Aditus
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Your poems smell of summer and spring. Sometimes memories are spotlights creating a halo around places and people. Thank you for sharing yours with us and bringing some of mine back.
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That's what I could ever want, making people smile.
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Happy Easter. You made me smile and spit out my coffee.
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Tangle of two souls, perfect. Thank you, Terry!
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#1 You accidentally jostled my arm, and expensive liquor spilled on the bar, the little puddle formed a glossy star, but my ire was quickly cooled by your charm. Your open smile instantly captured me, the little lines around your blue-blue eyes enraptured me, totally, and time flies — maybe by way of my expectant glee. I didn't get your number, just a good night, for it was clearly a chance encounter, though frequent reminiscences found me repeatedly, nothing serious, rig
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Poem Entry - New Sights.
Aditus commented on Midnightwolfpup's story chapter in Poem Entry - New Sights.
I like this. Exploration means to ponder, in this case, different ways to go forward. Thank you for this. -
Thank you, Terry! 1. Chocolate makes (hides) almost everything better. 2. The theme was exploration, so why not have savory soup for breakfast? You're right. 3. Never forget the lemon! 4. I won't touch this kind of pasta as I'm vegetarian, but, if I'd ever try it, I'd choose my cousin's version: Sicily meets Venice! (secret family recipe)
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I have to say I enjoyed these poems, Great! Was it a chocolate cricket? Close. Ant
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@AC Benus 1= chocolate-covered ant (Val guessed chocolate turtle like you. Are chocolate turtles a thing in the U.S of A. ? ) 2= phở,you were close. 3= 👍 4= 👍 About the next chapter: I learned to choose the rating über carefully, someone complained, was scandalized, about how I described a guy eating gelato. Thank you.
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There's no wrong, everything that comes to mind is right.
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Perfect! That's what I was aiming for. Thank you.
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Are you sure?
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# 1 Little chocolate things, hand-dipped, it says, bitter-sweet, sprinkled with sea salt, delicious, crisp, and crunchy. With—legs? #2 A shallow pond, confined by earthen blue, its steaming surface mirrors timid sticks, not ready yet to dip their tips into and snatch a fish from the intriguing mix. It's time to be audacious! Dive in, plunge, twist, grab, catch, grasp before it slips away and vanishes into the obscure. Lunge! Tart liquid drips from your limp reward.
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Explore various delicacies with me.
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Congratulations on taking the first/second step into a new endeavor! I'm looking forward to the next steps. I really like your definition of life.
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kuchens?
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Way to go, quoting myself, jeez. That happens when you comment when you're tired I'm sorry. What I meant was I already submitted my entries and am tired now.
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I'm done with the antho.
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Depends on the dessert.
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@raven1.
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I'm always looking forward to NaPoWriMo, but this year, due to other commitments, it won't be a poem a day, but some poems, if I may.
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Okay, I wrote slowly slide into....but wow, really wow. Speaking of inspiration.
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Who, me? No, no, no, I have poems and chapters to complete....
