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You can't blame Jordan for being a little over protective of Drew after all that he as been through, and I am sure it will take time for Luke to earn his trust. I am so glad that they are all a family again, and I can't wait to see where Jordan's storyline goes also. Doing a great job girl!

How awful to have a monster for a father. So glad that Jordan is found, and being returned to his family. Wonder how the family is going to feel about who his doc is though. Drew's dad must really hate him, and he even knows about Luke. Sick people in this world today. Great chapter.

Celethial, and WL, I am in Mississippi, had rain today, relief from the heat, but expect more heat the weekend. Wierd. We went from three digits to eighty degrees. I saw where louis had snow. go figure

Well, now we get to see Jordan's frame of mind, and his reaction to Luke and Drew. Still going strong girl. Thanks

Luke is such a great person, still being there for David. Got to love Rose. everyone wrapped around her finger. lol

NOw I am really curious. The town seems to be turning into a gay mecca. lol

Well, I have already said one chapter was my favorite, but I can say it for two if I want too. It is my review, so I can say what I want. lol This was a very interesting and revealing chapter girl. Gets better and better

So happy that the guys have partners in crime, or should I say in love. Now I am really intrigued as to what the others are fixing to tell. Great chapter.

I almost cried reading this chapter. You write emotions very well. And reading the other comment, I did not see the typos, but I get so involved in the story, i wouldn't see them if they reached out and slapped me. lol

What music do I need Harcallard? I will even throw in dinner and a drink. ( after you put your clothes back on). LOL Hope everyone is looking forward to a great weekend! Hugs

I have decided that you are not capable of writing even a blah line or two, let alone a chapter. That was so great! Made me want to hole up all weekend and watch old romantic movies.

Luke is so evil, teasing Drew. I would have freaked if my mom even thought of having a snake as a pet. lol Love these two guys. Glad I decided to take this trip!

Awwww, I love how they are just settling in, and getting to know each other. Funny when he crawled upon the bed with the golf club. Boys try to be so bad, until they see a snake. LOL

Finally going home. I have a feeling this is fixing to get even more interesting. Great job

Hugs KC. Don't crawl into the bottle, it only numbs the pain and sadness for a short while. My mom passed away at my age. It was unexpected, and devastated my four siblings and I, but we all tried to hold up for my dad. Shamefully, i have to tell you, I have yet to re-visit her grave. All my sibilngs do, but I just can't, and it has been 25 years. My daughter drives over a hundred miles to take flowers for me. Don't know why I can't, I just can't. I have actually made up my mind to go, and at the last minute, I back out. My husband gets a little aggravated, but he does not push. That being said, be proud that you have the strength to go there, and honor your mom with flowers, or just your presence. Cry, but do that outdifr the bottle. If you are going to drink, do it in celebration that you had her in you life for as long as you did. I miss my mom everyday, and the last day of this month, she will be dead 26 years, and it feels like yesterday. Hope you find peace Kc, and happiness!

Smacks you lightly. I was so engrossed in that chapter, I was like," she ended it already?' " Just like that?" Lol. That was the best chapter yet. So glad I did not find this until a lot of it was already posted. Lucky me!

Sheesh, I am getting so bogged down in the story that I am forgetting to comment./ Have to say, I was wondering if either of the boys thought they were gay, and if that was one of the reasons that Drew's daddy hated him. Can't wait for Luke to move in, and see how the two get along as roommates. Another great chapter.

I don't know who to feel bad for Luke, Drew, or Drew's mom. So sad. Great chapter though!

Luke is a hard nut to crack, trying to protect his friends, but I think Drew can do it. If Drew had the guts to punch David, he is not going to give up easily on Luke. Loving the story. Thanx

Saw this story updated today, and out of curiosity, decided to check it out. It amazes me the talent here that you young writers have. I am blown away by this story, and you are doing a great job, in writing and telling your story. Definitely will keep reading. Great work

Happy Birthday Carl. Have a great day!

Well, you definitely have an intricate going here, and I guess you can count me in for the long haul as long as you explain a few things in the next chapter. LOL. really, this is a great story. Thanks

Congrats Benji. I did the same this past year, by telling member by member of my family, but I told my husband first, who was great! Only my sister was very difficult, and still is, but my three brothers, and my daughter were fine also. They all but shrugged it off, and it made me feel ( as far as my brothers), that they suspected anyway. My best friend now is also fine with it, even tho, she gave it a lot of thought, it seems to have brought us even closer. So glad things went good for you!

I find myself hoping that time is the great healer here of John's dad's emotions, and that they will all be a family once again. You wrote feelings and inner struggles here so well, but without such a serious depth that it took from the storyline. This is another great read. Thank you

I love just scanning through all the stories here, and stumbling up on a gem like this one. It was such a sweet lovestory, and I was so hoping it was Craig. Great writing!