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Edward has changed in the solitude in which he is living, but once he is released, will it be so? Kinda like being scared of the dark, but you feel like all will be ok in daylight. His emotions are as dark as his dwellings, and I have to wonder if they can change to the point of your title.
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I knew Ronny could not keep this a secret but never dreamed he would blurt it out to his father after he seemed to not have a problem with his brother loving Tyler. But, I guess you had to slap us with this all of a sudden huh? Good move. Loved the chapter!
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If he keeps Edwards actions out of his journal now, he is not human Even the most introverted person would have a hard time keeping such things to himself if it is but just to keep a record of them for later use Funny how the cat more or less lead him to his brother and the kitchen boy. Black cats are said to be bad luck and in this case it looks that way for Edward Things are getting more and more interesting here, even for our bored, disinterested, main character I would say
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Ronny is unsure, sure, and unhappy with life it seems. He is certain of his love for his mother, unsure of his feelings for his brother and unhappy to be at this place in his life. What a complex character and your writing was very descriptive in his appreciation or non-appreciation of all of this. I agree that some may have found this to be moving slow, but you pretty much said so in your descriptions of your chapter. I like it!
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I was wondering the same as character. He gets passing out drunk in the city all the time? Love how you throw a little humor in tho. " are you ready to go home dear?" lol One little criticism tho, TOO DANG SHORT! Enjoying very much!!!!!
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You writing is very entertaining. Love this. lol
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I have also gotten hooked on this story. Now I wait on it everyday. So glad they they are becoming friends again and Micah is not feeling uneasy about their relationship after what happened the last time they saw each other as teens. For some reason I think the music will be a bond between the two. Thanks or another great chapter
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This is a very good story Sid. Temptation is rearing it's head! Great chapter
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Chapter 2 : Hello, Mr. Attractive!
joann414 commented on SidLove's story chapter in Chapter 2 : Hello, Mr. Attractive!
Looks like Justin has an unwanted admirer. Rose is very sweet. So, Mr. mayer has arrived! -
Don't know how missed this, but it is always nice finding a great read to start your week off to a good beginning.
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Poor San. I am sure he was feeling like an un-needed spoke in the wheel. But, Chen gave him a little insight and hopefully he will take it to heart and learn hot to get Ziyu's attention and eventually affections. Great chapter as always girl!
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Wow, why does Arnai(spelling?) have such an affect on Siggi? Siggi is self-destructive and Dmitri can't control it obviously. What is going on? Anger can make you do a lot of things and Siggi is a prime example. So sad! Riveting chapter!
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The scene between Jo and Gunni was beautiful, Jo's caring touches encouraging Gunni to talk was so easy to imagine. Thanks for another great chapter!
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I can understand why Gunni's mom wanted him to life with Jo and Eri. Jo is a wonderful nurturing person and Eri is very supportive and affectionate also. Gunni will have wonderful guidance. It's nice to know that it was Gunni's mom that supported and was there for Eri during the time he was learning to accept and be himself.
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"psychopath cat", funny as hell. I enjoyed this chapter immensely. Isaac seems like a great young man. I'm with Lisa on Siggi. Who is he jealous of and why does he refuse to look at Gunni or talk to him? Jo is such a good person and I can totally see why Eri loves him despite his mom.
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Wow, the roomies are quite the bunch huh? Bet things never get dull there. No wonder they didn't care if they missed the party. they knew they could make one of their own I feel that Dmitri the bastard caught Gunni unaware with his onslaught of sex. Looks like Gunni has found a friend in Isaak. Loving this story more and more. Great work!
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Margret is a piece of work. If she loves her son so much, how can be oblivious to his sexuality? And to attack Gunni with her bitchiness was way out of line. So glad the guys were there to support Gunni and tried to help him understand all that is going on around him. Very intense chapter
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Ironic that Siggi calls Dmitri a bastard when he is one himself. Dmitri seems to know what Siggi needs when he is stressed out. anxious to see what happens at the dinner.
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Eiri seems like a very good person and Jo quite the entertaining character. They are both making Gunni feel so welcome and comfortable in their home. Siggi is quite the ass isn't he. Can't wait to see what happens at dinner.
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Have a feeling Gunni and Siggi are going to mix like oil and water. I am pretty curious about the cousi tho. Really enjoying your story
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Micah is such an introvert right now. i hope he will become friends with David again. (after the crabs are gone. lol) Travis doesn't seem very attractive as a person. Now the sexual side is probably gone for David also after this last experience. Hopefully things will get better for Micah and David after their encounter.
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Such a sad aura to this chapter but sometimes when a young person is at this place in his life there is neither joy nor sadness, just acceptance of the place they are in. I hope he chooses and accomplishes the mission of finding a job involving his music and is a success. Music will always be a part of him and the fact that he would play when his mother wasn't around says a lot. Enjoying this story so much
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You made me cry! Nuff said!
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You haven't posted the sequel yet? lol This was hot! Great little encounter here
