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I love this. Your characters were so introduced in a very good way, and all of the animals are right up my alley. Looks like an interesting ride, and I will definitely be following your story. So hurry up already!
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I wonder if Corbin was actually fucking Lee, or everybody else that he felt had fucked him over lately. (did not know any other way to say that) Lee is so messed up and I am afraid messing up his girlfriend's life if she stays on for the ride. Well, I would never have dreamed that Mike was going to be the one that was going to be hurting. He has almost come full circle yet out beloved Pete can't seem to move out of one spot. Great writing! Love this chapter
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Well, this is more interesting. Michael and Daniel as partners? Can't wait for this! Sam seems to have issues at home and Mark the wanna be fixer. They seem to be great friends. So what secret does Mark know about Sam? Your story is certainly shaping up well!
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I for one can't wait for the 4th of July family get together. It should be quite interesting. Joshua has turned Alexi into a much more mature, and self assured men, and did I mention insatiable? lol But I do feel that Alexi should sign the papers against Adrian, for safety purposes. Great chapter girl. Waiting for more. Please?????
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Love the thought of Ryo holding Soubi's shoes hostage to persuade Soubi to move into his room. lol If Soubi had been a women, it probably would have worked. lol Ryo's brother acts like he is very selfish and unconcerned what his actions could mean for others that he uses to his own advantage. So glad Soubi is not going to work for Rin and that he and Ryo are far along enough with each other not to stay in a snit all day after a disagreement. Curious about Soubi's writing. Maybe it is an outlet that he can make a living from instead of modeling. As always, great writing!
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Dang, Mama's got a gun! :battleaxe: Don't mess with Mama, but Colton better get the heck out of town. Someone has definitely told the cops something and he certainly needs to find Jack before Paul makes good on his promise. Have to say, this was a very enlightening chapter, but too dang short. Now I will be checking everyday to see when you post. Great job!
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Poor Meghan, but I think the double date is a great idea. But I am totally curious about the roommate. The lifeguard was quite a surprise! lol
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Wow, I can sympathise with Kailto. It hurts your heart when you see something change that you have grown up with and identified with all of your life. Soubi was sweet trying to cheer him up and take his mind off of it. Ryo is such a great person, not only looking out for his friends, but trying to look out for their friends also. I wonder what Ryo's reaction is going to be when he finds out what Rin wants Soubi to do. Enjoying this story so much!
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Sheesh, poor Soubi, first the ranting hag of a mother, and then Rin shows up at just the wrong time. Hopefully with Ryo there, Rin will not bully, or make Soubi do things that he does not want to. I hate the way that Rin just pops in and says he wants to talk. On to next chapter!
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They were both so cute being jealous of each other, and it ended in make-up sex. Perfect! Now, if only Rin will keep his distance, but of course, I know better than that. Loving this girl!
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Have no idea why you were nervous about writing the sex. It was perfect. You captured their emotions and feelings in a beautiful way girl. I am so glad they are going to be honest with each other, ESPECIALLY since Rin is coming back to town. Damn him! Just when Soubi and Ryo were finding their way to each other in so many special ways. Great job!!!
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I agree with Lisa. Daniel needs to lighten up a little. He is in college and more or less an adult, so act like one for pete's sake. Something tells me that Sam will loosen him up a bit tho. lol Love the beginning with Sam crawling in bed with Daniel. Funny as hell, and I can so see that happening in a guys dorm. Great start, and can't wait for an updayt. Good job!
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Wow, I think Ben was pretty childish, not even giving on little bit. I think if I was Patrick, I would have to let him stew a little. Jeff seems like such a nice guy and I hate that Patrick had to leave him like that. Life is a bitch sometimes, and poor Jeff seems the victim, sadly. I still feel that the Rob deal is not resolved. If I were spending the weekend with someone and they received a call like that, I would not be as quick as Patrick to forgive, and especially push others(like Jeff) aside. Oh well, forever a little untrusting me. lol Wonderful chapter! Thanx I hate that I am caught up with your story. Was just getting settled in like reading a good book:P
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I find Jeff intriguing. The impulsive kiss, and then he remembers the ticket for Patrick puts him in a little better light than what I have Ben right now. I have a few trust issues with Ben right now even tho he gave somewhat believable explanations about the phone call. Of course I am a little old fashioned and always think"where's there's smoke, there's fire." Ben was also a little overwhelming talking about his son and the game and also Annie, trying to sway Patrick. JMO On to the next chapter,, and so glad to see all of your writing:)
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Chapter 12 The Final Act...
joann414 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 The Final Act...
Sweet, sweet ending to a wonderful story girl. Hope you have something else in your bag of tricks! thanks for such a great ride. -
Chapter 11 The Things We Do For Love...
joann414 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 The Things We Do For Love...
Wow, we will see if love prevails with all here. If Simon is not being genuine in his deal, then we know not. Great chapter girl! -
Some things are meant to be, some not, and Corbin has to work out his night with Mike. Should it have happened or not, and was it just sex for Mike experimenting? Hard to tell at this point. I think Corbin needs to think long and hard about his sex life and a lot about his love for Pete. Sex with Mike is not going to solve anything but frustrations. Great chapter as always!
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Well, the friends issue has been dealt with, now what about the love issue? I kind of feel myself feeling sorry for Mike now. lol..After all, he took the plunge and kissed Corbin trying to make him feel better. Great chapter. Row on!
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Wow, great chapter. First, Zune's mom should be called the Protection Mom. lol but that is smart! What the hell happened to Kev when the jerks accosted Zune. Gotta say tho, I felt that Edward was the one rescuing him, and the first kiss was with Edward. What a tangled web you weave. Great writing guy!
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I felt a little more than arrogance from Mr. Arrogance. Edward, I think really wants a friendship with Zune. I love Becca, but I always love to have a fiesty female thrown into the mix. Kev might need to keep his radar tuned. lol
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Glad to see that Colton gave Jack the benefit of a doubt by deciding to read the whole notebook before drawing conclusions. But looks as if he is going to have to wait awhile for his answers. Seems things are fixing to get pretty interesting. Great job Louis!
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Somehow missed this chapter, but catching up now! Zune better behonest about everything to Kev soon. Edward painting the pic of Zune opens a whole new can of worms here, and makes life a little more interesting for Zune, and confusing. Edward's mom need a little more courage and I hope Zune helps her along if he can. Now I have once more chapter and I will be all caught up. Better and better. Good job!
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Very light hearted and entertaining. Looking forward to more.
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It's wierd. When I went to click the "like"button, I hesitated. It was not because your writing did not deserve it. I guess it was the content. It is wierd how the human mind construes things huh? Living our daily lives is not what we all want, and I have always believed,"expect the unexpected", but these lives taken out of pure violence that was so uncalled for is a tradedy that will never be forgotten. I think all stories, good or bad, offering peace or violence deserve to be told. After all, this world has a lot of scars that are the results of acts of violence and hatred by the human hand. End of rant. Emotion provoking story Louis and again, great writing!
