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Another great story Carlos, but I have to admit I feel a little bit like Oliver Twist asking "Please Sir.... Can I have more ? " also going cold turkey between stories is painful. Thank you for your contributions they really makes for enjoyable reading. Looking forward to the next story before your hiatus. Take care and many thanks Carlos.

I have to think Northman is a trump lover with his attitude and his seeming dislike for Mexico as well as his dislike for CJ being a Democrat. Lets hope he suffers from a significant injury soon and is shipped home. Looking forward to see how 007 C.J Abello gets on next. Thanks Carlos another great chapter.

I liked Kent, I think he's a sly old dog knows his way around and could be very helpful to a young pup like CJ 😇hope we get to hear more from him.

Hi Dodger, well had a strong feeling you would blame Robbie for being the dad, instead of Dirty Don. Why you let that bottom feeder get away with things I don't know. Would have been just what Sue needed to dump him, Steph could say she was drunk and he took advantage of her, get him locked up and bring his "Empire" down around his ears, Oh, happy thoughts.

Dodger, this was a really beautiful chapter. Loved the Sue and Robbie section and with Robbie and Nathan, oh what the hell, I loved it after donny pissed off. After so much strife it was nice to have a bonding chapter for them all. As for the story, it would make my day if the next chapter was about donny driving along crashed his car, trapped in it and it caught fire he burned to death most horribly screaming and begging for help, which he didn't get. Yes, yes, I know its still too quick a death for him, but I do think I would have to cover my keyboard in case I made a mess over it in my excitement. Thanks for a great chapter.

Great chapter to a great story , Carlos. Seems Rich is taking the Airforce in his stride. Interesting rooming him and Boxworth together, maybe Rich could even be tempted to try climbing over the fence just once to see what its all about? ☺️

Carry on films should be standard education in all schools world wide, NOT a single swear word and depending how dirty your mind is, the innuendos will leave you in tears of laughter...... ( I have a very dirty mind so I am always crying with laughter ) have the set and watch when I feel down. As for Stephanie having a bun in the oven I think Robbie is safe..... more likely its either donny's or Connor. Excellent chapter Dodger really enjoyed it, thanks.

I think donny really needs to die, maybe a car crash with a fuel tanker and he burns alive, or, maybe something worse. You would make so many of your loyal faithful readers happy and think of the cost it would save Sue with cremation, its the little things in life that bring cheer. I cant understand why donny is being given all these chances to mess up everyone's life's, he's a poisonous mentally unstable creep, ok, you caught me out, I don't like him, there I said it. Another great chapter and another cliff hanger this time with Stephanie.

As I have said before, these "Pillars" of the community always have a dirty hidden side. Don knows to much about what goes on in town for just a businesses man, and the people he knows leave a lot to be desired. Don is involved right up to his child abusing mouth, symmonds and how many others are involved in this Payton Place of child sex and drugs. As for connor I still feel he was involved in Nathans attack, hes a bunny boiler which would suit donny and the others of donny's group well. Get rid of connor hes the new weak link and will make a mistake maybe Robbie will contact Alex to find out who set Nathan up. Good chapter Dodger. I am sure that with the next chapter connor's family 's farm problem will be helped by donny in return for connor to join his groups stable of young rent boys and sell drugs for them.

Conner is my prime suspect in beating up Nathan, I wouldn't put it passed him sneaking out at night to do the dastardly deed, wouldn't take much to send him a txt from "robbie" asking him to meet. Conner seems to be a bit of a bunny boiler truth be told and has a very sadistic side, enjoys controlling who and what he wants. I am starting to like him as much as i like donny.............................⚰️🕳️💩

Hi Sasha, I really have to say that this is my favourite story which I have reread several times. But I was wondering if you still were going to write the sequel? I know its been several years now but I often look in hope that you start to publish it.

@droughtquake did this actually happen or a wind up?? as didn't hear anything in uk .

@droughtquake If its a funeral then I can say with hand on heart (and with half a dozen 6" nails and hammer in hand to make sure the lid stays down) I hope its for donny ⚰️ oh happy thoughts 😇

If he does Droughtquake he can have a skype wank with Connor then after he has cum dump him 😊

Connor is hard work, Robbie I thought was finally dumping him only to go back again, is he only interested in a cock up his arse? I do hope one of them dumps the other soon. There is something about Connor that does not gel, almost like hes nice until he gets his way and turns in to a bully control freak, if Robbie does dump him I do hope Connor does not turn in to a bunny boiler. A big part of me wants Daniel to get curious enough for him and Robbie to have a session I think Daniel has messed around with Nathan already but thanks to donnys homophobic attitude put that behind him. Yes Nathan acts like a slut, but if you look at him he does care about those he feels relaxed with and that is Robbie as well as Daniel, (Mmmm Nathan, Robbie and Daniel in a 3some) and uses others he does not care about to try and lure Robbie back after all it seems a coincident he turns up at all the party's Robbie is at with a stranger in tow and makes a bee line to Robbie and spends all his time flirting with him basically ignoring the guy he arrived with . I think Nathan and Robbie need one hell of a sex session to decide ( Dodger, if you do want to throw Daniel in to the mix I will not complain ) how they actually feel about each other. Alex is probably in trouble with his supplier and owes him the 2k or we could hear Alex is either face down in a ditch or has been sold to a group of guys as a play thing for them. As for donny, is there never a fatal car crash in cold snow conditions??? one can only hope there is and its donny.