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Not only a bitch, but an insane bitch. and controls her boyfriend to the point of making him try to hurt or kill someone. HOpe Gibby and his dad find Tanner. Still curious as to what Tanner visited the principal office for. ( runs to next chapter)

So, he threw the game for nothing, and ironically, the bitch was the one to tell him. Stupid is as stupid does I say. Tanner and Gibby finally had a few minutes to themselves. Great chapter

Wow, love of your country makes a person stronger, self assured, and shows your loyalty to the roots that pushed you into this crazy world. Beautiful, Rob

Do you mean " piss your time away james?" lol

I saw the vid on this, and was shocked. She took it all in stride tho. LOL

Well, I could just quote Rockyroad's list adding one more to the list, " Summertime" Billy Holiday

Wow , lacey. certainly hope you feel better, and perk up. Hugs. Jo ann

The more the witch bitch stirs, the more her brew stinks, and affects others. I feel so bad for Tanner, and hope that somehow this will be the beginning of a friendship for him and Gibby. As for Amanda, ( spins her head with a slap),. maybe someone will do something really getting her attention, and back her into the corner about things she is hiding and blackmailing others with. Good job!

Wow, Amanda is even a bitch to her boyfriend. That's interesting. As for the interaction between her and her daddy, i was so glad Gibby took his hoodie off. It took a lot of courage, but gained him a lot of self respect, and showed Amanda that she did not intimidate him.( nor Tanner) thankfully. Another great one KC

Bitch slapped is not the beginning of what I would like to do to Amanda. I would like to set her broom on fire while she was riding it. The great thing is Tanner being Gibby's lab partner. I am so glad you made Gibby so intelligent. Twice cooked spaghetti sounds awesome. Is there such a thing? sounds yummy. Great chapter, and I am so glad I waited for the completion to read this/ Fun, fun

The mean remark about burnt meat is so typical of teenagers, especially toward a new person. Tanner seems nice, and the jury is still out on the twins. i don't feel that they are going to be as bad as the remark for some reason. Love Shelby. I always say a guy should always have a best friend in a girl, and vice versa. Still curious about the cop's daughter, wondering what her story is besides being Ms. Bitch's follower. Another great chapter.

Well, a classic first day at school. Loved the young lady being embarassed by her father, Gibby meets Ms. Bitch, Amanda, and dad insists on delivering his baby safely. Loving this read. Can't wait to see how other characters unfold,, and who Gibby actually interacts with first as a friend

Well Gibby is going to have a big adjustment, but I feel he is going to pass with flying colors. He seems like a very strong young man, and has a very supportive father in Johnathan. Read the first chapter while ago, and loved it. Waited for you to finish to read. lol. I will not be offended if you don't respond to all of my reviews. It is a habit with me to review each chapter of what I read, and when I read a completed story, I pretty well stick to it, and this one looks like it is definitely a great read for today, and my day off tomorrow. lol GREat writing guy!

Mark, can so appreciate the fact that you want to spend time with Stuby. Never take time with your loved ones for granted. Hope things go better for you this time. Everyone here is so supportive, and we are here when you need or want to just vent. Hope everyone else has a great weekend. Hugs

I feel ashamed sometimes. I watched the storm Isaac for days, moaned and complained about the inconvenience, extra work, yada, yada yada. Yes, we had downed trees( had to cut one to step off of our deck, and two more to get to work). We had no power for twenty-four hours. and was very easy on the water, because we are on a well. But you know what? I was not clinging to the roof of my house waiting for someone to come and get me. I did not have to leave my pets and belongins just to save myself. My power is restored, and I have put it all behind me when the folks south of me in New Orleans, are still trying to get power, be rescued, and find a place to stay. So, the next time, I am going to think twice before I bitch and moan. I was very lucky. An example of the effect on others: My hubby and I went to the grocery store Wednesday afternoon. We just grabbed, beer, sandwich fixings, and other easy snacks. There was a lady and two children checking out in front of us. She had a gallon of water, bologna, loaf of bread, and a bag of cheap chips. One of the children said," You said we could have cinnamon rolls." The lady went and put the cinnamon rolls on the counter. She was two dollars and some odd cents short. My hubby tapped the children on the shoulder and said, " go get whatever else you want. They excitedly piled a bunch of chips, candy, soda, etc. on the counter. The total was still on thirty dollars or so. We paid for it. The woman hugged me and Jimmy, and was crying. She wanted our address. I told her no. no thanks needed. Just pass it on one day. She said" i promise I will do that." You know what" I believe her, and I am thankful just to be me, neither over abundanced or under. I am just able to give a little to ease someone else's needs. Hugs all

Smacks Adrian upside the head, and hugs Lily for trying to make things better. Nope, you are going to give us a great dinner story. I can feel it. I was so excited to see an update so soon. Great job with this story. Thank u:

When I was young, until I was around 10. I was called Shadow, because I was shy and would always stand behind my dad.

I was so friggin excited when I saw this. Was going to save it for weekend reading, and could not stand it. LOL. Kaleb and Chase are back with grown kiddos. Kaleb is still so sweet, and loves Chase unconditionally, and yet to realise that Chase loves him as much in return. "Busted". Laughed out loud when I read that. This is so light, but so entertaining. Can't wait for more antics with the guys, and their children.

A great job with the prompt, tho sad and dark. I knew something bad was going to happen, but not two of his loved ones taken from him.

Ticks are horrible where I live. It is very expensive to keep the medicine on my pets, but I do because of what any tick can do to them. But, this makes me not want to even walk in the grass or in the woods around my home. Pretty damn scary.

What a beautiful story Podga. Thank u!

Dang Rob, after seeing that, I think I"M going to look for Molly also. lmao

Wow, what a great read. Thank u

I sure hope you are going to fix this. One helluva mess. lol Love your writing!

Another jewel. I can't believe I have missed this great book. Thanks