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Chapter 3 What Goes Around Comes Around
joann414 commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 3 What Goes Around Comes Around
The more you write, the easier your words flow. I am enjoying Hunter's story so much. He's finally found a home. I'm sure MIke will cause trouble, but at least Hunter know someone has his back now. Now, for the meeting with the other hands.! -
Chapter 2 Hunter and Mike
joann414 commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 2 Hunter and Mike
There's always a snitch somewhere in the crowd and looks like it is douchebag Mike. Good job Zandra! -
Prompt 251 - They're real
joann414 commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Prompt 251 - They're real
LMAO. That was funny as hell, and the conversation between Ramie and Topher was hysterical. Vampire twinks and bitches. What more could you ask for? lol -
Payback is hell on wheels, especially here. Great work.
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Crying like a damn baby. You are definitely a great writer. Your characters have made a place in my heart
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Good grief. Being that young with so many issues has to be tough as hell. You are a wonderful storyteller.
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I forgot how hear twrenching this story is. Damn
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Beautiful!
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That "almost" made my heart hurt. sheesh, now I know why I was so hooked on your writing.
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Men and sex. What makes them think it moves mountains, and heals the terminally ill? Never understand:P
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Wow, going without Matt? Don't know if that is good or not. Guess you will let us know
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It's funny how at one precise moment in life, you soul recognises its counterpart.
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Two good gifts, one great friend! Loved the chapter!
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Red hair huh? Pfffff. Pure lust I think Matt is more intune with feelings than Andy. Just saying:)
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MMMM, I dated a younger guy one time. Once only. Not fo me at all. Andy sounds pretty mature for his age tho, or maybe Staci likes his sweet looks
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Can't imagine a wet cloth cleaning smell and all Things should get interesting now
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Curiousity killed the cat. Not in this case. It fueled the fires of youth
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Wouldn't be wonderful if we had more people that thought like Matt today?
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It's funny how some childhood bonds stay forever. Your a very powerful emotion writer.
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I'd forgotten what a powerful prologue that started your story. So, glad I am re-reading!
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Yeah, but I feel like this is a "we are ok" cliffhanger. I am enjoying this so much Andy. thanx
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"Preens" Loved the party Big Boy. You need to control your friend tho. MIchael did no wrong here. But, you shouldn't have volunteered the place that you and Michael are in your relationship. Screw Ian. Not literally. You are moving right along here, and I love it!
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Chapter 1 Hunter has a new life
joann414 commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 1 Hunter has a new life
Good start. You've a nice plot and interesting set of characters so far. -
Chapter Seventeen: Leia Again
joann414 commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter Seventeen: Leia Again
Good Grief! You did not just do that! "bangs head against wall" Beats you with fly swatter while you run round and round the house. Needless to say, I am tired as hell, but will definitely continue the journey of these great characters. What an enthralling read! -
Chapter Sixteen: Recuperations
joann414 commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter Sixteen: Recuperations
Why do I think Leia is living thru Alexis? So much mystery.
