsavoury public toilet. His sneer of distaste took in the bolted table, the stained walls, the recording equipment, and finally, his son. He didn't look at Kieran. He looked at the space Kieran occupied, as if he were an unfortunate stain on the scene. If Ben is paying Sterling, why was Kieran's father there??? He does.
  24. Liam…a master of procrastination….
  25. I had to go with an angry emoticon because of the following…talk about evil, vindictive, and self-dealing….oh…and I would have told the director to go and piss up a rope… That's an issue," she said. "And it needs to be dealt with." Her tone stayed calm. But there was urgency beneath it now, a pulse of something close to fear. "Quickly," Marina added. She ended the call, lowered her hand, slipped the phone back into her bag, and walked back toward the set with her face already rearranged into composure, like whatever she'd just set in motion was simply another item on the day's schedule
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