Aditus
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Yes, and I still didn't finish this story. It's on the list though. Usually I finish my stories, but at the time I started this one I was still writing another and had to learn about myself that I can't write two stories at the same time. The long-term-hold really bugs me.
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Nope, to keep it exciting...did it work?
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I find this very relatable. This is great praise for this author. There might a autobiographic touch here, including the shirt change.
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Love is patient… Perfect. Thank you for reading the entire series, Dan, I'm glas you liked the conclusion.
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Great! Mission accomplished.
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I'm glad you feel so, thank you for reading the series and for sharing your thoughts, Dan.
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I love you can feel it simmering.
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Thank you, Dan, this story belongs to the first stories I wrote for GA, I'm glad it still gets this reaction.
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@Dr. John NYC Love the shadow merging/dancing gift Thank you, I'm glad. This gift certainly gives new insight into the title of the story and Kavan's (presumed) future profession. Absolutely. it will be interesting to see how parallel the gifts are across the three stories. I'm not familiar with their 'shadow' concept' so you have to tell me all about your research. What I can tell you, is that this story was inspired by multiple Pen&Paper games and the Dungeon & Dragons universe. One of my characters will appear in this story and maybe have their own story eventually. In this series everything 'shadow' will be used to hide (I think). Thank you for this great comment.
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I always thought it's the most fitting name for a cat. I think the need triggered it. The Tavern was an interesting way to introduce the fact that this universe not strictly for vampires only. Thank you! I'm sure I'll play with setting every now and again. Nope definitely not for vampires only. I hope to include this series in a world called Species so there might be stories of many other paranormal species for example. Thank you for following the story, Terry, even though 'paranormal' isn't usually your thing.
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Good catch! Thank you for your comment, VBlew. LOL, nope.
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Featured Story: Boundaries: An Old West Tale
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Well, I usually don't read Westerns, only Gary's, this one is special, and I couldn't wait to finally be able to read it. Now I'm thinking about vampire Westerns....nah.- 13 comments
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I'm glad you think so. I hope you understand I can't answer your very good questions.
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Let's hope Kavan is able to pull this off. Fingers crossed. Konstantin is powerful and dangerous, so much I can say. Thank you, for reading the second chapter and sharing your thoughts.
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@Geemeedee And why hasn’t Kavan asked Konstantin yet about why he submits to Mother’s will? I think he's still a bit shy, and he doesn't know yet how to handle their relationship, how to handle a vampire sire. He will come around and ask eventually. And what was Konstantin sent out with Simone to do? She's a bitch and enjoys to be able to order him around. Why he doesn’t just go join the Delacours? Maybe they don't want him? The Tavern seems like a cool place. Great for moving all sorts of plots along. Thank you for your detailed comment. Oh, and in my head it's Ka-Vahn.
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@scrubber6620 He is not a killer --or rather does not want to be one. Give him time and a need to survive. So, you think he'll become a killer if necessary? Why? I mean, you could be totally right. Thank you for commenting, scrubber6620. You're right he could get more gifts, to be honest I had an idea yesterday....
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@Parker Owens, it was important for me, that Kavan isn't an insta-vampire but has to grow and mature. Mother...oh well she is a real pest and will be for a time. Thank you for commenting on the chapter, Parker.
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I think he was watching his brothers, you're right. he needs to be very careful! Mother, Simone, and Warren would kill or torture his brothers if they found out. Absolutely I'm glad you like Kavan's gift, I wanted something a little unusual for him. Thank you for your comment, Kris.
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WOW, had someone recommend this and so glad they did. Me too. Loved the first chapter and how it started out..Sucked you right in; LOL... Thank you for telling me. The first chapter is always a little difficult.
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Once again, I leaned against one of the kitchen countertops and watched Maria hurrying around the kitchen. “Mother is in a very bad mood. She almost killed her favorite blood slave because she wore a turtleneck sweater,” she whispered while she took a soup bowl from the cupboard beside me, making a lot more noise than necessary so no one would be able to overhear her. “We first thought it was because her plan to make you kill Martin during the initiation ceremony bombed, but there are other thin
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Making people sad with a story isn't principally a bad thing, on the contrary, it means the story was well written and your readers could be empathetic, be your characters: when they were happy the reader was happy, when they were sad or upset, the reader was. So, if you want to be the bad boy you have to write a bad story.
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I waited to read this story until I was in the mood for a sad, touching story that would stay in my mind. Thank you for telling their story.
