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    Unrequited

    joann414 commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Unrequited

    What a frigging mess. a freaking friggin mess.
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    Reciprocity

    joann414 commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Reciprocity

    Anthony has clothes hangers stuck up his ass he is so far in the closet. Sheesh. He is quite the character here.
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    Propositions

    joann414 commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Propositions

    Anthony is one wierd guy. Poor Samuel ls so enthralled with him tho, and I am afraid he is going to do what Anthony asked. Of course, Anthonly will not be the one to suffer.
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    Emily Mancini

    joann414 commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Emily Mancini

    Em is quite the little tease! Poor Samuel was at a loss until Anthony showed up. Now, I wonder what sill happen Saturday.
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    First Time

    joann414 commented on CassieQ's story chapter in First Time

    Man, am I glad I stumbled onto this. What a dramatic chapter. Anthony is very adamant in everything he does. I think people do things he wants without even knowing it. Poor Samuel was had before he knew it. Anthony also seems to have a strong hold on his sister. Great job
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    Chapter 3

    joann414 commented on Rosenkrantz's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Awww, Logan was so dang sweet and he finally kissed him.. I loved the talk about the movies. This was a great chapter, and you capture Ryan's nervousness and emotions perfectly. Great job!
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    This looks very promising. More please!
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    Chapter 6

    joann414 commented on LJH's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Sorry I am out of likes because this is such a great chapter. I don't think Colton is as weak as Jack seems to think. Richard is not a slouch himself. He did not go to pieces when they guy stood there holding a gun to his son's head. No, I just wonder who is there to rescue Jack. Guess I will have to wait until the next chapter to find out. Nothing is more dangerous than a woman with a gun, even tho she only killed hit one, that is one they don't have to deal with later. Something tells me she is not going to be an easy one to make talk either since she was once an officer of the law. Great job
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    I am so glad that you decided to continue your writing, but more so because I am enjoying it so much. It was just coincidence that I saw your post about whether or not to continue, and that is when I started reading. I am caught up now, waiting......
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    Had to laugh about the controllers losing themselves in the films and forget about checking on their money. You children all seemed to have lived a very colorful and enriched life also. Family is the real fortune you make for yourself in lfie.
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    How sad when your friends and employess betray your trust in business and otherwise. But, the films industry, be that what it may (porn) kept things going for you. So, all was not hopeless.
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    So much happening at one time, and one person trying to be the overseer of both. You had to have been exhausted daily with all of your other shenanigans also. I have actually seen the older version of The Last of the Mohicans, and it is indeed dull. Your taste in film is much more fascinating!
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    Beautiful home, but as we all know, a lot of life's hard learned lessons are cloaked in beauty. It's fascinating to see how you can see regrets and learn from what happened to you.
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    Saying you have had a full life thus far is by far an understatement. It seems you have done what ten men would do in a lifetime, dividing your work between them. So many accomplishments.
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    How sad to see a parent sink into a depression and lose so much that he had work for in life. The monetary part is not the primary loss, but the loss of something he worked so hard to achieve.
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    Pure honesty is wonderful. You are a great storyteller.
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    Wow, what a great chapter. Talk about moving forward!
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    Chapter 1

    joann414 commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I love Second Shot, but I am holding my opinion here. Second Shot stands alone as a great read, and I am by no means criticising. JMO. but I will certainly continue reading.
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    How sad to lose to of your children at such a young age. You have a wonderful and may I say colorful family. I am sure there was never a dull moment in you and your wife's lives. Great chapter
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    It is hard to imagine all of these things happening in my lifetime. I guess I just never stop to think what is happening in other countries day to day. Can't blame the wife. Family is very important!
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    I guess a factory and it's workings were about the same everywhere during that time. The poor workers and the production they expected. I am amazed at the different things that you were caught up in and expected to do. More amazing is the fact that you did them.
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    Well, seems you made quite the impression on the wife. I love the thought of hitch hiking but know it is not possible today.
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    Chapter 5

    joann414 commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 5

    This gets more and more intriguins, and the seer makes it even more so. Also love the little undercurrents between Adam and Steve. Great job
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    I am so glad I chose to read this. You think you know so much sometimes, and you read a work like this and see how wrong you are!
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    Chapter 1 : Prelude

    joann414 commented on old bob's story chapter in Chapter 1 : Prelude

    Fascinating!
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