joann414
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Well, you just made me cry. Loving this story.
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Beautiul, beautiful ending, and beautiful story. So glad this story was featured so I could be introduced to this wonderful piece of work.
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Had to stop here and say that I love Andrew's mom. Also, so proud of Will for not cowering, and taking on the English airs. Love this
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Chapter #8 - The Mistakes we make (Cont)
joann414 commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #8 - The Mistakes we make (Cont)
I can understand a youngster's being curious, but I disagree with the older guys taking advantage of them, and Jacob was right in taking up for them. Also, I don't blame Jacob for not wanting anyone pawing around on his man. Can't make up my mind who my fav character is yet. Kinda leaning, but not ready to commit. You did an average job on this chapter kiddo! Just kidding. It was great! -
That was just wow! I mean WOW!
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This was a very good chapter. Laughed a couple of times, and loved the encounter with the teacher! lol
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That was such a sweet and romantic chapter, with the lttle bit of humor thrown in at the end.
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This keeps getting better and better. Thanx
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Dang it, u even made me tear up. The guys are so scared. You are doing a great job here.
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Poor Will and Andrew, first discovering feelings they aren't sure of, and then having to deal with being seen before they gets a chance to figure it out. AWWW, I felt for both of them here. You wrote their emotions perfectly. Thanx
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So glad the guys were ok, and took this time to get to know each other. This was another good part, but wow, Jackie is a bitch with a capital B. lol. Ooh, Will is a sweetie to the baby. Makes me love him more. At least he does not have the cold nature of his father. I will hush how. On to next chapter
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Sorry I forgot to review the first chapter, because I was so impatient to get to the next. I am really liking this story. So glad to see that u are writing again. Thanx
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So glad you decided to share this. Fleety has been telling me about some of your stories, so when I saw this new one, I decided to dive in, and so glad that I did. First person pov makes for a great short one like this, and a great job it is.
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Never hit him with a ten pound hammer, but in our couple of years of storm filled marriage, I hit him with a mag light . LOL I found this dark, but very believable. I always wondered what possesses anyone to tel their lover that he wanted out, and then smeared it even worse with the " there's someone else". Had a hard time choosing what to read first Louis. This one was my second of yours this morning, and they were so different. Loved both of them!
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Short and sweet, and I absolutely loved it!
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Great start. The title grabbed me because I could not figure it out until I made the connection with it, and the type of music. lol I like this very much. You write in a very believable, as in making the reader believe in your character way.
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CAught up, with no more to read:(. So glad I found such an exciting storing that now I have to regretfully wait in anticipation for the next chapter. (nudge,nudge). Really great excitement, funny, and the sexual chem between Mitch and Derek is great!
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Well, I feel a little sorry for Jared and all that but DAMN!, I could even feel the heat from Mitch and Derek's embrace outside the bar, and their chemistry is way up there. Great job, and I am so glad that was Mitch in the bar. Loved the chapter and still have another to read
