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  1. Aditus

    Lessons & Lectures

    Well, there has been some, I always try to sprinkle humor over the chapters, you've been too creeped out to notice would be perfect in my books.
  2. Or, he was too hungry to resist. On the other hand, Kavan is pretty.
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    Threespirit

    As soon I have time I'll write the next chapter, it's going to be um... nicer. I didn't realize what I did to the poor wolf, before you mentioned it.
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    Flying Lessons

    So sorry --- not. Dragons are a tough species.
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    Moon Festival

    That's surprising, an interesting reaction. Cool. I'm going to add chapters whenever I have an idea. I'm happy you found the story, Dan.
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    Threespirit

    I wrote the first chapter in 2021, it was meant to become an anthology story, but alas, too many ideas jumped around in my head. I expanded the first chapter in January 2022. Due to the fact I'm writing in my second language my stories tend to be on the shorter side, this, and I'm too impatient to spin epic stories. I write series if I have to say more. This time, everything could be developed into a world.
  7. Let's see: 1. scrambled. 2. At the moment Inherited by lomax61. The writing is very good, it's thrilling and I love Tuscany. 3. @Lisa introduced me to the site. 4. To Muddle Through 5. French Onion Soup. I have to think about those questions.
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    Threespirit

    Yep. One doesn't have to read both stories, it's just the same world.
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    Threespirit

    I do what I can, it's fun to think of snippets of their life.
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    Threespirit

    Thank you, Terry. Actually I'm currently writing the last chapters of the sister story, The Cat Burglar. I did like the revelation that Gramps/Dad is a very special three spirit. Are we ever going to know his name? I had fun with not telling the wolf's name, but I think we might get to know his name soon.
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    Sharp Shorts

    It's a collection of very short stories, with Claws and Paws there will be randomly added glimpses at their life until I have time for a longer story. realized that I have already read the first two chapters. Well, there were a few months between the first two chapters and chapter three, so totally understandable. I'm a little busy with the sister story right now.
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    Threespirit

    Flying was addictive. Gaining or maintaining altitude using thermals, then slowly gliding downward, only to catch another one and do everything again and again is thrilling. Tiryrth had warned me when he showed me how to recognize upwind. Soaring could let you forget everything; even make you ignore obvious signs of exhaustion. I overdid it. My muscles screamed at me at the top of their lungs; everything hurt. Where is the landing platform of the eyrie? There! Thrusting my legs forward, I g
  13. Welcome 85davis!I hope the next chapters can hold your attention.
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    Adjustments

    No, she's a bulldozer. I look forward to their continued development,
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    @drsawzall Dr Clark, an enigma that should be wrapped in bacon and fed to wild pigs...what poetic justice it would be... You meant their father... I thought the other Dr. Clark...Nathan. Sorry.
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    I am not sure Dr. Clark is to blame, and maybe the boys will need to hear his side before making judgements. They should definitely hear his side. I am looking forward to the meeting with Caspian Next chapter... Grandpa Munster was known as a vampire scientist! Why not Nathan? Exactly. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far, Terry.
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    Haha-ha, that's perfect! ...storm coming their way from the mystery Asian. Oh yes, she's a very special creature *chuckle* As always, wonderful writing, superb storyline...Captivating Chapter Thank you very much, Onim. *bows*
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    Yup. *rubs hands* I have to scatter my mysteries over three books. Kavan needs to learn when to be silent or at least respectful. Don't hold your breath. I did find the Legate interesting when he came to take Mother; we need to know more about him. There will be more. I loved your comment and in a few weeks you'll find out why.
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    I think we all enthusiastically agree on this. I can't tell you how happy me all those questions make. Thank you so much!
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    If you remember chapter 2: I: ...You got caught. They held you captive and purposefully starved you for weeks until your hunger was so great you were close to losing control. Then they let you escape near the beach in the hope you’d succumb to blood frenzy and slaughter some of those drunken frat boys ... II: Konstantin wasn’t the mindless killer, the bloodthirsty monster I thought. On the contrary, with unparalleled control over his hunger, he managed not to give in to his baser instincts and cause a massacre among my brothers and friends. He had only killed one, me. And to make up for it he turned me and gave me my second life, not that I had been happy about that, but one might think it was the lesser evil. The only way to avoid a massacre, was to kill/turn Kavan. Due to his condition (which wasn't exactly his fault) he wasn't able to ask for Kavan's consent, to find his One Childe could be understood as approval of his actions by the fates (but that's my own opinion). II: Simone however, wasn’t done. Smiling, she ripped out Konstantin’s claws with her bare fingers. He barely reacted. “That’s for turning a human without his consent.” He has been punished for turning Kavan without his consent, rightly or not you is for you to choose and probably Caspian as it's his rule not to turning humans without their consent, it's not a general vampire rule. Lord Caspian is an idiot not to remove the squabbling threat thy poise to him and everyone else. if he lets' them live, then he deserves what the fates may befall him... Well, let's see what the fates have in store for him in the next chapters. Dr Clark, an enigma that should be wrapped in bacon and fed to wild pigs ...what poetic justice it would be... I'm not sure what you mean by this statement. Thank you for this great comment drsawzall! I hope I could answer at least some of your questions. I don't want to/ can't answer your questions regarding to future events, naturally.
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    LOL. I was hoping the Newly Turned Brothers might start showing a new Gift perhaps Patience ...every brother will get his own story. To be honest, I have to be patient too. I want to blurt out everything at once. As for their Father he might of been turned by an Asian Werewolf? Oh, I love this idea--- Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Johnny! ~Addy
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    When I noticed Ry’s blood on my shirt, I freaked even though I knew he was safe in Doc’s lab getting a transfusion of my blood. I had to get rid of the stains; it felt like they burned my skin. Doc and Konstantin shook their heads at me when I ran out of the ward. The doorbell rang on the way back to the lab from my room, where I’d changed into a fresh shirt. I looked around, wondering where the guards were. No one was around to answer it. When I got closer, an overwhelming urge to open th
  23. Scary pumpkins, phew.
  24. He garmbles.
  25. I'm channeling my inner Ash here.
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